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Rainy Days (So Wrong)


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massa

 Genre: Ballad
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Lyrics and Music - byLee
Instruments recorded by massa with GarageBand 08
All vocals recorded by Lightman! (first collab for both of us)
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Lyrics
Part I

When you wake up to a rainy day like this
You think to yourself " Can I be the same?"
and you know you can cause life ain't over.

Just remember that one day the sun will shine
and you'll be again all so fine
life will be Just Like Starting Over

Chorus

But it just keeps running through my mind
how could I have been so wrong in so short time

Part II

One day you wake up so fine
the next one you just want to die
but you know that's life playing tricks on you

So I get up and i tune my guitar
I sing this song it help heal my scars
and I try to survive one more day... or two

And they'll tell you that the best way to live
is to take one day at a time
but you know, you know that that's a lie

They say there's always the next day
and whatever you do they come
"Hey, hey Mister! You've got a debt, you've got a price to pay"

And it just keeps running through my mind... (back to Chorus)
Song Stats
Hits: 984
Comments: 32
Fans: 6
Plays: 116
Downloads: 47
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Feb 18, 2008 - 04:20:21 PM
Last Updated: Dec 20, 2008 - 08:22:46 AM Last Played: Nov 01, 2009 - 12:33:01 PM
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Hardware:
iMac 20" 2.4Ghz
Software:
GarageBand 08
Comments
said 646 days ago (February 18th, 2008)
Wow
Wow... This sounds much better than the demo i've made, with you early backingtrack.....

It's cool.... Thanks for making this collab with me...

Maybe another one sometime?


massa said 646 days ago (February 18th, 2008)
Thanks
Glad you liked it! I'm sure up for another collab whenever you're ready... keep in touch!
Check out my latest song called Song for Collab
Feter said 646 days ago (February 18th, 2008)
Rainy Days
hey this is cool arrangment ...nice rockinballad
here .ye your singing is good specialy when it
went all in harmoney as the keys behind you
good one my friend !
massa said 645 days ago (February 19th, 2008)
Thanks!
Thanks Feter! The vocals were actually recorded by Lightman in collab. Glad you liked it too. Thanks for commenting. I'll check out your songs. All the best!
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ceilidh said 645 days ago (February 19th, 2008)
very nice song
like a lot the melody line and also chosen instruments, the violins sound just fantastic. That guitar tiny solo after mid of the song is truly lovely, would put even more of that there. I am not very keen on that sudden ending of the tune. The sound is too quickly cut off.
A brilliant song Lee, very nice
P.


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massa said 645 days ago (February 19th, 2008)
Thanks!
Hi Paja! Thanks for stopping by and commenting my song. I agree with you about the ending... I was eager to upload and ended up not spending quite any time there... maybe should have used a simple fade out. Best rgds!
Check out my latest song called Song for Collab
said 645 days ago (February 19th, 2008)
Very good.


Hi

Hey ! You two dudes ha ha..

Congradulations to you both.
sounded really good I loved the beat and the lovely rythem the 'Harmony' was sound, it sounded like the two of you were singing together.
i agree though, it ends far to abruptly without warning.


That is the story on most of mine, got to get to grips with that problem ,otherwise this was a ' Fantastic' callab. keep up the really good work guys.

Peace
Dee xx


drakonis said 645 days ago (February 19th, 2008)
cooooool collab!
Nice nice stuff here... I like the Beatles-like sound, nice singing Jakob, and great playing there Massa. Only 2 suggestions... #1 when you sing the chorus 2 times in a row, I sort of wanted the very last note of the second chorus to have a different, and more final-sounding harmony than the first one (if that makes sense)... and #2 the ending of the song is rather abrupt... I hate fade-outs, so don't do that... but perhaps a final few chords while just singing the fragment "how could I have been so wrong... so wrong, so wrong..."? Just an idea...

ttfn,
Drakonis
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said 645 days ago (February 19th, 2008)
Thanks
THanks for your idea to the final of 2nd chorus.... I'll do that, next time i make music.... It's a great idea... Thanks

jakob
massa said 644 days ago (February 20th, 2008)
OK!
Thanks Drakonis. I'll consider both tips next time i work on this song again. regarding the ending, I can repeat the chorus and on the last time just repeat the " in my mind... in my mind..." towards an end. Rgds!
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Nick_Flash said 645 days ago (February 19th, 2008)
nicw
nice collab guys. It's got a nice smooth feel about it.
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said 644 days ago (February 20th, 2008)
Great music
Hi Massa

Very nice work here. Play is exellent and singing is fine to. Nice tunes. Make some more, please ...

NB. I'm happy that a collaboration is made between Brazil and Denmark this way. I was in Brazil for 5 weeks in the year 1998 and is planning to go there again this year. I love Brazil. Especially the people there and the music.

/C.
massa said 644 days ago (February 20th, 2008)
Thanks!
Thanks man! I checked out your songs as well and really liked the guitar playing... nice leads and rhythyms! resembles Pink Floyd, Mettalica... even Jimi himself... the guitar master! I appreciate you commenting my songs. Rgds!
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rsorensen said 644 days ago (February 20th, 2008)
like it
this is pretty good! reminds me of The Verve in a way. Good work everyone.
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massa said 640 days ago (February 24th, 2008)
Thanks!
Thank you for listening! I like The Verve too!
Check out my latest song called Song for Collab
lavalamp said 643 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
Good stuff
Like this one. Good job. The lyrica are really good, too.
LL
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massa said 640 days ago (February 24th, 2008)
Thanks!
I appreciate your comments on the lyrics. Thank you for listening. I'll check out your songs as well. Rgds!
Check out my latest song called Song for Collab
said 643 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
Very nice collab
Great work fabulous production a very lovely song.
KUDOS fellows.

Cheers
---
Kenta
funky28 said 640 days ago (February 24th, 2008)
cool!
liked the soft/paced melody; loved the solo, it blended perfectly with the song/lyrics but I got to say, the ending left me in quite a shock, I was waiting for more... oh well, overall very nice song! keep it up
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massa said 640 days ago (February 24th, 2008)
Thanks!
I will certainly redo the ending of this song... I wasn't happy with it either... but was too eager to upload a new song... thanks for listening and for the feedback. All the best!
Check out my latest song called Song for Collab
Soundhound said 628 days ago (March 7th, 2008)
Rainy Days
Nice work Guy's.... it's Cool when a plan comes together.
And your happy with it.


I.......LIKE IT..........
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massa said 627 days ago (March 8th, 2008)
Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by. Rgds!
Check out my latest song called Song for Collab
dajama said 628 days ago (March 7th, 2008)
Very cool
I like this song a lot. The vocals are great - very good use of harmonies. I like the violin sound, and the use of the acoustic guitar is great (is that nylon strings?). Good lyrics, with some images, and very good mix. I have to agree with ceilidh on the abrupt ending - it kind of took me by surprise! But this is a small point. Very cool. A great collab. I look forward to checking out more of your music.
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massa said 627 days ago (March 8th, 2008)
Thanks! Collab?
Thanks dajama! The guitar has nylon strings.. you're right... i think it suits well this ballad. I will change the ending of this song as soon as i get to it again. It is good that i have these feedbacks! Thanks for listening and taking the time to comment. I checked your songs and liked them as well. I'll send you a note to see if you are into collab. Ciao!
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LiteOneUp- said 625 days ago (March 10th, 2008)
***
Yeah! U guys rock. This song is so chill. Im lite'n one up rite now listenin to it!
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massa said 621 days ago (March 14th, 2008)
Glad you enjoyed!
Thanks for your nice comment. Have a good trip listening to it. Rgds! :)
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davisamerica said 625 days ago (March 10th, 2008)
right then massa
well very nice one here ... dreamy cool tune folks
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massa said 621 days ago (March 14th, 2008)
Thanks...
for listening and giving your comment.
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paralax said 609 days ago (March 26th, 2008)
sweet!!
nice powerful beat great keys the vocals are right on.great mix great harmonies good job.

Terry
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massa said 137 days ago (July 11th, 2009)
Thanks
Thanks for listening and the nice comments.
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bonnieprincejohnny said 608 days ago (March 27th, 2008)
Excellent.
Groovy melody n' production, reminds me of something else which is usually a good sign. Could've maybe done with a bridge but a fine effort nonetheless. Keep on rawkin Massa.
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scaustrita said 150 days ago (June 28th, 2009)
HARMONIES
The vocals are great, nice colab.
The strings at the beginning were overbearing.
Enjoyed the acoustic guitar part.

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