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I'm resubmitting this song with a different genre because I'm dismayed that it's not getting any comments. I love this piece and it took me ages to put put it together. Maybe it's shite but I rather like it. Please comment.
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peterms
I listened to your piece. First of all-I'm quite shure that at Macjams we all are songwriters and it is a place for everyone to contribute their musical creativity. So, creativity is being spoken here.
I think your piece is well crafted technically speaking. The critique I have is that melody is missing from it. You jump from one sound to the next without any thread or theme or melody running through it.
Listen to your favorite soundtrack song and "listen" to what makes it great.....
You're on the right track....