Good to see you on here Kev! Good work! I hadn't heard this one. Welcome!

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very good tune here my friend ...I liked
your chords sequence here ..lovely I ll be
lookin to hear the last take of this .
and welcome to MJ :-)



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thanks a lot for the comments. Yeah i really workin on finishing it up but i have a lot of other tunes on the go right now.

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liked this one for its stripped down feel. i would tho, love to hear this with a full blown production. multi tracks, multi guitars, and either straight unplugged, or full band, either way would be cool. great songwriting. vocals a touch out at times, but i think if you did the multi track thing, you could give your voice and your guitar playing equal attention. nicely done, and welcome to MJ
Allen

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hey thanks for all the helpful comments i will take that stuff into concideration. I will start the production of it soon but im swamped with other original tunes that i am working on.

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song you have here. I like the feel and the arrangement works well. It sound like there are a few splices in there on the choruses. Overall strong posting.

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Very nice tune and great lyrics. I agree with previous posters - if you recorded the guitar first then sang over that you could get rid of some of the glitchy bits. But it has a raw quality which is very appealing. But come on, you're a young bloke - cheer up a bit and rock out!!

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hahha yeah my next song will be a bit more positive dont worry!
what do you mean sing over the guitar?

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He's assuming you did it all in one take. He's suggesting multitracking the guitar first and then the vocals.

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that's what I meant - sorry for the confusion!!

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