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slow (76), rock (1030), rock'n roll (2), lightman (2)
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Description:
Lyrics and Music - byLee
Instruments recorded by massa with GarageBand 08
All vocals recorded by Lightman! (first collab for both of us)
Lyrics:
Part I
When you wake up to a rainy day like this
You think to yourself " Can I be the same?"
and you know you can cause life ain't over.
Just remember that one day the sun will shine
and you'll be again all so fine
life will be Just Like Starting Over
Chorus
But it just keeps running through my mind
how could I have been so wrong in so short time
Part II
One day you wake up so fine
the next one you just want to die
but you know that's life playing tricks on you
So I get up and i tune my guitar
I sing this song it help heal my scars
and I try to survive one more day... or two
And they'll tell you that the best way to live
is to take one day at a time
but you know, you know that that's a lie
They say there's always the next day
and whatever you do they come
"Hey, hey Mister! You've got a debt, you've got a price to pay"
And it just keeps running through my mind... (back to Chorus)
Hardware:
iMac 20" 2.4Ghz
Software:
GarageBand 08
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Wow &mdash 02/18/08 - 04:29:51 PM
Wow... This sounds much better than the demo i've made, with you early backingtrack.....
It's cool.... Thanks for making this collab with me...
Maybe another one sometime?
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Thanks &mdash 02/18/08 - 05:21:13 PM
Glad you liked it! I'm sure up for another collab whenever you're ready... keep in touch! [ Reply to This ]
Rainy Days &mdash 02/18/08 - 06:52:31 PM
hey this is cool arrangment ...nice rockinballad
here .ye your singing is good specialy when it
went all in harmoney as the keys behind you
good one my friend ! [ Reply to This ]
Thanks! &mdash 02/19/08 - 06:07:22 AM
Thanks Feter! The vocals were actually recorded by Lightman in collab. Glad you liked it too. Thanks for commenting. I'll check out your songs. All the best! [ Reply to This ]
very nice song &mdash 02/19/08 - 06:05:42 AM
like a lot the melody line and also chosen instruments, the violins sound just fantastic. That guitar tiny solo after mid of the song is truly lovely, would put even more of that there. I am not very keen on that sudden ending of the tune. The sound is too quickly cut off.
A brilliant song Lee, very nice
P.
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Thanks! &mdash 02/19/08 - 06:23:54 AM
Hi Paja! Thanks for stopping by and commenting my song. I agree with you about the ending... I was eager to upload and ended up not spending quite any time there... maybe should have used a simple fade out. Best rgds! [ Reply to This ]
Very good. &mdash 02/19/08 - 10:54:57 AM
Hi
Hey ! You two dudes ha ha..
Congradulations to you both.
sounded really good I loved the beat and the lovely rythem the 'Harmony' was sound, it sounded like the two of you were singing together.
i agree though, it ends far to abruptly without warning.
That is the story on most of mine, got to get to grips with that problem ,otherwise this was a ' Fantastic' callab. keep up the really good work guys.
Peace
Dee xx
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cooooool collab! &mdash 02/19/08 - 02:12:51 PM
Nice nice stuff here... I like the Beatles-like sound, nice singing Jakob, and great playing there Massa. Only 2 suggestions... #1 when you sing the chorus 2 times in a row, I sort of wanted the very last note of the second chorus to have a different, and more final-sounding harmony than the first one (if that makes sense)... and #2 the ending of the song is rather abrupt... I hate fade-outs, so don't do that... but perhaps a final few chords while just singing the fragment "how could I have been so wrong... so wrong, so wrong..."? Just an idea...
ttfn,
Drakonis [ Reply to This ]
Thanks &mdash 02/19/08 - 03:02:42 PM
THanks for your idea to the final of 2nd chorus.... I'll do that, next time i make music.... It's a great idea... Thanks
jakob [ Reply to This ]
OK! &mdash 02/20/08 - 10:15:55 AM
Thanks Drakonis. I'll consider both tips next time i work on this song again. regarding the ending, I can repeat the chorus and on the last time just repeat the " in my mind... in my mind..." towards an end. Rgds! [ Reply to This ]
nicw &mdash 02/19/08 - 11:17:32 PM
Great music &mdash 02/20/08 - 10:00:13 AM
Hi Massa
Very nice work here. Play is exellent and singing is fine to. Nice tunes. Make some more, please ...
NB. I'm happy that a collaboration is made between Brazil and Denmark this way. I was in Brazil for 5 weeks in the year 1998 and is planning to go there again this year. I love Brazil. Especially the people there and the music.
/C. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks! &mdash 02/20/08 - 10:21:32 AM
Thanks man! I checked out your songs as well and really liked the guitar playing... nice leads and rhythyms! resembles Pink Floyd, Mettalica... even Jimi himself... the guitar master! I appreciate you commenting my songs. Rgds! [ Reply to This ]
like it &mdash 02/20/08 - 01:31:02 PM
this is pretty good! reminds me of The Verve in a way. Good work everyone. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks! &mdash 02/24/08 - 09:53:22 AM
Good stuff &mdash 02/21/08 - 10:54:11 AM
Thanks! &mdash 02/24/08 - 10:55:45 AM
I appreciate your comments on the lyrics. Thank you for listening. I'll check out your songs as well. Rgds! [ Reply to This ]
Very nice collab &mdash 02/21/08 - 10:55:46 AM
Great work fabulous production a very lovely song.
KUDOS fellows.
Cheers
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Kenta [ Reply to This ]
cool! &mdash 02/24/08 - 07:06:33 AM
liked the soft/paced melody; loved the solo, it blended perfectly with the song/lyrics but I got to say, the ending left me in quite a shock, I was waiting for more... oh well, overall very nice song! keep it up [ Reply to This ]
Thanks! &mdash 02/24/08 - 11:02:09 AM
I will certainly redo the ending of this song... I wasn't happy with it either... but was too eager to upload a new song... thanks for listening and for the feedback. All the best! [ Reply to This ]
Rainy Days &mdash 03/07/08 - 07:31:06 PM
Nice work Guy's.... it's Cool when a plan comes together.
And your happy with it.
I.......LIKE IT.......... [ Reply to This ]
Thanks! &mdash 03/08/08 - 05:25:27 AM
Very cool &mdash 03/07/08 - 10:36:22 PM
I like this song a lot. The vocals are great - very good use of harmonies. I like the violin sound, and the use of the acoustic guitar is great (is that nylon strings?). Good lyrics, with some images, and very good mix. I have to agree with ceilidh on the abrupt ending - it kind of took me by surprise! But this is a small point. Very cool. A great collab. I look forward to checking out more of your music. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks! Collab? &mdash 03/08/08 - 05:38:54 AM
Thanks dajama! The guitar has nylon strings.. you're right... i think it suits well this ballad. I will change the ending of this song as soon as i get to it again. It is good that i have these feedbacks! Thanks for listening and taking the time to comment. I checked your songs and liked them as well. I'll send you a note to see if you are into collab. Ciao! [ Reply to This ]
*** &mdash 03/10/08 - 01:52:51 PM
Yeah! U guys rock. This song is so chill. Im lite'n one up rite now listenin to it! [ Reply to This ]
Glad you enjoyed! &mdash 03/14/08 - 03:43:26 PM
Thanks for your nice comment. Have a good trip listening to it. Rgds! :) [ Reply to This ]
right then massa &mdash 03/10/08 - 06:49:47 PM
Thanks... &mdash 03/14/08 - 03:41:41 PM
sweet!! &mdash 03/26/08 - 10:39:28 PM
nice powerful beat great keys the vocals are right on.great mix great harmonies good job.
Terry [ Reply to This ]
Excellent. &mdash 03/27/08 - 03:30:52 PM
Groovy melody n' production, reminds me of something else which is usually a good sign. Could've maybe done with a bridge but a fine effort nonetheless. Keep on rawkin Massa. [ Reply to This ]
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It's cool.... Thanks for making this collab with me...
Maybe another one sometime?
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