wow SJM - what an improvement over your first version! Your vocoder voice has much more variation now, and the whole song is MUCH more interesting. I like how you brought it around to the end, although the end feels a little abrupt to me - that's just a subjective thing though. Congratulations on sticking with this and bringing it to this fine state - great work!

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Thanks for the wonderful comments here, I really appreciate them. I'm glad that you enjoyed this one, hopefully I can adjust it a bit more and then make it downloadable. Thanks again for commenting!

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This really has a good feel now!

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Thanks for the comments Mark, glad you enjoyed this one!

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I kinda like this sort of stuff... I have check them both and your new one kick ass to H in my opinion simply love it... I wish I could DOWNLOAD it.

Cheers
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Kenta

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Wow, thanks for the comments here, I'll go and adjust it to downloadable if I can, if not, I'll re-upload it soon, I still have a few nitpickings to do. Thanks for listening, glad you enjoyed!

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I really love this... The beats the synths are all way too cool iy really kick ass... The guitar at the end are just right... Cheers

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on and enjoyed thoroughly! Very cool! Loved it when the guitar broke in.

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Thanks for the comments, I'm glad you enjoyed this one

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i like the effects on the vocals. could come up a bit more so you can hear the words a little better perhaps. the effects are cool, but perhaps you can lessen them a tad so the words are understandable or put a second vocal track that's more clean in parts so with out the lyrics it's one understands what the song means. if you perhaps have a semi clean vocal echoing the effects track. the instrumental and song structure sounds good. i like how it builds up at the end.

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Thanks for the comments here, I do think I can bring the vocal volume level up and maybe reduce the effects. I'd like to do a clean vocal; however, I only have the mic on my mac (which is what I used for the original recording) so the quality would be crap. I appreciate the comments and I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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perhaps not entirely clean but if you do it with just a touch of reverb or an effect that leaves it so you can still make out the words perhaps. echo also is great for hiding sketchy vocal recordings as well.

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hmmm, good suggestion, I'll look into that.

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