I'm a hard rock guy but this song has a way of movin ya!
Well Done!

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I like it. Not the most surprising twists in it, but really
soothing in a way. You have a great voice. A little to dim
production for my taste, i'd prefer a clearer approach to
the vocals, for added presence... But all in all the same
high standard as your previous work.

My humble opinion,
Algabatz

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Correct me if I'm wrong, but this song seems to be about the struggle of what you'd like to do in your heart (art) and the cold hard reality of what you have to do to feed your family -- work. Conceptually, it's brilliant.

I may have some minor nits about the recording/performance here and there, but I think the substance of the song is what's important. So many people are focused on the glossy varnish that they forget the wood.

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antwan > I am a hard rock guy too, and soft rock guy,
and a synth rock guy, a punk rock guy and... :) I am glad
you like my song! Advice of the day: Don't let style's fool
you; like what your heart likes!

algabatz > Yeah, I agree on the vocals. It's the best I can
do with my equipment though, as far I know anyway. Of
course, the art of mastering is a huge chapter also... :)

Paul_T > Yes, this about a man and about a woman, not
anyone in particular... The man in this case could be an
artist, and the woman represents the establishement:
wife/gf, work, bills etc. I don't personally have huge
problems with family, but I can yet feel like this a lot of
times... It could also, like the end of lyrics suggests, most
of the times be the artist himself that is the pure obstacle
to his success and dreams...

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excellent lyrics. the only beef i have is that i think the
chorus could use more punch to rise above the rest of the
song a little better. i appreciate the 'wood' on this one-
you have a great batch of stuff here

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