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Here's my newest recording. Hope you like it.
I started enjoying playing piano more recently. I had so much fun playing this song.
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Lyrics
Toast And A Submarine

As I doze off
you touch my cheeks
and say my beard feels like
a dry toast

It's 8 in the morning
when dream and reality cross over

You and I are
toast and margarine
It doesn't taste so nice without each other
It takes 2 to be us

I know I'm slow in the morning
But you have certain weakness too
Let me think I'm sure you do
You'd become like a brick in the water

Load up our dream and hope
Sail on in the dark water

You and I are
a coast and a submarine
When you are tired of swimming
take a rest on my coast
You and I are
toast and a submarine
Two of us We can be carefree
in the rough sea

You and I are
toast and margarine
It doesn't taste so nice without each other
It takes 2 to be us
You and I are
toast and a submarine
Two of us We can be carefree
in the rough sea
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Uploaded: Apr 29, 2008 - 06:30:59 PM
Last Updated: Apr 29, 2008 - 06:36:15 PM Last Played: Nov 18, 2017 - 08:44:08 AM
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ledebutant said 3494 days ago (April 30th, 2008)
Hooray!
I'm always so happy when you post a new song and this is a wonderful one. These lyrics capture so beautifully the carefree whimsy of love and they're tremendously original and specific (something I just expect from you).

I love you on the piano. I hope you do more of that. It's a great sound for you.
jesushairdo said 3493 days ago (April 30th, 2008)
thank you!
thank you very much for taking time to comment!
i used to hate playing piano when i was an teenager. but now i wish
that i didnt quit taking lessons back then!
Check out my latest song called Dawning
jesushairdo said 3493 days ago (April 30th, 2008)
thank you!
thank you very much for taking time to comment!
i used to hate playing piano when i was an teenager. but now i wish
that i didnt quit taking lessons back then!
Check out my latest song called Dawning
damiengh said 3493 days ago (April 30th, 2008)
put together nicely
Liked the lyrics and how you put this song together.

You've crafted a great pop tune, one that touches all the right places with good use of your piano and the right touch of guitar. Nice builds throughout. You certainly are quite skilfull and could easily get yourself a hit record with the right connections and promotion. Don't give up, you got talent and you should be persistant.

Your voice expresses the feelings quite well and breaks through any language barrier.

Nice work.
Check out my latest song called Tea and Scones
jesushairdo said 3493 days ago (April 30th, 2008)
thanks damiengh
thank you very much for listening and taking time to comment!
this is really really encouraging!
Check out my latest song called Dawning
chipan said 3493 days ago (April 30th, 2008)
Very professional
This mix is excellent and your song writing is top notch!
This could be released in Japan and I'm sure it would do well. Great job!

chip
Check out my latest song called Psalm 107
jesushairdo said 3493 days ago (April 30th, 2008)
thank you!
hi chipan-san. thank you very much for your comment.
one of these days, i hope my songs would get noticed!
Check out my latest song called Dawning
Einarus said 3492 days ago (May 1st, 2008)
Excellent!
Dude, your stuff is always so catchy and fun it's a wonder why you haven't made it big time...

Excellent writing, great production and very good performance!

The only thing that bothered me was that I thought the hi-hat was a tad too much to the left for my taste... but this is still a great song!

Excellent!

-Einar S.
Check out my latest song called "I Hate Goodbyes"
jesushairdo said 3406 days ago (July 26th, 2008)
thanks!
hey einarus! thanks for your comment!
yeah, i agree. i should turn down the hi-hat a little bit.
i think it got too loud when i was doing the final mixing
and equalised the whole tracks.
Check out my latest song called Dawning
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