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Description:
Suggestion and critique are welcome, song is still in progress, experimenting with mixing and mastering, might redo vocals...
Lyrics:
dont think of this as a goodbye, life after ours and all of the hours of our lives,
could not prepare us for the worst, fragmented promises and fabricated "I Love You's"
you say lets be friends, i dont think we will be friends ever again
you say you love me, you just arent quite in love with me.
the awkward silences were always louder than the way you ate that burnt meatloaf
you never made right.
the feeling of my heart exploding as you took your knife and cut it into thousand of pieces that would never fit tight
This isn't Goodbye, goodbye, goodbye
This isn't Goodbye, goodbye, goodbye
--but it is so long, so long as I never ever have to see you again for the next 20 years
--This song is revenge for the previous offense, flood gates are now closed steady our forces for attack
--head first into the fight, everything will be alright if you listen very close I'll lay it out so you know
--Please get your shit out of my place and then I want my Beatles and my Beach Boys and my Weezer CD's back
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I like &mdash 03/15/08 - 10:42:53 AM
I think the production on the vocals is just fine , Nice mix and the use of sounds I like the picture you paint with the sound . The song kinda remind me of They might be giants meet Polyphonic Spree. I dig it ! [ Reply to This ]
Well &mdash 03/15/08 - 12:23:22 PM
The main reason I'm reconsidering doing the vocals over is because, I used the computer microphone to record the vocals and I have a perfectly good condenser mic in the closet somewhere. I know i could make it better I just took the lazy way out and recorded on the spot.
Anyways thanks for your words of encouragement [ Reply to This ]
Sounds complete here &mdash 03/15/08 - 11:18:29 AM
I always listen on headphones and it sounds very good to my ears.Nice use of different elements,balanced mix and well done writing and songcrafting.Reminds me also very much of "They Might Be Giants".Very nice arrangement and delivery.Much enjoyed.
Blessings, [ Reply to This ]
Unique. &mdash 03/15/08 - 01:35:56 PM
This song has style. It can stand out not just because it is different but you really put some interesting musical elements. I haven't looked in your bio yet, but I suspected this song has a European flavor to it.
Only oine thing: I think it is a little bass-heavy, but maybe I just need to listen to it with more capable speakers.
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.. &mdash 04/21/08 - 03:34:32 AM
Music is one of the best ways to let Your feelings out...very nice song You've done ! You put words to what so many ppl go through in sometime of their lives ! Kudos to U : ) [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 04/21/08 - 03:48:18 AM
hahahahaa ! &mdash 04/23/08 - 02:30:58 AM
heh &mdash 04/23/08 - 02:57:07 AM
back for 2 lissen-just heard your remix &mdash 04/21/08 - 03:48:57 AM
I like the basssound here, & I like Your voice better here- it feels 'closer'more 'real' : ) more freshness here in my opionen, the balance btw the r&l earphone is better here, like i said(I'm a lissener)no musician ! KICKLIQUID ! I like that name ! [ Reply to This ]
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