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just me and my acoustic. i like the melody of this song and the vibe. i like the lyrics but really should have another verse of them. just a line or two. also a little more spontanaeity in my singing toward the end. i didn't record this a friend did. i have never done any home recording, but look forward to starting. i feel the recording and performance turned out pretty well considering it was on the spur of the moment and i only got two takes. i also notice i repeat the knock on the door part about a hundred times, hopefully it won't become irritating to you by the end. tech stuff, comments or questions on the recording i probably wouldn't be able to answer. but any comments about the song and performance would be greatly appreciated.
(verse 1) if your lonely can't you see? see his love it's what you need? i know your shy and so unsure, but don't want to hurt anymore. and if you'd listen, then you'd hear it. and if you'd listen then you'd hear it. (Chorus) there's a knock on the door...there's a knock on the door. there's a knock on the door... there's a knock on the door...and if you'd listen...then you'd hear it...and if you'd listen...then you'd hear it...there's a knock...solo...(repeat verse one) (repeat guitar intro and end)