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I’ve been married a long time, now, and we’ve been through many stages along the way (we’re currently in the newly-empty-nested stage). Staying married has required some serious growth (mostly on my part - I had a long way to come). Staying married has also brought a huge bonus: my life with Marion has opened important doors in me, and I have become more and more able to see the love in what she does with her days. And when that love is directed at me, well, it moves my mountains. One particular time when that happened in the form of some small, thoughtful gesture, I went out into my studio and wrote this in an attempt to express how it made me feel. I hope I captured at least some of it, knowing I didn’t get it all…
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beautiful... &mdash 03/09/08 - 07:51:29 PM
This is just a gorgeous love song and I really enjoyed it. I know your wife must be so proud and honored that you wrote this for her. I have been married almost 28 years and this touched my heart. If ony my husband could play an instrument! :) I appreciate that you took the time to share your feelings with all of us. Here's wishing you more happiness in the years to come. Great job! [ Reply to This ]
Nice to hear from you &mdash 03/09/08 - 08:48:36 PM
Thank you for the listen, Gail. You message is very sweet. I think Marion does appreciate this song. She's heard hundreds of songs being written by me over the years, so her enjoyment of this was very meaningful to me.
I'm sure your husband shows you his love for you in many ways other than with plugins... This happens to be the only skill I have... [ Reply to This ]
For Marion &mdash 03/09/08 - 07:52:01 PM
this is deeply beautiful. The piano dynamics sound perfect to my ear - soulful, thoughtful, emotive - it's the perfect love song. thanks! [ Reply to This ]
Nice of you &mdash 03/09/08 - 08:54:00 PM
If your wonderful ear approves of the piano dynamics, that's a great thing. I'm glad you were able to feel this song, Karen. Thanks so much. [ Reply to This ]
What a lovely gesture back... &mdash 03/09/08 - 07:57:20 PM
one of many, I am sure. There is nothing more satisfying than spending time to make something special for that person who has been with you so long, helping make life worthwhile. Yes, this comes through in the music very nicely. Great photo, keeping each other warm with smiles. Really well-crafted music, Patrick, sweet, strong, flows beautifully through to the end. My only nit is the very second note the cello plays seems to be a sudden jump from the first, and seems unnatural, and since that was the opening of the cello, it was noticeable to me, perhaps a softer attack on the first two notes, or more legato, to soften the intro? After that, the cello just melts in your mouth. and the whole piece is delicious.
ttfn,
Drakonis [ Reply to This ]
Good ear, Eduard &mdash 03/09/08 - 09:04:49 PM
This is a very moving comment, one that Marion appreciated as much as I did. I'm so glad that you heard a bit of the depth of my feelings for her in this song. I could only have written it the night it came out - it just flowed. Any other time would have involved effort, which wouldn't get the results...
Thank you for your detailed listen, Eduard. I do appreciate that. [ Reply to This ]
serious heart &mdash 03/09/08 - 08:24:34 PM
Glorious in its warmth. The violin and the backing brass parts were beautiful. [ Reply to This ]
From Karmakeys &mdash 03/17/08 - 01:00:29 AM
John, thank you so much. I'm always grateful to get a comment from you. I'm glad heard the warmth I intended here. I have great respect for your keyboard playing, so this is great to hear from you. [ Reply to This ]
For Marion &mdash 03/09/08 - 08:50:10 PM
Delightful and peaceful and more its heartfelt piece
a very perfect one sound and perfomrance as a true
gem ..thank you for sharin such ! [ Reply to This ]
Hello, Feter &mdash 03/09/08 - 09:13:08 PM
I am very pleased that this song reaches you, Feter. I am happy to share this song with you. Thank you for the listen and the comment. [ Reply to This ]
you write &mdash 03/09/08 - 09:02:22 PM
My deep thanks to you &mdash 03/09/08 - 10:33:00 PM
It's a great feeling to know that my music lands in your heart, Fran. [ Reply to This ]
At last! &mdash 03/09/08 - 09:31:56 PM
It seems like a long while between drinks Patrick - first post since 06! Have you been saving this one up? ;)
Seriously, this is a lovely tune and the mix is just perfect. Lots of people are using strings and things as backing, but very few manage to make them sound like a part of a cohesive arrangement rather than just an add-on - an "I know, I'll add some strings and maybe a french horn" kind of thing. This sounds like the complimentary parts were conceived as one. Beautiful playing - lots of warm feelings (tinged with a little of a stronger, more delicate emotion - sounds like love coming through the keys).
Let's not wait so long for the next one!
Cheers to you and Marion!
Neil [ Reply to This ]
Great to hear from you &mdash 03/09/08 - 11:53:52 PM
It certainly has been a while since I posted. I've got other songs I have finished in the interim, and I will post them subsequently. Very nice of you to suggest I not wait again.
I do tend to layer my arrangements pretty thickly, and it was enjoyable to have so few instruments here. It presents a challenge, and it goes along with something I mentioned in a comment about Wonderland... there's a certain trust that develops that allows for more honesty in the music, which I noticed in your song. I would like to develop more of that, and I hope this is a step in that direction.
I'm very glad to know that the emotion I tried to convey in the song reached you. That means a great deal to me. Thank you, Neil. [ Reply to This ]
Stunning beautiful! &mdash 03/09/08 - 09:56:38 PM
Nice to meet you &mdash 03/10/08 - 12:01:57 AM
Hello, Mark. It's very kind of you to stop by for a listen and leave a comment, especially given that you we don't know each other yet. Or, didn't. Thank you.
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Really lovely - &mdash 03/09/08 - 09:57:31 PM
I especially like the cello part, that runs through providing a solid foundation. I also liked that you shared the background of this song. Sometimes, a person can take their partner for granted in a long term relationship, so it's nice to hear the thought, care and love that went into this song.
The production is top notch, too. Altogether, a well-crafted song. [ Reply to This ]
Love hearing from the teacher &mdash 03/10/08 - 12:06:17 AM
I really like the sound of this cello, Kristine, and it's a pleasure to play, even on a keyboard. The nuances of slide, vibrato, and level are very enjoyable to control as the part is being played. I'm very pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for your comment. [ Reply to This ]
Patrick... &mdash 03/09/08 - 11:13:50 PM
This is an absolutely beautiful love song... and I'm a sucker for a great love song! Since seeing you talk about this last week in chat I have been anxiously waiting for this to surface.
Of all the songs you have written in your lifetime it would be difficult to image a more touching and poignant testament of your ever evolving love. I also liked your comment about how much you had to grow... Anne is always telling people that I'm a work in progress.... aren't we all?
Here's to you and Marion! Cheers! [ Reply to This ]
With deep appreciation... &mdash 03/10/08 - 12:15:50 AM
I'm very touched by what you wrote here, Adam, and very grateful. You understand that having heard a song as many times as one does during its composing, sometimes it's easy to lose track of whether the finished product has in it what was intended at the outset. This fact makes your comment very meaningful to me. Thank you so much. [ Reply to This ]
Beautiful Blend &mdash 03/10/08 - 12:19:23 AM
One cannot help but hear and feel the depth of gratitude you express for your wife in this piece.Some call it love I tend to lend towards old fashion gratitude,probably both.Nonetheless this is very pleasing to the ear as well as heart and soul.Moved and appreciative that you've shared your sentiment with us.
Blessings, [ Reply to This ]
Pleasure to meet you &mdash 03/10/08 - 12:51:27 AM
It's always a pleasant surprise to get a listen and a comment from someone I haven't met yet.
I find your comment about gratitude highly insightful. I think there is even a touch of apology in the song, which has to do with me not always being the best I can be for my wife - she certainly deserves my best, but doesn't always get it.
I am pleased this song was enjoyable to you, and that you took the time to let me know. Much appreciated, Daniel. Blessings to you as well. [ Reply to This ]
For Marion &mdash 03/10/08 - 12:40:31 AM
What a beautiful romantic, evocative piece, catchy and touching. Congrats!! [ Reply to This ]
Great to hear from you &mdash 03/10/08 - 12:54:54 AM
Andreas, thank you so much for listening and leaving a comment. You have been such an asset to this site. I hope you continue to bring your music here, even though I know this was intended as a temporary home for you. Your talent is enormous, and your music is just plain magic.
Thank you, Andreas. [ Reply to This ]
What a beautiful melody! &mdash 03/10/08 - 01:08:34 AM
I know you may have been tempted to make a bigger production, but I'm glad you picked just the right instruments, and kept the intimacy of this wonderful piece of music. Patrick, I will always remember our little conversation that night about music for the ones we love. I hope I haven't been pushy about it.
You know, in everyday life I think some of us creative people find it hard to express
our true feelings. It is those times when we are sitting alone in our little musical environment that we are able to say what we really feel, and express our deepest love
through our music. You made your feelings very clear in this very moving piece.
I won't go into all the details of how great the cello and french horn are plus how sonically good everything sounds. I will just say, everything about this is wonderful.
I will also say it's been an honor to meet you and and hear your music here at MJ's.
From the bottom of my heart, I wish Marion and you the very best.
paul
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I'm very glad you joined this community &mdash 03/14/08 - 02:54:36 AM
I barely have words to thank you for your kindness, Paul. It was your inspiration that got me to post this song. Everyone who writes music enjoys praise from musicians at your level, and I am no exception.
As amazed as I am by your level of musicianship, I am even more taken by your open, trusting, and friendly nature. Many here have noticed this about you, and these characteristics are very evident in this comment you left. I am touched by what you wrote, and I am blessed that you have become a friend. Thank you for all this. [ Reply to This ]
As Intimate As Love Itself &mdash 03/10/08 - 01:59:49 AM
A beautiful interpretation of those powerful feelings we have for another person. Elegant in its simplicity, it conveys the quiet ecstasy that loving and being loved engenders.
Lucky you... and lucky Marion.
Yet another beautiful, soulful piece, Patrick. ;)
--- Joe [ Reply to This ]
Marion enjoyed reading this... &mdash 03/14/08 - 02:47:15 AM
Your comments always mean a great deal to me, Joe, and what you wrote here is so eloquent and articulate as to be poetry. It moves me that a song I wrote can inspire such thoughtful and powerful words. I have always appreciated what you've said in reaction to my music. Thank you very much, Joe. I am very pleased you like this. [ Reply to This ]
What a very &mdash 03/10/08 - 08:28:28 AM
beautiful composition - delicately played and recorded with feeling.
Cheers
Len
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Appreciate the listen &mdash 03/14/08 - 02:39:08 AM
~ &mdash 03/10/08 - 10:17:05 AM
You captured it, I believe...at least; it definitely rings true in my heart. Beautiful... [ Reply to This ]
From a great player... &mdash 03/14/08 - 02:38:24 AM
"Rings true in your heart." I was hoping for this kind of reaction. That it came from such a great player just gives it all the more impact. Thanks for listening and leaving this comment for me to enjoy, Bob. [ Reply to This ]
brilliant &mdash 03/10/08 - 11:53:16 AM
composition and tender playing form.......one beautifully crafted gem of music...!!!!! if she can inspire this kind of music , i would say she is a treasure!....love is supreme!!! [ Reply to This ]
That it is, Mcboy &mdash 03/11/08 - 02:50:35 AM
As always I am very grateful to hear from you. Marion was very touched by what you wrote, as well. I'm glad to know you found something in this song. That's a nice thing for me. [ Reply to This ]
Lessons learned. &mdash 03/10/08 - 12:44:35 PM
Thank-you Patrick for taking the time to listen to my songs, the kind words, and most of all the advise.
I joined Macjams to force my self to become a better guitar player and to try and evolve. I'm learning that there is so much more when it comes to music...not just how well you pluck the strings.
"For Marion" is a perfect example of painting a picture or telling a story without words. You did an amazing job with this piece. It has both moved me and motivated me.
Thanks again,
Trevor [ Reply to This ]
That's nice to know &mdash 03/11/08 - 02:43:39 AM
If listening to this song motivated you... That's a very good thing. I've not been told that many times in my life. Thanks for letting me know. [ Reply to This ]
patrick .... &mdash 03/10/08 - 04:52:44 PM
is a beauty of a tune written to i can see a beauty of a partner ... bleesed you r and this is wonderful [ Reply to This ]
Thank you, Jack. &mdash 03/11/08 - 01:28:54 AM
I agree that I am blessed by Marion's presence in my life. I'm glad you enjoyed the song. You are very kind. [ Reply to This ]
Stunning!!! &mdash 03/10/08 - 08:02:20 PM
This song moved me to tears. As a fan, I am constantly amazed at your compositions. You are the best of the best, but, I won't be your wife...unless you write something like this for me. [ Reply to This ]
Very kind of you &mdash 03/10/08 - 08:21:54 PM
How nice to know you were moved by this song. I appreciate your comment about my composing very much.
Won't be my wife unless I write something like this for you, too, eh? I'll tell you what: when the position opens up, I'll write you a song and send you flowers. How's that sound?
You, sir, are a bit of a goofball, is what you are, sir. [ Reply to This ]
A very &mdash 03/11/08 - 12:02:57 AM
nice and reflective piece. Straight from the heart. Really enjouable. I'm taking this one home with me.
One of the better, is always getting better. [ Reply to This ]
Mil gracias &mdash 03/11/08 - 01:27:21 AM
Thanks, Richard. I'm pleased you enjoyed it enough to take it home. I appreciate your visit and comment. [ Reply to This ]
Very beautiful piece of music &mdash 03/11/08 - 05:18:53 PM
and I have to say beautifully arranged and produced. The use of the cello works particularly well for me, adding depth and sweetness. Lovely melody, and a great sentiment as expressed in your introduction. This is a great piece of music, celebrating, from the sounds of it, a great love. Nicely done. Peace. [ Reply to This ]
So great to read this... &mdash 03/14/08 - 02:26:38 AM
It's very rewarding to hear comments like this from such a wonderful musician as yourself. It seems as though you gave this song a deep listen, and that makes me very pleased. Thank you so much, David. I very much appreciate what you wrote here. [ Reply to This ]
This is outstanding, Patrick... &mdash 03/13/08 - 07:40:13 AM
Beautifully composed, perfectly played, with deep emotion that is never schmaltzy... The phrasing in the piano in particular is just right, and the cello is complementary without ever sounding like decoration...
And, being a guy who also loves his wife, I thank you for this one. I think you got it right.
Ed [ Reply to This ]
Great to hear &mdash 03/14/08 - 02:14:47 AM
I'm very pleased to read what you wrote here, Ed. You are a man who has my respect, and if you think this song did what it was intended, that means a lot to me. Thank you for telling me that. [ Reply to This ]
mmmm &mdash 03/13/08 - 08:41:26 AM
oh gosh, this is just beautiful - full of colors from the heart from the very first measure. it's so poignant - there's an emotional flavor of appreciation for what could be lost and a joy in knowing it never can be. the cello works wonderfully with the fine fine piano. this is a lovely, classy expression of love. kudos to your fine creation!
anne [ Reply to This ]
My goodness... &mdash 03/14/08 - 02:14:29 AM
Ah... Anne, the way you described the "emotional flavor" makes me think, right or wrong, that you felt much of what I felt when I wrote this. That is deeply touching. It is what everyone writes music for, I think. It's certainly what I write it for. I am very grateful to you for expressing this to me. Very grateful... [ Reply to This ]
wow &mdash 03/13/08 - 09:51:28 AM
Mr. Falzaabi &mdash 03/13/08 - 06:52:14 PM
Patrick &mdash 03/13/08 - 04:53:23 PM
this is such a beautiful piece one can feel the tenderness and love. Beautiful melody and chords and the accompaniment for the wonderfully moving piano melody is perfect.... just beautiful and a DL for me, thank you, regards M [ Reply to This ]
Ah, thank you so much &mdash 03/13/08 - 06:51:48 PM
What a nice introduction to you, Maurice. So kind of you to listen and leave such a generous comment. I am very pleased you wanted to download this.
So great to read what you wrote... [ Reply to This ]
: ) &mdash 03/13/08 - 05:23:03 PM
BEAUTIFUL Playing...I actually thought it was Piano..!
So tender, with alot of 'substance' - don't know what word to use...chubby perhaps in a GOOD way - alot in it... : ) : ) Happy For You & Your Family...I have a big admiration for People who STAY married ! Here in Sweden about 40% of Marriges tend to breakup (I think its around that # but I can be wrong- Alot anyway!)Also here Many many many live together without being married - more than in Your country I'm sure . CONGRATULATIONS ! Tx Wonderful hearing this. . : )
Lena [ Reply to This ]
Nice of you, Lena &mdash 03/13/08 - 06:49:01 PM
Thank you, Lena. The piano sound is made by a plugin called Ivory. It's a great piece of software. I'm pleased you like it.
The divorce rate here in the USA is comparable, Lena. I am blessed...
Thank you for listening and leaving your nice words.
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Patrick this is superb &mdash 03/13/08 - 05:30:39 PM
the warmth and heart in this make it such a fine track... I really love your patience, how you wait and draw the emotion from each phrase before you move on... you have very few peers here... you're on another level altogether... the melody/meter is remenicenct of all the things I love about the classic celtic calls from the deep..
is Marion thrilled... ?? Lois sometimes asks me why never a song for her... usually when I write a song... it doesn't mater if I fail... I can just throw it away... but if I write that song, it completely maters.... I'm just afraid to let that one be average...
I would want it to be like this! [ Reply to This ]
Then there's *your* music... &mdash 03/13/08 - 06:38:22 PM
Brother Scott, if the assignment were to write an average song, you would fail. I do believe you are incapable of average. Your music goes right to my heart every time. I don't believe you understand how great a songwriter/player/arranger/singer you are. You are very, very gifted, Scott. This only makes your kind words about my song that much more meaningful to me. Thank you very much. [ Reply to This ]
Heart-feelings &mdash 03/14/08 - 04:51:15 AM
This song really touch my heart... You are a pro to write songs with emotions and this is so beautiful in many ways.
Thanks for sharing your feelings I really love this song.
Best wishes to you and your wife.
Take care
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Kenta [ Reply to This ]
Nice words from Sweden... &mdash 03/15/08 - 04:44:31 AM
Kenta, I have always found you to be a man who feels deeply, so to hear this from you is very nice. I appreciate what you've said here very much. Thank you, and blessings to you and your lovely wife as well. [ Reply to This ]
Beautiful &mdash 03/14/08 - 08:05:06 PM
composition beautifully played.You have a fantastic touch and play with great feeling.Just wonderful! [ Reply to This ]
Great to hear from you, Mark &mdash 03/14/08 - 08:19:25 PM
This is nice to hear from a great musician whose playlist on my iPod is extensive. As you well know, I am a huge fan of your composing and of your playing. I'm pleased that a song of mine was enjoyable to you as well. It's as if I were finally able to give something back to you for all the wonderful music of yours I now have and enjoy. Thanks very much, Mark. [ Reply to This ]
Just Wonderful! &mdash 03/14/08 - 09:47:54 PM
Well, it melted my heart. I am all over this one. The song, the production and arrangement all work to give you a heart rending piece that just so says what so many of us wish we could to our spouse. Thanks Patrick for saying it for us.
Stephen [ Reply to This ]
Hello, Stephen &mdash 03/15/08 - 04:46:06 AM
Reading something like this from a man whom I've not had the pleasure of meeting is such a joy... Even without having met you, I know you are a man of heart - I very much enjoyed your song for your beautiful granddaughter. There is great kindness in what you wrote here, Stephen, and it means a lot to me. Thank you very much. [ Reply to This ]
Very nice &mdash 03/16/08 - 01:21:23 PM
This is a beautiful piece. I love the interweaving of the piano and the cello. Great performance and arrangement.
I like how you return to solo piano at the end. Perfectly done. [ Reply to This ]
Nice words from a real pianist... &mdash 03/17/08 - 01:11:38 AM
Thank you very much, Kayle. I went to your artist's page here and listened to your beautiful piano music. I'm rather stunned I didn't know about you until now. Your playing is gorgeous, sophisticated, and warm. Your training shows. This all adds up to make your very nice comment here all the more meaningful. Much appreciated. [ Reply to This ]
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