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Battle for Ratings Pick Hill [LIOLI7] by rabittwhole [Email]
Genre: Rock

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Hits: 411
Comments: 30
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Plays: 64
Last Played: Sep 04, 2008 - 09:39:55 PM
Downloads: 20
Fans: 16
Uploaded: Mar 30, 2008 - 03:15:01 PM
Last Updated: Mar 31, 2008 - 02:44:13 PM
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Keywords:
loops (146), Loops (146), More loops (2), more loops 2 (1), did we say loops (1)
Description:
We were a command of young troops sent to defend Ratings Pick Hill from the advancing Elite Loop Blaster Brigade of Dr. Lioli. We held the line for two days until they began to bomb us with 5s and the line was lost. We threw every loop we had at them. We were so young ... so very young. Our last communication was sent as we were over run. We hope we have given you some time Mac Jams City .... remember us.

Lyrics:
every loop we had we hurled [sic]
and held the line for 48
then they bomb with fives alas
we check our ratings much too late
and thus we sealed our fate
oh great
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Excellent &mdash 03/30/08 - 03:32:29 PM
Very creative!

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well thank you mark &mdash 03/31/08 - 07:32:33 AM
much appreciated

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1.23456789, on a scale &mdash 03/30/08 - 03:37:48 PM
of -9.666 to 1.23456789666 almost got it per fect there, y'all

Better luck on the charts next life.

Right, then - This is cool! What's for lunch on me next time? Bon appetite!

. - Harold

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the boys &mdash 03/31/08 - 07:33:33 AM
had heard the legend of "grinding rock" ... was an inspiration to the end

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the charts man!!?? &mdash 03/31/08 - 09:30:51 AM
they don't need no stinking charts man..
they play to watch their fingers dance!

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Bring on the full metal jackets - &mdash 03/30/08 - 04:10:47 PM
the boys are up against it - and need reinforcement - they've put a mighty hurt on the enemy but so few can only do so much. Excellent post - hang in there.

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the mighty dog!! &mdash 03/31/08 - 07:44:14 AM
we have tried and failed ... revenge us my brother! and thanks bud ... u r da man!!

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Go! Go! Go! Go! &mdash 03/30/08 - 05:42:56 PM
Over the ridge and into the fearsome wall of the evil doctor's terrible Loop. Your young troops have become heroes this day, and their brave deed will be spoken of in mess halls for generations to come. MacJams City will never forget...

Excellent entry; love how the grim, determined pulse keeps building, notching up the action and mood as it goes!

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hello rik &mdash 03/31/08 - 07:36:05 AM
u are too kind and this has been fun ....

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My God!!! &mdash 03/30/08 - 06:14:33 PM

Absolutely brilliant love it. Great fun tune here you got going on.
Cheers.
'Download ! You bet your bottom doller'

Peace Dee xx




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the wonderful dee.... &mdash 03/31/08 - 07:37:16 AM
many of the boys had your picture inside their ruck sacks for comfort... thank you dee you are the best!

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Battle for Ratings Pick Hill &mdash 03/30/08 - 06:15:36 PM
You rock ....and who can forget !!

Hats off !!

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hello feter ..... &mdash 03/31/08 - 07:38:21 AM
we all took courage from your example .... thank you feter much appreciated!

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Love the story. &mdash 03/30/08 - 07:02:31 PM
The intro is great too. Love the electro-industrial drums, but the rock guitar is almost too much only because that loop is now engrained in my DNA. Cool looping you did in here. Everything is stitched together well, and your outro is like the intro, great.
-g

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loop burn..lol &mdash 03/31/08 - 07:39:47 AM
hi greg .. i do know what you mean ... this loop will not be used for awhile again...lol.. thanks for the kind comments!

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A true Warriors lament &mdash 03/30/08 - 08:46:53 PM
the young men of which you speak will forever hold a place of honor in MacJams City's history. We will never forget.

This is like listening to a radio play, something most of you have never done I'd guess. The action, the drama, the glory of a useless fight. Great stuff here Rab. congratulations, you've been awarded the MJC Universal Soldier Award, posthumously of course.

Thanks for doing it and posting it

Ed

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hello ed &mdash 03/31/08 - 07:41:53 AM
wow that was cool .... fortunately i do know about radio drama and that was a cool comment .... finish the job ed... we are counting on you!

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captured the whole thing... &mdash 03/31/08 - 10:47:32 AM
You weaved a pic, a story and a great tune all together here; and gave this whole lioli thing a feeling of playing a shooter vid game. The pic even reminds me of a mission from call of duty/finest hour. Then on top of that, you tease us with some INCREDIBLE guitar licks. A masterpiece production!

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wow... &mdash 03/31/08 - 11:51:03 AM
thanks WB .... mr. strat ...lol ... but really all of this was just loops ... we threw every loop we had at them ..... thanks man!

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Just keeps building its relentless beat &mdash 03/31/08 - 01:10:27 PM
Until the big climax - Rock on man! This is great stuff, cleverly put together.

Keep well, and bend a note or two for me....
Doug

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alright! &mdash 03/31/08 - 01:45:23 PM
"mr. Head Banger"!!! well thank you very much doug .... riky r and the rascals were a blast ... note bending us say thanks!

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hmmmm... &mdash 03/31/08 - 01:47:54 PM
so the cat looks comfy. ..

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Cool &mdash 03/31/08 - 01:56:26 PM
Cool description and it really matched the track as I was reading it. Very imaginative. The track is very good and all the sounds really go well together esp the guitars. Well done.

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hello dave {LL} &mdash 04/01/08 - 08:08:21 AM
is up to you know to knock the doc with your most excellent post! thanks man

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hey diviner &mdash 04/01/08 - 08:16:58 AM
man u r too cool .... thank you!

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I would have &mdash 03/31/08 - 08:14:21 PM
helped you fight off the 5s, but you didn't allow any voting!

Very creative, both in the description and in the tune. Rocking hard to Hamburger Hill!

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hello stu &mdash 04/01/08 - 08:15:02 AM
just checked out your oldfield post .... too cool man! and thanks for the listen!

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This is just... &mdash 07/12/08 - 08:51:29 PM
what the medic ordered, as I found it right after I took a hit and was almost blown off the hill. Alas I doubt I'll regain my position so with that said, I'll take this auditory medicine and try to hold my current position. This is so creative rabbitwhole. Thanks for sharing and making me smile with this cool song.

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man &mdash 07/12/08 - 11:46:28 PM
x2 thank you

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Battle &mdash 07/14/08 - 03:10:08 AM
Hey there. Great stuff. I enjoyed it.

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