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Wow, I actually had a difficult time tagging on a Genre for this song. Although it is not done, I have decided to put the base of it on here to get some suggestions, I'm not satisfied with the vocals so I'm going to end up redoing them. Im also going to add some more instruments to the chorus part, definitely a bass, and more than likely a Wurlitzer Piano of some sort.
Any Suggestions to get this song more polished would be much appreciative, thanks guys. :)
Any Suggestions to get this song more polished would be much appreciative, thanks guys. :)
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Lyrics
there's no weight left in these words; a broken promise hell hath flood with joy
the saviors dead, the morning star raise the dead from all the wars.
Their weary bones are weak with sin, their solemn fates are sealed within
You go to where from which you came, six feet under above the flame
your stary gaze upon the gates of fairytales , you were quite brave
to think he would've saved us all from ourselves but saved nothing at all
at all
at all
nothing at all
Come to me with open arms
Feel the Burn within your veins
I am everything you want to be
I am the nothing and the everything
I am you... I am you... I am...
the saviors dead, the morning star raise the dead from all the wars.
Their weary bones are weak with sin, their solemn fates are sealed within
You go to where from which you came, six feet under above the flame
your stary gaze upon the gates of fairytales , you were quite brave
to think he would've saved us all from ourselves but saved nothing at all
at all
at all
nothing at all
Come to me with open arms
Feel the Burn within your veins
I am everything you want to be
I am the nothing and the everything
I am you... I am you... I am...
LunaTrick
I like the harmony in the chorus - but the vocals sound a bit dry in the mix if you don't mind me saying so. Your lyrics are apocalyptic - and suggestive - which is good!