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shortcoming (1)lavalamp (33)vic holman (4)david armbruster (24)
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This is my first collaboration on Macjams. Vic was nice enough to help me out with this one. He did a lot of the guitars and drums(and mixing). He also tried to give me an "Instant Karma" sound on the vocals.

I'm always willing to collab if you're interested.

Special thanks to Vic.

Lyrics:
Shortcoming


I really couldn’t remember
The streetlight flashing alone
As we were walking back home

It could have been a total adventure
With the door that was unlocked
I think it was 5 o’clock

Oh my mind. Everything worked out fine
I stand and fade away

There was something I couldn’t imagine
Like a tree falling down in a lake
I think it was all a mistake I made

I should have seen it all coming
Everything I wanted to say
Tomorrow, right now and yesterday

Oh it’s wrong. I know I didn’t belong
But, you see that’s just the way I am

All I want for you to do is love me

I really couldn’t remember
The streetlight flashing alone
As we were walking back home

It could have been a total adventure
With the door that was unlocked
I think it was 5 o’clock

Oh my mind. Everything worked out fine
I stand and fade away

All I want for you to do is love me

By David Armbruster


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Rockin &mdash 02/26/08 - 02:20:42 PM
.. and firsties! Man, this really has the Holman (tm) guitar sound. A really rocking track - the drums are fab, and i love the chorus effect on the vox - works really well Dave. Great collab guys - more please?

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cool &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:17:38 PM
I wasn't sure how this was gonna work and I'm quite happy how it turned out.

Thanks ER and who knows, maybe we'll have a go at another in the future.
Dave

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Nice work. &mdash 02/26/08 - 02:23:26 PM
Sounds very trippy and 60s to me. You have both done a fine job here, although I feel the vocals get a bit lost in the mix in places, But what do I know about mixing!

Adam

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nice AJ &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:19:54 PM
I hope it didn't seem too lost in the mix. Did you listen on headphones or speakers?

Thanks always AJ. You're one of the best!

Dave

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Rockin' &mdash 02/26/08 - 02:25:46 PM
Cool rockin' tune. Very good performance. I particularly like the "Instant Karma" vocals.
B

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Thanks B &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:21:36 PM
I think instant karma' gonna get me.......or has it already.
LL

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a Fine song! &mdash 02/26/08 - 02:46:51 PM
great work guys. those vocals have a lot of 'tude to em. Love the slide work. Cool ride fills too! It's stuck in my head!

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A Fine comment &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:24:08 PM
Just honored that you took the time. Absolutely love "In my head again".
I'll be seeing you on some award show soon.

LL

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Shortcoming &mdash 02/26/08 - 04:34:59 PM
WOW ..this is a big shot ! the singing and the
guitar work the whole sound so tight !.very cool
colab my friends !!! KUDOS !!!

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Shortcoming &mdash 02/26/08 - 04:37:37 PM
WOW ..this is a big shot ! the singing and the
guitar work the whole sound so tight !.very cool
colab my friends !!! KUDOS !!!

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Thanks Feter &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:32:06 PM
Thanks for your kind words and nice comments. Glad you liked it.
Dave

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Shortcoming - Longcoming &mdash 02/26/08 - 05:54:01 PM
2 of my most favorite songwriters come together on this excellent song. I hear 100% of both of you. I thought I was this amazing matchmaker, but I am embarrassed that I never connected the two of you together. There's a real natural seamlessness between your styles in this song. Now I'm thinking Vic's vocals with Dave's vocals could be the next best thing since the MacJams Super Band - The Goodwillys. Please continue to collaborate. You two have just scraped the surface.

Bob

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sorry matchmaker Bob &mdash 02/26/08 - 09:49:30 PM
but we went behind your back. And we didn't even need to use a on-line compatibilty test.

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Thought your bookkeeper....... &mdash 02/27/08 - 04:48:46 PM
I thought your bookkeeper might have had enough you.

Happy that you could take a little break. Hope to see you around more often soon. Don't stress too much.

Work to live, don't live to work.........and have fun.

LL

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This was for Bob, not Vic &mdash 02/28/08 - 03:03:02 AM
Sorry Vic. This was for Bob.
Dave

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Goodwilly ? &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:25:56 PM
Look at the comment I gave Vic. That was meant for you.
LL

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See comments to Vic &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:27:34 PM
Look at the comments to Vic.

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Hey Dave &mdash 02/28/08 - 02:15:36 PM
Do you want me to look at the comments you left for Vic or something?


You're repeating yourself, you know.

Thanks for the advice about too much work and not enough Goodwilly.

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I swear &mdash 02/28/08 - 04:17:04 PM
Every time I wrote to you it went to Vic, I swear. I'm not crazy.

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no Dave.... &mdash 02/28/08 - 08:44:00 PM
your not the crazy one. I thinks it's me that should be locked up once in a while.

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Cell Mates &mdash 02/29/08 - 12:52:35 PM
Come on guys, quit your arguing. There's plenty of room in this nice padded living space for both of you AND Vic's extra personalities.

So Dave, what are you in for? 30 to life?

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Nice Colab &mdash 02/26/08 - 08:24:36 PM
I just love collaborations! THis is a good one. I'm feelin real 60's to 2000's ratio on this. Very creative.

Thanks,
Stephen

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Right on &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:36:36 PM
Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment. It was a trip collaborating with someone I have never even met, let alone talked to.
Thanks
LL

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/// &mdash 02/26/08 - 08:38:20 PM
reminds me of lou reed who i love. great collab., guys! thankss

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I love Lou &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:34:02 PM
I really do appreciate being compared to one of my favorite musical heroes.
Thanks friend
LL

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thanks Dave &mdash 02/26/08 - 09:43:42 PM
for letting me join in on the fun and messing around. i really dug the quirky poppiness right off the bat. plus all those cool riffs you have in there. It was right up my alley so I was playing along right off the git-go.

I should mention that Dave has 2 electric guitar tracks on here. and I added another 6. execessive? nah

Tanks again Dave, it was fun and painless.

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Thanks a bunch Vic &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:30:31 PM
This song would have just floated around my hard drive for months if it weren't for your help.
You did a professional job. LOVED the guitars and what you did to the vox.
THANKS
Dave

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Dave and Vic &mdash 02/27/08 - 01:30:28 AM
Well done to both of you - fantastic collaboration.
Cheers
Len



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LenLen &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:40:54 PM
Thank you always for supporting me. You're always stopping by on my latest song, and I really appreciate it.
Dave

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Christ &mdash 02/27/08 - 03:38:37 PM
This is some trippy stuff, bass me a blotter of acid and a bong cause this song is pure psychedelia
The guitars are awesome
dig it!

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Trippy &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:47:21 PM
Trippy is the right word to describe this one. You're right one. But, is that a good thing?
LL

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Great collab &mdash 02/27/08 - 09:25:51 PM
This is excellent. Love the vocals - great vibe (from the singing and the sound) - and love the guitars. Lyrics are cool. Great combination of sounds and terrific mix and sound. Nicely done, guys. Peace. Did I mention that I love the guitars?

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The sound &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:45:13 PM
Vic paid a lot of attention to the sound of this one, which was really interesting to hear what one of my songs could sound like without my interference.
Thanks brother,
Dave

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Great &mdash 02/28/08 - 03:02:17 AM
This song has a great sound.... And i really like the guitars sound... Good rocking song.... And the vocals are great... Thanks for sharing this.... I like it... A great melody....

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Glad you liked it. &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:42:45 PM
Thanks for checking this one out. Glad you liked it.

Dave

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trippy &mdash 02/28/08 - 07:33:35 AM
hippies......makes me want to buy a black light and some lavalamps.....nice work fellas, nice invocation of things beatlesque.....

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McThanks &mdash 02/28/08 - 01:38:47 PM
McThanks for the McComments, McBoy.

Glad you liked it.
LL

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Cool track &mdash 02/28/08 - 04:21:58 PM
Love the sixties feel to the track which has a very fresh vibe about it. Good track and collab. Well done guys.

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thanks a bunch &mdash 03/02/08 - 06:38:38 AM
Glad you enjoyed and good to see you around.

LL

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Delicious Rock Music &mdash 02/28/08 - 08:36:17 PM
You guys really rock out on this, Loving this in that new rock n roll way...downloaded like a rabid fan

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Tasted good &mdash 03/02/08 - 06:36:59 AM
Glad you enjoyed the meal Sir Wounded.
Dave

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Shortcoming &mdash 02/28/08 - 11:30:30 PM
Outstanding collab, enjoyed it a lot
Cool song!!

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THANKS &mdash 03/02/08 - 06:35:13 AM
Collabing is fun and I'd like to do it again sometime. Thanks for the kind words.
LL

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this 80s boy.... &mdash 03/01/08 - 01:41:34 AM
...loves it!....i agree with echoroom...more please!!

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glad you liked it &mdash 03/02/08 - 06:33:11 AM
Thanks for commenting and glad you stopped by to take a ride.
Come back soon.
LL

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VEry cool &mdash 03/02/08 - 09:19:32 AM
Love the stumbled singing The lyrics in this are realy good... Im sorry but I am going to have to say it Syd would be proud... Hey Vic you collabing maniac nice one!!! This was a definite treat Great Collab!!!!! Mr LL you shine in the singing department!

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Thanks EB &mdash 03/03/08 - 07:21:37 AM
You're one of my favs around here. An especial thanks regarding my singing. I always think it sucks. I try, ya know?

Dave

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Great! &mdash 03/03/08 - 03:55:20 PM
Great work both, I love Vic very much (he's one of the bests I've ever heard in my life) and I love you and your stuff. This is great song .. Amazing collaboration. Great to see 2 of my favorites joining together in one song.

KUDOS

Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi

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Great to see... &mdash 03/04/08 - 05:28:16 PM
Great to see you around. Hope everything's going all right as far as you schooling. You're fantastic guitarist and hope to see you around in the future.

Dave

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Instant Bowie &mdash 03/17/08 - 09:51:28 PM
I love the Lennon styled vocal. I also hear a TON of Bowie in this. Balls out swagger with a great touch of 70's glam. Cool tune!

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Cool &mdash 03/18/08 - 02:17:47 PM
Thanks for the Bowie/Lennon compliment. Vic is responsible for the vocal production. I'll have to ask him how he did that "Instant Karma" thing with my voice. I really dig that.

Thanks,
Dave

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Kudos David Happy to hear this - &mdash 10/01/08 - 01:00:14 PM
Your 1 collab !! & with Vic who's an awesome Musician here : ) !! Really good hearing You agin, looking fwd to more collab songs from You ?! : ) : )
My Pleasure as always

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BTW &mdash 10/05/08 - 08:34:41 AM
Thanks for hitting this oldie, Lena.

Dave

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