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YOUR TENDER SOUL by Barretok [Email]
Genre: Acoustic Rock

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SONG STATS:
Hits: 403
Comments: 17
Votes: 7
Plays: 33
Last Played: Oct 12, 2008 - 01:46:58 PM
Downloads: 24
Fans: 10
Uploaded: Feb 21, 2008 - 08:27:30 AM
Last Updated: Feb 21, 2008 - 08:27:30 AM
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Keywords:
Tender (1), soul (83), corporation (1), love (978), intimacy (2), night (81), park (3), kiss (12), snow (52), winter (52), restaurant (3)
Description:
This is a song about a real life event with a few liberties. It is acoustic and it's a bluesy kind of rock or a rocky kind of blues. In any case try to relax and enjoy.
Thanks,
Bernardo

Lyrics:
YOUR TENDER SOUL
By© Bernardo Barreto

Well you called me from the Big Corporation
Chased by the monsters of your imagination
Under your desk

Later we met in a Dominican Restaurant
Your beauty hid so well
The torments of your mind.

I took you home and we turned on the TV
We made sweet love and you fell asleep
Under the lights of your Christmas tree.

I touched your hair and saw your restless mind
Struggling with the demons in your dreams
In your dreams.

(solo)

Your tender soul was wide open
Like the wounds of Jesus Christ
Just like the wounds of Jesus Christ

So the next day we went to church
I saw you walking to the altar
Receiving the communion pure as a child
Just like a baby child.

Late that night I felt the sweet taste of your lips
While we said goodbye.
And I took that taste

With the night and the snow across the park.

With your tender soul.



Hardware:
Powermac G5

Software:
Garage Band
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Great &mdash 02/21/08 - 08:36:03 AM
I really like your vocals... Good guitar... And it's relaxing.... And that percussion and rhythm section, is played and mixed good and wide.... Great blues...



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Very nice &mdash 02/21/08 - 10:21:38 AM
I really love what u are doing... U are very awesome with the blues.

Cheers
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Kenta

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Thank you &mdash 02/21/08 - 10:31:02 AM
Thank you guys, I'm glad you liked it. I respect both of your opinions.
B

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Excellent B &mdash 02/21/08 - 10:43:24 AM
I like the rhythm in the guitar and the relaxed and light percussion. Superb mix and as always great singing. Bravo! very nice sologuitar-sound!!

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even u're vox &mdash 02/21/08 - 11:57:16 AM
sounds accoustic here...Nice track and great lyrics again brotha. With everythin' u do there's a big stamp of your taste, feel and rythm. Enjoyed Bernardo...!

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THANK YOU... &mdash 02/21/08 - 02:08:43 PM
My friends, really appreciate your comments.
B

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YOUR TENDER SOUL &mdash 02/21/08 - 02:58:49 PM
emmm I m still think you are a star in disguise ...
how on earth you can let this machine sounds like
a tight band like this ? this is impressive !
Deep Bow !!

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Excellent &mdash 02/21/08 - 04:10:52 PM
Song B, from the first note to the last, I especially like the lyrics and the acoustic approach...Bravo

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This is one of my favourite tunes &mdash 02/22/08 - 01:37:38 AM
of your recent production; I like the acoustic mood of course but also the percussion setup and panning and the pleasant flowing of the whole piece....let's call it: TopOfThePops blues!

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fine guitar! &mdash 02/22/08 - 02:40:30 AM
Like the guitar in this one!
cool easy swing and great slide!
KC

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Lyrics &mdash 02/22/08 - 10:31:22 AM
Wow, this is terrifically written. There are so many really incredibly evocative, specific lines. I love "we made sweet love and you fell asleep under the lights of your Christmas tree" and "I took that taste with the night and the snow across the park," especially.

Through my speakers, it sounds as though there's an effect on the vocals that's making them sound a little hard and cold compared to the rest of the track and I'm not fond of that, but it's the only thing I'm not a big fan of here. The rest of the production is stellar, especially the drums and percussion.

I'm a sucker for the slide guitar and you used it really tastefully here.

Thanks!

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.. ( : &mdash 02/22/08 - 10:55:45 AM
this makes me smile...its very nice only heard it once yet so I can't say that much as the songs always grow on me if I like'm - I like this ! Your voice singing-vocals?thats the name in English isn't it..(?) are so different - special : ) 8 ) like the lyrics alot...once in my life I could lie about just about anything...not any more changed some years ago.. thank God ! Lies keep Ya' prisoner ..not the other way round.. although ya' try to convince yourself of it... if U see what I mean ? Real interesting song I've only heard very little of Your Music.. much obliged ! tx lena

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Yet again!! &mdash 02/22/08 - 04:19:58 PM

Hi 'Sir' Barretok.

Yes this is also great I love your lyrics and here is some of my favourite ones too however they are all good Your singing voice is my most favourite though.

I took you home and we turned on the TV
We made sweet love and you fell asleep
Under the lights of your Christmas tree.

I can just imagine this scene ooh la la la... lol

Excellent.


Peace
Dee x

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gimeee a dose.... &mdash 02/22/08 - 04:46:33 PM
....of them "b"lues!! laying it down good here B!

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I relaxed and I enjoyed &mdash 02/22/08 - 08:55:28 PM
Great guitar. Great lyrics. Great blues! Terry

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Crank it up, man! &mdash 02/23/08 - 07:57:03 AM
Lovin' that fretwork! I can see the ghost of Hemingway spying the narrator's life (or yours?) from across the cafe, stealing inspiration from your stories, then turning them into journalism-ese and cashing in. Better if YOU cash in on your musical smarts, though. Good to visit you in a new place (as you know I'm a post iC-crash newbie here.)

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This one got &mdash 03/07/08 - 08:47:31 PM
my tail a waging! And those bongos are to die for!

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