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Description:
My first submission at MacJams. The song is incomplete/in progress, will post when finished.
Lyrics:
Remember back when the moon shone alone
And how the distant clouds could not harm
Forget your troubles take a pill from home and feel the sun
Forever taking you to someplace warm
Feel the sun
Feel the sun
Hardware:
MacBook Pro
Software:
GarageBand '07
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I can hear the potential. &mdash 02/22/08 - 09:09:03 AM
Like what you've got here thus far.Some dynamics on the vocals and a wider spread on the overall mix and you're good to go.This is a good first posting.Good songwriting and crafting.Welcome aboard!
Blessings, [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 02/22/08 - 04:44:59 PM
Thank you for the welcome and compliments! I hope to learn a lot from everyone here at MacJams. I'm a beginner as far as mixing goes, I'll experiment and try for a wider spread. Maybe do a few more vocal takes and use the excellent vocals on your tracks as inspiration. [ Reply to This ]
I like where this is going &mdash 02/23/08 - 06:07:01 PM
Perhaps a touch more reverb on the vocals would blend them in a bit. (not much - just a little.) I like your drums, just a bit off the beaten path, rather than traditional Western set. nice vocal harmonies, too. I'm looking forward to the completed piece. [ Reply to This ]
Hey Joe! &mdash 02/26/08 - 11:44:21 AM
Love the line:
Forget your troubles take a pill from home .
Nice vox, but agree that a little reverb may help... great first posting! Welcome Joe! [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 03/03/08 - 07:53:08 AM
Thank you, echoroom. I'm glad I discovered this community and look forward to more musicmaking!
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Blessings,
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