Mr. Right Now (collab. w/ Daphna)

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Similar story to my last collab w/ Daphna. Just attempting to flesh out the song with some real guitar and goosing the production a bit.

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Lyrics

she says that she wants to meet, the perfect guy

so she goes on a reality show, to give it a try

but the men she’s about to meet, and get to know

are the kind you and I would call, the average joe

well she said:

this is a rude surprise

but these are really very special guys

so I think that I’ll stick around

but you know, what I’m going to say

it’s the truth, can’t sweep it away

here it comes, it’s as clear as day

she doesn’t want Mr.Right

she wants a Mr.Right Now now now now

she wants a Mr.Right Now now now now

repeat

it’s not very long before she falls for some of the guys

she starts to see beyond the looks, beyond what just meets the eye

but soon there’s about to be a nasty turn of events

it’s sure to cause alot of grief, to those average gents

it’s so cruel:

one more group of men

the shortest one is maybe 5’10

and they’ll be moving into the house

handsome, buff, so muscular

they’ve got chiselled features, golden tans, perfect hair and great big hands

designer clothes and shaven chests, the whitest teeth the freshest breath

well you know, how the story goes

it’s the end, for those average joes

the sad truth, from this reality show

is she doesn’t want Mr.Right

she wants a Mr.Right Now now now now

she wants a Mr. Right Now now now now

repeat

Song Stats

Hits: 1709
Comments: 6
Fans: 2
Plays: 240
Downloads: 76
Votes: 8
Uploaded: Sep 28, 2004 - 01:27:26 PM
Last Updated: Sep 28, 2004 - 12:51:11 AM Last Played: Oct 04, 2009 - 04:33:32 PM

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Comments

blamm

blamm said 1883 days ago (September 28th, 2004)

well...for what it's worth...
I like some of the touches you've added...but not the vocal effects. What I assume are two identical vocal tracks, hard panned and slightly off-set on the timeline, are distracting to the song. Undo that, and I think your additions add something. I kinda prefer the synth-sharpness of her original take, but I think your stands on it's own, also.

Check out my latest song called Story of Her Life

Sista Mac	Sista Mac said 1883 days ago (September 28th, 2004)
	Made me smile! I like the vocal effects. It really makes the song 3 dimensional. I love the whole concept of the song. The production quality, I feel, is very good Check out my latest song called I'm Not Trying

Mcboy	Mcboy said 1883 days ago (September 28th, 2004)
	i like it.... agree with the cool vocal effects.....guitar adds credance... quality production...kool work jammers... Check out my latest song called Heros( aclarke/mcboy)

TobinMueller

TobinMueller said 1875 days ago (October 6th, 2004)

Nice feel
I like the guitar, the upgrade. But I am such a fan of
Daphna's pop tunes, and her straightforward no nonsense
style, the vocal effects perhaps took a little away from
that, even tho some effects were needed as an upgrade. I
just wish she sang with more enthusiasm, like maybe she
needed a Mister RIght Now too, creating a kind of ironic
layer. Still, this is a worthy song to work on and this track
is a fun improvement. Her lyrics are so great and pop
melodic content so solid.

Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)

ka-klick

ka-klick said 1872 days ago (October 9th, 2004)

Thanks to all of you
For your comments. I had a lot of fun on this and really
tried to just keep the core of the original. I personally like
what happened w/ the vocals, although initially this also
had the whole of the original mix on top of it, which
brought the main part of the vocals dead center and this
was there to add a bit of a layer behind it to flesh it out. I
ended dropping the original mix out in favor of the "sub-
mixes" I'd brought back in from her GB file.

Of course one of the reasons I wanted to work on some of
Daphna's stuff, is I really love the sort of ironically
detached style of delivery she has in these. Thanks for
taking the time to look it up, since the bomber got to it
fast enough to keep it getting much front page time.

Check out my latest song called Big Bad World - Live 1-16-2009 plus - MJRF

gudkarma	gudkarma said 1861 days ago (October 20th, 2004)
	you goosed it well! %uD6A8%uC5F4! Check out my latest song called Ocean The

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