lissened to Your first version first & I like thatone more- its more tempo & 'feeling' in the first but this may be better produced(?) don't know I'm no Musician... Thank YOu for putting Your Music here !! GREAT : ) lena

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aww, well thank you.

Its not that the first one is bad its just a little to bassy for my liking and I wanted to redo the vocals anyways so I figured I might as well remaster it as well.

You seem like a fun person and I hope to hear more from you in the future. I can already tell you will have fun being a part of this great Music community

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Great artwork! I didn't listen to the first version but this one sounds good to me. Beatles, Beach Boys, and Weezer. Those artists are all in my collection also. Great mixing/mastering on this. I really enjoyed the musical landscape you painted.

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the first mix but this seems OK - although I'm listening through some truly awful PC speakers at work that have no bass whatsoever. I normally listen to mixes on a variety of systems - the car is a good place to listen. See how it sounds 'tonally' against some 'good sounding' commercial CDs. I wouldn't get too worried by how much bass or treble but rather 'can I follow the bass line' or 'can I hear the words' etc... I'm not sure whay there's an 'explicit' warning! I didn't see any reason for it and it might put some people off listening (perhaps I'm so used to bad language at work I didn't even hear it).

Good post. It's obvious that you've spent a lot of time on it.

All the best
Peter

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for all the great suggestions. I do plan on taking it in the car to listen too, I also plan on taking it to my parents house to their truly horrible PC speakers as the ultimate test seeing as half of America probably operate with default PC speakers like theirs.

It has the explicit tag because of one bad word, I know thats it's a minor dent in the fabric of all things explicit but i figure if this site has children I just wanted to forewarn people. I too am use to cursing like a sailor so I never know when I've crossed the line. I figure this way I don't have to think about it to much. It was never meant to scare anyone off. I'm such a crazed perfectionist that I will obsess over a mix for months, that is why I never record a lot of music and half the time I just give up and throw up what I have.

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going to mention a weezer-ish sound here!

I really like your music. I think this sounds great. Your vocal doubling with the whisper backing on the 2nd stanza is awesome. I cant believe that more people havent caught on to your songs yet, Im glad you posted in the forums:)

Listening in on my sennheiser bones and the only thing I could wager a guess that you may be wanting to add is something a little thicker in the midrange... which probably doesnt help seeing as you just got done mixing your bass and treble again :) I dont know, could just be me.. I think this is fine and tons of fun.. even your cute lil falsetto works with it:) I wouldnt change it much if at all.

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thanks for the suggestions I was actually pining over the mid range myself so good call, I might go back and boost them up a little on certain instruments. I also appreciate the positive review of the song. If i was someone else listening to my music I'd probably rip myself a new one ;)

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sounds fine to me. i haven't heard the other version, but perhaps you turned the bass down a tad too much. over all sounds like a well put together song.

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I might boost the bass while Im in boosting the mid range... thanks for the suggestion screamalexz

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I love the instrumental and your voice sounds very cool.. you can try to give a different kind of efx to your vocals... just my opinion.. Well done

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