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So, I took the advice of my respected fellow MacJammers, and also, just to make things interesting, today, I purchased a set of bongos, and my first electric guitar, It's bitchin! So I set out to redo this song today, and it's still rough, so please bear with me as I figure this all out. The vocals are sketchy right now, and I don't think I have all the guitars tuned properly. This is getting technical! I also changed the order of the lyrics a little bit.
Anyway, thanks in advance to all who may listen and comment and give suggestions as to how I can improve this song. I think it's worth the extra work. Do you?
Thanks again,
Stacey K. Black
Anyway, thanks in advance to all who may listen and comment and give suggestions as to how I can improve this song. I think it's worth the extra work. Do you?
Thanks again,
Stacey K. Black
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Stacey K. Black
she stares into the mirror for a long time
cataloging every feature into assets or flaws
when she decides flaw well she just paints it away
when she decides asset then she can get through one more day
she tries to hide her pain behind a mountain
a mountain made of nameless faceless wastes of time
one by one by one they disappoint her
and even one more day of breath won't help her learn
breathe easy on your way up
breathe easy cause we'll all fall
breath easy on your way down
breathe easy cause we're all flawed
he thinks his own happiness lies elsewhere
he looks into every outstretched hand offered
and ultimately those hands come up empty
if he'd look into his own he might finally see
breathe easy on your way up
breathe easy cause we'll all fall
breath easy on your way down
breathe easy cause we're all flawed
Stacey K. Black
she stares into the mirror for a long time
cataloging every feature into assets or flaws
when she decides flaw well she just paints it away
when she decides asset then she can get through one more day
she tries to hide her pain behind a mountain
a mountain made of nameless faceless wastes of time
one by one by one they disappoint her
and even one more day of breath won't help her learn
breathe easy on your way up
breathe easy cause we'll all fall
breath easy on your way down
breathe easy cause we're all flawed
he thinks his own happiness lies elsewhere
he looks into every outstretched hand offered
and ultimately those hands come up empty
if he'd look into his own he might finally see
breathe easy on your way up
breathe easy cause we'll all fall
breath easy on your way down
breathe easy cause we're all flawed
Mystified
Indeed...i've identified with that notion for what seems AGES, now!
I really like this song--i love the way you've interpreted it vocally. Gorgeous!
I can't really critique anything here. I just know I really enjoyed listening :)
thank you for posting and sharing this here at MJs!