Nice Kev! That's one of your best written songs so far! Like how you used the cello. Still have yo work on getting some more signal from the mic to bring up the vocals, but you're getting better all the time.

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This is a great tune! I love it! Very cool how the cello fits!

I'm no expert and I have terrible voice but I like your vocal level. You might try compressing it and/or adding a little room echo. It will make it seem fuller!

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thanks a lot for the tips ill take that stuff into consideration cause this song is not exactly done yet there are still some bells and things to be added.

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I really like your singing.

I also like the production, I can hear the space you recorded in.

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yeah its all home recorded in my room with a condencer mic.

glad you like the singing!

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cool song. reminds me of something I'd hear on a Chili Peppers record. Nice work with everything.

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cool! i never thought of my style like that before. But i understand what you mean thanks for commenting on the tune i really appriciate it!



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wow wish i had a singin voice like you/ cool song!

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Its great that you like the vocals because ive never really cared for my voice when i sing. I guess it takes a while before you begin to enjoy your own voice!
if ya like this one check out my other tunes you might like em!

see ya

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You are a great young songwriter I can hardly wait to hear you in a few years when you have some real experience under your belt. I think you have the potential to be amongst the greats. Just pay attention to learning proper technique in all aspects of writing and performing. Take all advice with a grain of salt and suss out those who aren't BS'n you and stroking your ego, and keep those people close to you. They will never be afraid to tell you the truth and they are the ones who will elevate you to levels you never thought possible. Solicit critiques to thicken your skin and learn learn learn. You have a gift which is currently a diamond in the rough my young countryman and I am eager to see what comes of it.

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thanks for all the great advice. I have never thought that i would be able to get this far on original songs. i hope to become as good as possible and i also cant wait to see what i will write in the future, i guess all i can do is love the music and hope that it loves me back cause ill be doing this until i die.

thanks again for your wisdom, what you have said here will not be wasted!

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