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LOVE SONG(WHAT ELSE)ABOUT FINDING LOVE APPRECIATE ANY FEEDBACK AND ADVICE THIS WAS AN EARLY SONG THAT I WILL REDO ANY SUGGESTIONS ARE WELCOME
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Right on Time (Music and Lyrics by Craig Halkett)
I was lonesome for a long time
And quite content to let things be
But you came along and turned my world around
Now you mean everything to me
Right on time, you opened up my sad heart
Right on time, you set my spirit free
Right on time, you put me back together
Right on time, you helped me see
I was on a road to nowhere
Lost touch with reality
Then you smiled at me and unlocked this old heart
And I’m so glad you found the key
Right on time, you gave my life some meaning
Right on time, you must have heard my plea
Right on time, again love I was feeling
Right on time, you came to me
You’d be by my side forever
And that’s the way it’s gonna be
For when I look and see that smile you’re smiling now
I know that smile is just for me
Right on time, you filled my life with laughter
Right on time, you shared your dreams with me
Right on time, we’ll be happy ever after
Right on time, just wait and see
Right on time, you opened up my sad heart
Right on time, you set my spirit free
Right on time, you put me back together
Right on time, you helped me see
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RIGHT ON TIME &mdash 03/06/08 - 02:50:47 AM
what a heartfelt song my friend ... "rigth on time
you set my spirit free " ..such sweet lyrics .so
classic ..thnx alot for sharin such gem !! [ Reply to This ]
thanx feter &mdash 03/07/08 - 02:42:05 AM
Great &mdash 03/06/08 - 02:57:01 AM
What i great melody... You really has a great voice.... Sounds good when you sings.... I like when the chorus plays... Sing a long song... Thanks for sharing... [ Reply to This ]
thank you lightman &mdash 03/07/08 - 02:44:30 AM
Wow. &mdash 03/06/08 - 03:00:04 AM
Hi
how could I not like this its perfect you sing fantastic and your love
songs always have me swooning. The lyrics are fantastic as usal.
Another great love song as well
Right on time for me to listen too with my morning cuppa.lol
Thank you.
Peace
Dee.
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thanx dee &mdash 03/07/08 - 02:46:39 AM
i am glad you like the song i appreciate you stopping by cheers craig [ Reply to This ]
i love this &mdash 03/06/08 - 04:10:12 AM
pink and fluff - thank so much - it was a perfect start to my day and i suspect i will be singing it late into the evening x [ Reply to This ]
thanks caroline &mdash 03/07/08 - 02:51:02 AM
My heart.... &mdash 03/06/08 - 09:00:00 AM
is all a flutter with your voice, the words are amazing and again you have excelled, well done Craig, you are a star
xxx [ Reply to This ]
thank you &mdash 03/07/08 - 03:04:05 AM
for the feedback you can get pills for the heart problem it is probably hyper tension cheers craig [ Reply to This ]
Right on Time &mdash 03/06/08 - 09:12:03 AM
wonderful tune, a beautiful melody, heartfelt delivery :-) Thanks for sharing, enjoyed your music a lot :-) [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 03/07/08 - 02:53:06 AM
classic country with &mdash 03/06/08 - 04:43:20 PM
a nice playin'-pickin' guitar and a great vox...i would made the reverb a tad thinner with the vox...you dont need it with such a good voice...Enjoyed it. [ Reply to This ]
thanx eagle &mdash 03/07/08 - 03:06:15 AM
How could I resist? &mdash 03/06/08 - 08:10:46 PM
When I have my own song with the same title (quite different though.).
This is a very, very nice song... I like how you kept the guitar nice and simple (very nice tone, too) and how you alternated lines with background vocals. Vocal delivery was perfect for the tone of the song... very sincere. I love the simplicity of this!
This would have fit well in the folk section I think. An Excellent love song in any genre however... well done!
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thank you &mdash 03/07/08 - 03:08:29 AM
for the kind feedback i really appreciate you stopping by cheers craig [ Reply to This ]
Excellent Song writing Craig &mdash 03/06/08 - 08:50:18 PM
Nice simple guitar accompaniment that works well to show off the song, which is very well written.
Thanks for sharing this one Craig.
Ed [ Reply to This ]
thanks slo parts &mdash 03/07/08 - 03:11:05 AM
appreciate you stopping by i always struggle to find what genre these belong in cheers craig [ Reply to This ]
cheers caroline &mdash 03/07/08 - 02:48:26 AM
Right on time? &mdash 03/31/08 - 02:57:43 PM
I agree with one reviewer's observation that this would do well in the folk category. To me, the song feels very dated, both musically and lyrically. '60's folk music, to my ear (not that there is anything wrong with that!).
The production is solid, vox are too. Some of the lyrical phrases are perhaps a bit worn ("happy ever after", "set my spirit free", "found the key").
To my way of thinking, the first line of a song needs to compel the listener to continue on ... it should have real impact and be "on point with the title" and I'm not sure we have that here. I personally didn't feel that the first line and/or first verse really stood out and told me something truly interesting.
I would strive to find a unique way to say the same things you are saying here. I think the way you are saying it has been done many times before.
All that said, it does have a nice, mellow, relaxing quality to it. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks &mdash 04/10/08 - 04:55:38 AM
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you set my spirit free " ..such sweet lyrics .so
classic ..thnx alot for sharin such gem !!
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