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How could I make this song better?
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| ynot said 576 days ago (April 28th, 2008) | |
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I agree the background is pretty simple and does get a little boring as the song goes on. I did leave it that way intentionally to place more emphasis on the vocals (and to challenge myself) but now that you point it out, there are definitely pieces that could be added that would probably add to the overall feel of the song. Thanks for taking the time to give your opinion. I really appreciate it. Check out my latest song called I Just Wanna Shine
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| said 576 days ago (April 28th, 2008) | |
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Leon is right! I can't have anything to add over Leon's comment by how could you make this song better. Wonderful job! Take Care - Yeman A. Al-Rawi |
| ynot said 576 days ago (April 28th, 2008) | |
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again thanks for the listens and comments on my two latest. Check out my latest song called I Just Wanna Shine
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| mowguy3 said 576 days ago (April 28th, 2008) | |
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Find You I enjoyed it begening to end. Strong vocals. Thanks, Russ Check out my latest song called A Different Shade Of Moonlight
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| MarkHolbrook said 576 days ago (April 28th, 2008) | |
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I like it as it is! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge
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| ynot said 576 days ago (April 28th, 2008) | |
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as it is alright! I'm glad it's not sounding unfinished to you... that's a good sign. thanks Check out my latest song called I Just Wanna Shine
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| gail60 said 569 days ago (May 4th, 2008) | |
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excellent You sing so well. What a catchy tune. I am very impressed and enjoy your music. Thanks for sharing! Check out my latest song called Sweet September
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| Roll said 566 days ago (May 8th, 2008) | |
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Nice RnB Nice RnB, man) My only advice is to add at least one interval to the chorus to make it more different from the verses. Check out my latest song called Still In Tha Game
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| ynot said 565 days ago (May 8th, 2008) | |
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thanks good suggestion. Check out my latest song called I Just Wanna Shine
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| thetiler said 546 days ago (May 27th, 2008) | |
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good vocal nice backround music as well for this. I am amazed that you have a lower score. From the music I've heard and the quality of your vocal, it doesn't seem right that you have a lower score like this. Like the subtle addition of the strings,nice! Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| soulpoet said 450 days ago (September 1st, 2008) | |
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DOPE!!!! woah man!!! you sing good dude keep it up. we should collab over a willbill track Check out my latest song called Fade to Snow (produced by DJ Straight 8)
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Leon
I give you props for tackling this kind of music, which i find very difficult to put lyrics to and has little structure to follow. Yet you succeed in making this a very listenable song. It has a jazzy pop appeal and although it does not have a defined central chorus, you kept the vocals/melody varied and lyrics interesting enough to give it some rise and development. The weakness of this song is the rather monotonous flow of the music and its persistent lack of complexity, but your vocals more than made up for it i guess. Again, I was surprised at how effective your voice is and how well you did the harmonies. The background music could need stronger and more vibrant percussions and probably some drama-adding strings in the later part. Altogether a very commendable effort that shows more your musical and vocal versatility.