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Yesterday (1st cut) by brebell226 [Email]

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Comments: 2
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Plays: 22
Last Played: Jun 22, 2008 - 05:32:38 PM
Downloads: 18
Fans: 3
Uploaded: Apr 26, 2008 - 10:00:56 PM
Last Updated: Apr 26, 2008 - 10:00:56 PM



Description:
an unexpected love song i wrote... this is the first cut and i'm looking for tips.

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this is nice &mdash 04/27/08 - 11:55:54 AM
i like the real piano and your voice is great. what you did is awesome, but if it was me i would: bring in a cleaner piano sound when the vocals start (maybe fade the first out while the other comes in). i really like the sound you have but it's a little thin and distorted. but it's really cool sounding.

i would also make the drums louder and add a bass. maybe some acoustic guitar chords over the chorus. i like when you do bring in the guitar about 3/4s of the way in.

really nice song though, almost like an old motown song. i really liked it.

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Echo what Micheal said... &mdash 04/28/08 - 08:56:56 AM
Catchy song and love your vocals!

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