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There seems to be a lot of sadness around lately. It is a fact of life. So to get past that, I have been trying to write a happy song. For whatever reason, I could not do it. I wrote this and could not get it out of my head. Someone told me the only way I could move on was to let this out, that it needed to be said. So here it is...I ask you ahead of time to forgive me for doom and gloom. I just needed to release these feelings. God's blessings to each of you and your families. You have sure blessed me with your support and friendsips here.
Lyrics:
Open your eyes
Take a deep breath
First there is life
And then there is death
He was only 18
And his heart was broken
There was no one who knew
No words he had spoken
And then one day
He threw his life away
And left us standing here
Open your eyes
Take a deep breath
First there is life
And then there is death
She was only 18
And she was always alone
She thought everyone else
Had somewhere better to go
And then one day
She threw her life away
And left us standing here
Why am I standing here
Standing here
I didn't want to let you go
Let me make it clear
You were so dear
I'm sorry I didn't let you know
And then one day
You threw your life away
And left us standing here
Standing here
Standing here
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so much to say &mdash 04/29/08 - 11:25:29 PM
Standing here, looking at the same teenage world through the same parents' eyes... time for a huge group hug. Parents and kids. Thank you for sharing this very touching song... beautifully written and performed and sung, and as always, heartfelt.
ttfn,
Drakonis [ Reply to This ]
Thanks Drak &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:17:42 PM
Your comments mean so much because as you said...we relate very well on this subject. I am glad you were touched by this one. I appreciate your care and support more than you could know! [ Reply to This ]
Simply absolutely gorgeous &mdash 04/29/08 - 11:26:42 PM
beyond belief... The vocals alone are amazing! The piano... well what more can be said... I'm floored!
Gorgeous Gail... Gorgeous! [ Reply to This ]
Aww Mark &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:19:49 PM
If I ever go on the road, you would have to go with me...you are such a sweet fan. You make me smile and also blush with your comments and emails. You are truly too kind and I love every second of it :) Thanks Mark! [ Reply to This ]
wow &mdash 04/29/08 - 11:30:30 PM
I'm speechless. This is absolutely gorgeous. Perfect vocals - your voice is amazing. The lyrics are so heartbreakingly beautiful. I love the harmonies, and of course your piano playing is as full of emotion as your singing. Gail, you are so very talented - thank you for sharing this with us. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks Shay &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:21:34 PM
I really appreciate your comments. I am glad you liked this song. It may be a tearjerker, but you know some days...you just need a good cry. Thanks again [ Reply to This ]
Standing Here &mdash 04/29/08 - 11:31:13 PM
Gail, this is magnificent! Your vocals are stunning, every note thoughtful and rich. This is one of your best - thank you [ Reply to This ]
Aha Karen...or is it me, myself and you &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:23:05 PM
You are a sweetheart dear lady and you really give me a good laugh when I need it the most. I appreciate your kind words and support and humor! Thanks for listening and commenting. Glad you enjoyed! [ Reply to This ]
Lovely piece &mdash 04/29/08 - 11:32:01 PM
As I said in the chat. Some solo strings would flesh it out nicely - perhaps add some tension in the breaks. Wonderful singing! [ Reply to This ]
I wish Gail &mdash 04/30/08 - 07:47:33 AM
was surrounded by a killer Mac Pro with Logic and GarageBand and all the required audio interfaces... Wow... what a music machine we would have!
She does this stuff with a sampler! It has some stored sounds but like she said in chat "I don't have a very good cello". [ Reply to This ]
Thanks LunaTrick &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:26:42 PM
Thanks LunaTrick
Glad you stopped by. I am limited as to what I can add, but I appreciate your input and I agree with you on the strings. My cello choices on my keyboard sound like poo though.... Thanks for the comments. Take care.
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You tell... &mdash 04/29/08 - 11:45:28 PM
...such a sad story in such a tender and beautiful way. Gail, your vocals here are wonderful: restrained, nothing fancy, just clear as a bell and with a quality that is just so pleasant to listen to. The piano backs this all up beautifully, though I, too, hear more of a string bed behind this to give it a bit more breadth and warmth. But even so, it is just quite wonderful as it is. (I hope you won't mind one small suggestion. The vocal lead seems a bit loud in the mix. Maybe it is on my end only. Don't know. Maybe just take it down a tad.)
I am thankful for having heard this beautiful number.
Peace.
Paul [ Reply to This ]
Hello Paul &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:31:11 PM
Awww so good to see you here. I have not made my way back to your songs and I apologize for that...I have no excuses that even matter. I love your music and need to get by asap and I will.
I agree that the vocals could be quieter but this is just one of those post it or forget it...so I posted. I am glad you liked the song though and appreciate your kind comments very much! [ Reply to This ]
Lovely as you &mdash 04/30/08 - 12:00:10 AM
A very touching song, Gail. Comes at a great time for this community. Your beautiful heart is all over this piece. Thank you for bringing it to us. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks Patrick &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:33:30 PM
I have found that you and I have alot in common in matters of the heart my friend. You are just a softie and I appreciate your support and friendship in this community. You are so kind and helpful and I thank you for that. Glad you were touched by this and thank you for the sweet compliments. [ Reply to This ]
Standing Here &mdash 04/30/08 - 12:17:55 AM
magical and awesoem as always ....so touched
and delicate ...full of passions one of your
best Gail ...thnx alot for sharn such gem !! [ Reply to This ]
Feter!!! &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:35:52 PM
Thank you friend. I am glad you liked this one. You are such a supportive and kind friend. Thank you so much for the nice comments. You are the best! [ Reply to This ]
Standing Here &mdash 04/30/08 - 12:35:53 AM
This song is so packed with powerful images.Beauty amongst the darkness.I am so moved at what I have just heard,and moved you would share the recent events with us here.May the Lord of all give peace and closure Gail.
Daniel [ Reply to This ]
Thank you &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:38:44 PM
Daniel, how kind of you. Thank you very much. Things are much better, but it is just hard to pick up and move on when there is a loss of someone you care about...regardless of the circumstances. Life can be so hard and painful at times. I am grateful for the many blessings in my life and also grateful for the kindness and support of MacJams people such as yourself. Much appreciated!! [ Reply to This ]
Hi &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:50:06 AM
This is a great song. I love it and you sing very good.
Wish I could play on this.........
Take care
Thomas [ Reply to This ]
Thank you kindly &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:42:27 PM
Hello Thomas, thanks for the listen. I am happy that you liked the song and my singing. Are you asking for me to send you an mp3 of this to play with or joking? If you want to, send me your email or email me at gwasme60@yahoo.com. Thanks! [ Reply to This ]
Great! &mdash 04/30/08 - 06:57:04 AM
The vocals are simply magnificent. The playing is superb as always and what a story? KUDOS for this work! I'm really impressed by the sound and the song I'm hearing! God Bless You!
Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi [ Reply to This ]
Hi Yeman! &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:45:10 PM
You are too nice. Thanks so much. I am thrilled you like the song and humbled by your words. Glad you like this. Much appreciated Yeman. [ Reply to This ]
right then gail &mdash 04/30/08 - 08:05:14 AM
i was blown away when you honored me with a sneek peek ... and this final is stunning in so many ways. i understand the sense of dread in baring one's inner thoughts ... but tis the cost of wonderful music ... and this is a "gem". from someone who writes such "fluff" lyrics at time i am humbled by these meaningful and timely lyrics you have penned .... amazing stuff .... and i remain...
your biggest fan
thanks for letting the rest of us share in this beauty.
jack [ Reply to This ]
Hello Jack &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:49:47 PM
I am honored by your support and friendship as always. I appreciate you so much and your comments are too kind. I am glad you liked the song and I am thankful for your advice prior to posting. I just kind of panicked at the last, trying to talk myself out of it and then....well here it is. :) Thanks Jack and I am glad you are my biggest fan. It means alot to me!! [ Reply to This ]
gail &mdash 04/30/08 - 10:19:28 AM
this is beautiful. just perfect as is. the teenage years are hard, it feels like you're standing on the edge of a cliff; they have no idea of all the options that are there for them.
i hope that whoever you wrote this for will get past the rough times. it's good they have you. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks Michael &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:53:35 PM
Teen years are crazy....they are difficult for many and sadly, some do not survive. My heart hurts for the ones that have lost a loved one who may have gave up, especially when there was no warning. Michael, Thank you for the sweet compliments and the listen. You are so kind and I appreciate what you bring to this place! [ Reply to This ]
beautiful lyrics &mdash 04/30/08 - 10:50:33 AM
Your lyric writing in this song is your best so far. You tell the story with out any unneeded words. Simple and beautiful. [ Reply to This ]
Hi Warden &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:58:00 PM
You know how much I value your opinion because you know me better than anyone here, even as unfortunate as that may be for you :)
Thank you for listening to this and I appreciate what you said about it being my best. Thanks for your support of my music and as I have mentioned many times, I would not even be here if it were not for you! Thank you. [ Reply to This ]
Gail &mdash 04/30/08 - 11:13:23 AM
This is superb and though it's a song of sadness it's very beautiful and beautifully sung. I love those harmonies.... but the simplicity of singing alone with the piano is what makes it for me. Your voice is really lovely, cheers M [ Reply to This ]
Aww Maurice! &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:59:52 PM
Thank you so much. I really do appreciate that. I am happy that you liked this song in all of its simplicity. It is a deep subject but one I finally gave into posting. Thank you so much for your very kind words. I always enjoy hearing from you! [ Reply to This ]
Hi Gail..... &mdash 04/30/08 - 01:30:34 PM
This is a very poignant song.
I enjoyed it so much, as with all your beautifully crafted and thoughtful, delicate pieces.
Take care.
A secret fan. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks! &mdash 04/30/08 - 03:08:13 PM
I really appreciate that Paul. Compliments from Mr Creativity himself mean alot to me. Thanks for the kind words and for listening. [ Reply to This ]
Excellent Gail &mdash 04/30/08 - 02:19:52 PM
so well played... and so well sung... you show a great emotional range... the notes chosen in the duet are perfect... I also love the echoing vocal lines... I often build my vox around that sort of thing...
very very nicely done [ Reply to This ]
My favorite Scott!! &mdash 04/30/08 - 03:11:38 PM
Where have you been??? I have missed seeing you. Thanks for taking the time out for me, that means so much! Your compliments mean the world to me as I am such an admirer of your music. I am looking forward to your next post more than you can imagine! Please Please Please.... Thanks so much for the comments Scott! [ Reply to This ]
I didn't notice you standing there &mdash 04/30/08 - 04:21:15 PM
and I the lessor for it. This is a song for the ages my friend. It talks to a subject that is often swept under the rug like so much dust, but the needs to be brought into the light and minds of everyone. So many young people do not understand that they are not alone, because too many adults are not paying attention to the little signs they give us every day about how they are feeling.
This is a very beautiful and amazing song Gail. Your vocal is inspiring as is you piano playing.
Thank you for this beautiful Song Gail. Kudos and Bravo to you for sharing it with the world.
Be well my dear friend.
Ed [ Reply to This ]
Thanks Ed &mdash 05/01/08 - 11:38:05 PM
My favorite cowboy! Thank you for your kind words. You are always just too nice to me. I really appreciate that more than you know. I am glad that you could feel what I had hoped people would feel. You are the best Ed. Thank you. [ Reply to This ]
God bless you Gail! &mdash 04/30/08 - 06:41:20 PM
I can't express what this song did to my heart! Maybe I'll sort it out and tell you later. But as for now, I can only say that what a joy it is to hear you singing out what your fingers have been expressing. I'm keeping this one. Please don't stop! Terry [ Reply to This ]
awww Terry &mdash 05/01/08 - 11:42:17 PM
I appreciate the sweet comments. I know that it is a very touchy subject and glad that it reached your heart. So glad you listened and liked it. Take care Terry and thanks so much! [ Reply to This ]
Speechless &mdash 04/30/08 - 07:04:52 PM
I just sit still and listen OKAY right now this is my third listening... And I can tell you I come to listen many times on this one.... I'm very glad you let this come out... God bless you and all people on earth.. Amen.
Peace, Love & Respect
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Kenta [ Reply to This ]
Thanks Kenta &mdash 05/01/08 - 11:44:56 PM
That means alot coming from you. I respect your talent and opinion very much. Thank you for stopping by and listening to this. I really appeciate it. God Bless you also! [ Reply to This ]
Tender and Touching &mdash 04/30/08 - 08:24:35 PM
The more I hear you sing, Gail, the more I am reminded of Roberta Flack, who paints aural portraits with her vocal stylings.
The topic here is heavy, to say the least, but you treat it with wonderful sincerity and taste.
Now, be happy... and write happy. ;)
--- Joe [ Reply to This ]
Thanks Joe &mdash 05/01/08 - 11:49:10 PM
You are so kind. Roberta Flack huh? Wow..I only wish. Thank you for that. Yes, this topic is heavy but still needed to be said...er sung. I appreciate your support and kind comments. Take care and all the best to you Joe. [ Reply to This ]
Beautiful &mdash 04/30/08 - 10:27:50 PM
playing and singing.This is a really emotional song- you have done a wonderful job with it. [ Reply to This ]
Hi Mark &mdash 05/01/08 - 11:52:29 PM
Yes, Very emotional and very hard to discuss. Difficult to realize how much we take for granted sometimes. I am grateful for your visit and compliments. I enjoy listening to your music Mark and look forward to the next one. Thanks! [ Reply to This ]
First: &mdash 05/01/08 - 11:35:33 AM
I won't even say "GREAT" or anything like that. It is what it is...as fundamental as the ground on which we stand.
Second: I've never been able to get "up" by listening to happy tunes when I'm sad. I've always had to either listen to/play/or write a song that is what I'm feeling. The more we push the bad away, the longer it stays with us...it's why time flies when your having fun and crawls when...
Have to allow life to be what it is and let it flow through us before we can truly move on...I can see you've done this here...thanks, Gail. And I'm sorry for your pain. [ Reply to This ]
Yes! &mdash 05/01/08 - 11:55:13 PM
I know exactly what you mean. I am the same way. I have had a difficult time dealing with death lately and a comforting way I can deal sometimes is through the music. Thus this song. Very moody, very sad, and just real. Thank you for your comments Bob. They mean alot to me. Be well. [ Reply to This ]
Wow, Gail... &mdash 05/02/08 - 06:43:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me. I'm so glad you posted this one. I want every teenager and his/her parents of to listen to this and take it to heart. There is an epidemic of cutting, hopelessness and suicide going on and songs like this make me realize how we need to listen to and hug our teens, no matter how much they test us. Your piano skill, song writing ability, and vocals are just wonderful. [ Reply to This ]
Roxylee thanks! &mdash 05/03/08 - 10:39:03 PM
Thanks for the kind words. This was a hard song to sing because of the deep content that is so close to my heart. For any parent to have to suffer the loss of a child...oh my, such incredible pain. I appreciate your sweet support as always. [ Reply to This ]
Just &mdash 05/02/08 - 03:31:27 PM
beautiful and touching, Gail... Very nice melody enriched by your beautiful voice and your piano playing. So sensibility, heart and talent in this piece and as always, so well executed...
Thank you so much
Marc [ Reply to This ]
Thanks &mdash 05/03/08 - 10:44:33 PM
Marc, I am really glad you came by and listened. You are too nice and I am grateful for your kind comments. Take care! [ Reply to This ]
Powerful!!! &mdash 05/02/08 - 06:50:30 PM
This is a song that moves people at their very core. This is one of the finest songs I have ever heard. You moved me Gail. This is going into a special folder in my Itunes. Beautifully sang and composed, its an honor to be allowed to share your song writing for free. Thank you, a thousand times thank you.
Thanx for your last visit and fav btw. [ Reply to This ]
wow! &mdash 05/03/08 - 10:48:20 PM
Such nice things to say. I am blushing! Your comments mean so much to me and I sincerely appreciate it. I am honored that you "felt" this song. Thanks just does not seem to cover it, but really, thank you very much!! [ Reply to This ]
Songs of good heart... &mdash 05/05/08 - 07:12:39 PM
...get my vote...
This is elegant and lovely. Your vocal is unaffected, sweet and moving. You manage to let the song be moving all on its own, without schmaltz or drama.
You also have a nice feeling for song form, and so the structure of the song itself is nicely rounded. And the piano playing is just right.
Ed [ Reply to This ]
Aww thanks Ed &mdash 05/06/08 - 02:46:26 PM
I sincerely value your opinion and I really appreciate you coming by for a listen. I am happy that you liked it and thank you for the kind comments. All the best to you Ed! [ Reply to This ]
wow &mdash 05/06/08 - 12:38:41 PM
holy crap this is powerful! wonderful song gail. great singing too. I know what you mean about writing 'happy songs'. They don't come easy for me either. [ Reply to This ]
ahhh my favorite enemy &mdash 05/06/08 - 02:51:36 PM
I am thrilled that you made it by. Happy songs are much better for everyone, but sometimes, everyone just doesn't matter. Right? LOL, I think you know what I mean. There is a lot of power in sorrow though also and sometimes things just have to be said. This was one of those songs. Hey, I am ready to sing a happy song. Should we do a collab for people that despise each other like you and I do? :) Seriously, Thanks Ridd. Much appreciated, even though I hate to admit it!!! [ Reply to This ]
well done!!! &mdash 05/06/08 - 04:01:01 PM
this is very touching. its hard to choose which i like best your piano playing or your voice, they are both really stellar. the recording was nicely done and the background vocals are nice. its really a great song thats really moving. you have to have some really nice music to tackle that kind of subject matter and you pulled it off nicely with your music. you and your piano are really in sync. [ Reply to This ]
wow thank you &mdash 05/09/08 - 11:24:35 AM
I really appreciate that so much. You are just too kind. I am thrilled that you like my music as I really enjoy yours also. This particular song does deal with a tough subject matter like you mentioned, but it is real to all of us. Thank you for coming by and listening and the comments made my day. [ Reply to This ]
poetic &mdash 05/07/08 - 10:39:28 AM
Thoughfully, as well as emotionally, sung.
Love the harmonies.
You have a concise way of writing that cuts to the core of the matter, like "she thought everyone else had somewhere better to go," which leads to "and then one day/she threw her life away." Poetic, yet very direct and emtionally succinct.
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Thanks Warren &mdash 05/09/08 - 11:26:44 AM
I am glad you liked this song. It is a very emotional piece that most people have had to deal with at one time or another. I am grateful that you liked the song and appreciate your kind comments. Thank you. [ Reply to This ]
:) &mdash 05/07/08 - 10:56:04 PM
Thanks &mdash 05/09/08 - 11:27:43 AM
I am really glad you enjoyed it. That means alot to me. Much appreciated. [ Reply to This ]
blimey.. &mdash 05/15/08 - 02:39:17 PM
i was so grateful for the comment you left on my page so i thought it was only polite if i came and had a listen to your pieces, and, well...wow. I really wasn't prepared for something quite so emotional - such a compelling piece. I really loved everything about this, especially the simplicity (the vocals and piano just work so well together). I've always been a sucker for powerful, emotional songwriting, and you really hit the spot.
thank you! [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 05/18/08 - 07:43:26 PM
This was really nice of you to stop in for a listen. I sincerely appreciate the kind words so much. I am glad you liked ths song and I look forward to more of yours as well. Thanks again. Take care! [ Reply to This ]
Very Good Song &mdash 05/15/08 - 06:15:30 PM
Your voice reminds me of Phoebe Snow especially when you harmonize | |
ttfn,
Drakonis
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