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Do You (Version 2) by SinJimMusic [Email]
Genre: Electropop

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SONG STATS:
Hits: 252
Comments: 13
Votes: 3
Plays: 29
Last Played: Sep 17, 2008 - 02:45:15 PM
Downloads: 13
Fans: 5
Uploaded: Apr 10, 2008 - 04:59:54 PM
Last Updated: Apr 12, 2008 - 06:13:16 PM



Keywords:
Electropop (31)Do You (2)Dance (494)techno (332)electronic (280)Daft Punk (4)
Description:
This is version 2 of the song.

Let me know what you think about this one and what direction I should take it. I adjusted the notes on the vocoder here to make it different and finished the song. I added a guitar part to it, but I'm not sure about that one.

Hope you enjoy, thanks in advance for comments!

~SinJim

Lyrics:
Do You...
Want to...
Do you..?
Want to...?

Do you want make your dream true?
I think I can do this for you.
Let's see where this life will take us.
You're the only one I can trust.

Hardware:
Macbook, Yamaha DGX-203

Software:
Logic Pro 8
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Do You &mdash 04/10/08 - 05:32:53 PM
wow SJM - what an improvement over your first version! Your vocoder voice has much more variation now, and the whole song is MUCH more interesting. I like how you brought it around to the end, although the end feels a little abrupt to me - that's just a subjective thing though. Congratulations on sticking with this and bringing it to this fine state - great work!

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Re: Magna &mdash 04/10/08 - 05:47:43 PM
Thanks for the wonderful comments here, I really appreciate them. I'm glad that you enjoyed this one, hopefully I can adjust it a bit more and then make it downloadable. Thanks again for commenting!

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Nice going! &mdash 04/10/08 - 06:04:24 PM
This really has a good feel now!

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Re: Mark &mdash 04/10/08 - 06:25:50 PM
Thanks for the comments Mark, glad you enjoyed this one!

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Wows &mdash 04/10/08 - 06:33:37 PM
I kinda like this sort of stuff... I have check them both and your new one kick ass to H in my opinion simply love it... I wish I could DOWNLOAD it.

Cheers
---
Kenta

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Re: Kenta &mdash 04/10/08 - 06:45:11 PM
Wow, thanks for the comments here, I'll go and adjust it to downloadable if I can, if not, I'll re-upload it soon, I still have a few nitpickings to do. Thanks for listening, glad you enjoyed!

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Thanks &mdash 04/10/08 - 06:53:26 PM
I really love this... The beats the synths are all way too cool iy really kick ass... The guitar at the end are just right... Cheers

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Turned this one up, put my headphones &mdash 04/11/08 - 08:17:52 PM
on and enjoyed thoroughly! Very cool! Loved it when the guitar broke in.

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Re: Heightened &mdash 04/12/08 - 10:14:19 AM
Thanks for the comments, I'm glad you enjoyed this one

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creative &mdash 04/12/08 - 10:21:40 AM
i like the effects on the vocals. could come up a bit more so you can hear the words a little better perhaps. the effects are cool, but perhaps you can lessen them a tad so the words are understandable or put a second vocal track that's more clean in parts so with out the lyrics it's one understands what the song means. if you perhaps have a semi clean vocal echoing the effects track. the instrumental and song structure sounds good. i like how it builds up at the end.

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Re: Alex &mdash 04/12/08 - 11:29:54 AM
Thanks for the comments here, I do think I can bring the vocal volume level up and maybe reduce the effects. I'd like to do a clean vocal; however, I only have the mic on my mac (which is what I used for the original recording) so the quality would be crap. I appreciate the comments and I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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hmm &mdash 04/12/08 - 11:49:28 AM
perhaps not entirely clean but if you do it with just a touch of reverb or an effect that leaves it so you can still make out the words perhaps. echo also is great for hiding sketchy vocal recordings as well.

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Echo &mdash 04/12/08 - 02:30:12 PM
hmmm, good suggestion, I'll look into that.

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