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All your games (v2)


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ajnorth

 Genre: Rock

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New version of this song. Was not happy with the last mix, and some guitars were out of tune, this hopefully is much better! I have added a backing vocal and some more guitar parts.
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Lyrics
You keep your secrets up your sleeve, I see through,
How do you breathe the air you breathe, With what you do to
play around with your life like it's a toy, and then hold out your hand
You keep your secrets up your sleeve, I see through...

All your games and all your pitiful lies,
It gets you nothing
Take your prisoners then ignore their cries,
You take it too far
Breaking down doors and breaking down walls.
Turn the key ignore their calls.
All your games and all your pitiful lies,

You keep your secrets up your sleeve, I see through,
How do you breathe the air you breathe,
I can't see how you place yourself into someone elses head,
and then they take a fall.
You keep your secrets up your sleeve, I see through...

(Chorus)

You keep your secrets up your sleeve,
You keep your secrets up your sleeve, I see through,


Adam J North 2004
Song Stats
Hits: 572
Comments: 17
Fans: 5
Plays: 38
Downloads: 42
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Feb 26, 2008 - 11:14:15 AM
Last Updated: Feb 26, 2008 - 05:20:04 PM Last Played: Oct 29, 2009 - 12:42:07 PM
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Comments
Feter said 634 days ago (February 26th, 2008)
All your games
Rock On ..cool guitar work !!
said 634 days ago (February 26th, 2008)
Good rock
Great song... I like your vocals... And what a great sound on the guitars.... And the drums also sounds good.... Great solo... Thanks for sharing man...
rsorensen said 633 days ago (February 27th, 2008)
great
I haven't listened to the other version, but I really like this. good singing and cool guitar parts here. Really nicely put together tune. May I ask where you get your drum tracks? They always sound so good.
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ajnorth said 633 days ago (February 27th, 2008)
Thank you
for listening! All my drum tracks are just standard GB loops. Although I have created the fills myself.
Adam
Check out my latest song called All your games (v2)
lavalamp said 633 days ago (February 27th, 2008)
Mr. North
Very good guitar work. I remember this one. Well-crafted and structured.

I say this because I like and respect you, but for my taste the vocals are too "tinty". Could be just me.

Breaking down doors and breaking down walls....you deliver that so well.

See ya brother
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ajnorth said 633 days ago (February 27th, 2008)
Thanks.
I could always do better with vocals as I only have a very cheap microphone. When I can afford a decent one, I plan to re-record all my vocals.

Always appreciate your comments.
Adam
Check out my latest song called All your games (v2)
VicDiesel said 633 days ago (February 27th, 2008)
Rock solid
Hey cool song!

Since you're tinkering with the mix....

I find that in the parts where you have a backing vocal, the guitars are a bit far in the back of the mix. Also, I'm guessing you don't have a lot of effects on the vocal? I have no experience with vocals, but I'm guessing a bit of compressing would even it out, and maybe a touch of delay/reverb would make it sit better in the mix. This has a very live and raw sound. Maybe that's what you're going for, but I'd experiment a bit with some polish just to be sure.
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ajnorth said 631 days ago (February 29th, 2008)
Thanks for that.
I agree there are still a few problems with this, your comments make sense.
Thanks
Adam
Check out my latest song called All your games (v2)
MarkHolbrook said 632 days ago (February 28th, 2008)
This is great!
What I'm shooting for these days! Thanks for the inspiration!

Love your guitar work! Excellent!
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ajnorth said 631 days ago (February 29th, 2008)
Glad
to inspire you! Thanks for the comments.
Adam
Check out my latest song called All your games (v2)
tokai said 629 days ago (March 2nd, 2008)
very good
i think the guitar could come up a bit in the mix. you should write a song about the earth quake your comment would make great lyrics.
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said 618 days ago (March 13th, 2008)
Cool.


Hi love this , really nice guitar playing loved your singing and great lyrics and background enjoyed. Very good. cheers
Peace Dee.
ajnorth said 618 days ago (March 13th, 2008)
Glad you
Liked it. Thanks for the comment.
Adam
Check out my latest song called All your games (v2)
Nick_Flash said 615 days ago (March 16th, 2008)
cool
This is a great well written song. I agree the vocals could use a little work in the mix. Vocals are my biggest challenge. Great playing man.
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ajnorth said 614 days ago (March 17th, 2008)
Thanks
for stopping by. Much appreciated.
Adam
Check out my latest song called All your games (v2)
said 599 days ago (April 1st, 2008)
Yeah!
Really nice work A.J.

Well written and played. Clean production too!

But the vocals are the stand-out treat for me in this one. Exceptional!

Be well friend!
ajnorth said 598 days ago (April 2nd, 2008)
Much appreciated
Always like to get a comment about my vocals. Thanks.

Adam
Check out my latest song called All your games (v2)
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Have been writing songs and playing guitar since I was 12. Started playing with a friend, eventually formed a 3 piece which didnt last very long. Continued writing and playing but nothing much happened until 2000. Then came a band called 'Livid Sky' ... [see more]

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