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Description:
album: 32 Degrees of Freedom
track 1: 0:20 Fanfare
track 2: 4:16 Peace Will Prevail
track 3: 7:12 I'll Be A Free Bird
track 4: 7:48 The Apathy Song
track 5: 2:42 This Old Cup
track 6: 3:33 Horizon
track 7: 7:22 All Natural Dating Service
track 8: 4:48 Vernal Equinox
track 9: 6:40 My Poison
track 10: 4:36 Say Goodbye
track 11: 2:10 Lawn Service Choir
track 12: 5:48 Supernova
...more albums...
Song Description
see original:
http://www.macjams.com/song/42206
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Ideas can kill.
Ideas can kill a mode of behavior, and allow a new way of thinking to begin.
Ideas can be a rebirth.
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This is entirely a work of fiction.
-- Mary Jane
Lyrics:
My Poison
He left a comment -- on my song
A proposition -- all along
I almost laughed -- and then I sighed
I typed a LOL -- and I let it slide
My mind was poisoned -- by that thought
My brain is poisoned -- by the thought
I thought I knew -- all along
But what I knew -- it was totally wrong
He fed me poison -- in my brain
A proposition -- quite insane
I started laughing -- I couldn't stop
Dead in my tracks -- by the very thought
(c)2008 Bill Grundmann
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My Poison &mdash 04/25/08 - 07:58:23 PM
Here ...this is your right place ..your
vocal and passion ..this is a killer song
my friend ..wonderful and powerful ..
so interguing mixing and effects ..this is
brilliant production ...yes feter said this
is all the blues on a summer day !!!
thnx for share such master piece !!! [ Reply to This ]
Can't say I've heard anything like this here &mdash 04/25/08 - 09:33:01 PM
you are a true original - and blow me completely away. Tremendous arrangement and excellent vocals and lyrics. But the vibe - the feel - that's the thing that's killer.
I got chills. [ Reply to This ]
My Poison. &mdash 04/25/08 - 09:38:22 PM
Hi Mary thank you for your link anytime sweetie.
Yep love this its brilliant lovely voice you have. love it
Mj Comment . What a great concept. Will I have to read all the comments
on your page now to see which comment it was LOL :)
I like the idea of this.
Beautiful Production Mary. Really was .
Peace Love Respect
Dee xx [ Reply to This ]
Yeah... &mdash 04/25/08 - 10:25:43 PM
...delicious poison...quite enjoyable...someone's ears must be burning. [ Reply to This ]
like what you did here &mdash 04/26/08 - 04:49:40 AM
Great use of effects. If you were going for a trippy feel, you sure capture that, with a sort of jazzy thing, too.
Nice job,
LL [ Reply to This ]
A very interesting &mdash 04/26/08 - 05:12:05 AM
and unusual track which leaves me feeling drugged LOL I don't know about 'poisoned'. Very hypnotic and well thought out and performed. I love the piano with it's seductive 'Bolero' snake-like rhythm, caressing and winding forward accompanying the execllent echoing vocals. Loved it, regards M [ Reply to This ]
.... &mdash 04/26/08 - 06:24:58 AM
This is right on.... Kinda love what you've done here my friend This is an gold keeper... Thanks for this one you saved my day ;)
Peace, Love & Respect
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Kenta [ Reply to This ]
Nice! &mdash 04/26/08 - 07:35:16 AM
Very nice song here. Nice instrumentation and very good vocals on it. I'm in love with these effects. Nicely done!
Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi [ Reply to This ]
VERY COOL! &mdash 04/26/08 - 08:03:02 AM
Heh heh... I hope this want from a comment I left!!! Wow!
Anyway this is a GREAT tune! [ Reply to This ]
poisoned &mdash 04/26/08 - 06:50:00 PM
ya know I never know if LOL is laugh out loud or lots of luck. Digging the bass in this some classic changes in this almost minor jazz sounding. I would have liked to hear a part with out the vocals echoing. Just my opinion. Loved it great feeling in this! [ Reply to This ]
fess up time &mdash 04/26/08 - 09:29:11 PM
OK, no echo and some other effects:
http://www.macjams.com/song/42206
LOL [ Reply to This ]
I can't decide... &mdash 04/26/08 - 10:31:41 PM
I dunno which is better, this one or that one... I like the echoey swirlies, but I like the natural voice (sans artifacts) too. Maybe I'll listen to them both.
Great work you two!
ttfn,
Drakonis [ Reply to This ]
I started &mdash 04/27/08 - 10:45:09 AM
off with the thought that whatever this is it can't possibly be as good as the other version. How wrong was that? What an amazing production. Bill, you are a true original - and both of these songs are too. Both downloaded now. Thanks.
Cheers
Len
[ Reply to This ]
Like this &mdash 04/27/08 - 11:57:30 AM
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vocal and passion ..this is a killer song
my friend ..wonderful and powerful ..
so interguing mixing and effects ..this is
brilliant production ...yes feter said this
is all the blues on a summer day !!!
thnx for share such master piece !!!
[ Reply to This ]