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album: Laminar Flow
track 1: 5:27 Lunar Eclipse
track 2: 6:40 My Poison
track 3: 1:56 Warm Ice
track 4: 7:33 Everyone Relies on Time
track 5: 3:23 A Summer Reverie
track 6: 4:22 Rain Clouds
track 7: 5:07 Meanwhile The Replicators
track 8: 3:48 Smile For Me Now
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Smile

-- Mary Jane
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Lyrics
Smile For Me Now

I take your hand
And we walk
By the stream

Reach for the sky
Touch a star
Touch my face

Stop asking how
Simply smile
Carry on


Trails in the sand
As we talk
Of our dream

Stop asking why
Who we are
What's our place

Smile for me now
In a while
We'll be gone


Smile for me now
In a while
We'll be gone


(c)2008 Bill Grundmann
Song Stats
Hits: 4060
Comments: 20
Fans: 19
Plays: 144
Downloads: 131
Votes: 8
Uploaded: May 22, 2008 - 08:45:38 PM
Last Updated: Sep 20, 2011 - 07:21:38 PM Last Played: May 22, 2017 - 06:17:29 PM
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Feter said 3319 days ago (May 22nd, 2008)
Smile For Me Now
always so special arrangment to your songs and still
you feel more dancabile songs into psychodelic ..
I cant dance but i feel it has alot of moves ..great
vocal as always ..thnx alot for sharin !!
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magnatone said 3319 days ago (May 23rd, 2008)
Smile For Me Now
Hey MFI: So great to see a new post from you - I always look forward to them. This is just as totally interesting as your previous posts - your stuff is so unique, intriguing and kind of magnetic! Very very cool - thanks
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lengold said 3319 days ago (May 23rd, 2008)
Immediate
This track grabbed me immediately it started with the great drum sound. Love the vocals - really effective. Apart from the brilliant production on this, it's just a great song. You are so creative Bill, never know what's coming next.
Downloaded. Thanks.
Cheers
Len


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bud said 3319 days ago (May 23rd, 2008)
What a grabber -
This tune is so infectious - it really pulls you in with a big smile. Fantastic production - so simple and so funky - like a new Giorgio Moroder and Donna Summer thing.
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MyFakeIdentity said 3319 days ago (May 23rd, 2008)
5/4
Hi Bud

I adore 5/4, so I decided to do something quirky. No idea if it's actually possible to dance to this. The rhythm of the vocals was arranged so that the echoes wouldn't stomp on other words any more than necessary.

You would not believe the pain it was to sing this beast. I did five takes and no take was entirely usable. I was counting it out trying to come in at the right time with each phrase, and got it wrong a lot! I had to pick and choose to find the two best phrases from each of the five takes and piece it together.
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davisamerica said 3319 days ago (May 23rd, 2008)
wow .....
the work on the vocals paid off ... big time ... i love your fake id my friend .... such a great piece of work!
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guitapick said 3319 days ago (May 23rd, 2008)
Well...
...who is the fake id, anyway...?

;)

Love the shift. And the build within the B section is subtle and effective.

I very rarely make suggestions, but the echo in this tune reminds me a bit of when I played lead in a psychodelic band. Of course it's all your call...but I remember being given a tip that I might want to try doing the echo at the end point of a phrase instead of as a general effect through the entire tune (I was really into the delay pedal). It was a very nice change and from there I would apply the effect at different points with varying intensity and other times not at all.

I bring this up not as a criticism of what you've got (which I like a lot), but rather as a suggestion that might enhance the tune. Might be wrong, though. That HAS happened before...

Anyway...the tune's a trip and the lyrics are deep. Very much so...
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MyFakeIdentity said 3313 days ago (May 29th, 2008)
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Reducing the echo to only the end note is interesting. I might try that. I wonder of tape echo with ducking would acheive a similar effect as a volume pedal?

On the other hand, I really enjoy full-out tape echo, and the challenge of creating a melody so that it isn't reduced to a hash once the echo is added. It's hard to do (for me anyway). I also find that 5/4 with a 4-beat echo creates a really interesting effect, that is both reassuring and surprising at the same time. The echo appears right where you expect the next phrase or fragment, so it's reassuring, but then one beat later the real phrase shows up: surprise! (It simulates "perceptual distortion" perhaps?)
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Reinholt56 said 3319 days ago (May 23rd, 2008)
MFI......
It's a smashing song, whoever you are.

Thanks for advertising it in my notebox.

Paul
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lavalamp said 3319 days ago (May 23rd, 2008)
Great Vibe
Like what you do with the vocals. Trippy lyrics. Just like the whole atmosphere of this song.

Sensational.

Dave
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said 3318 days ago (May 23rd, 2008)
We are only here for a little while....
"To know someone here or there with whom you can feel there is understanding in spite of distances, or thoughts unexpressed that can make this life a garden." - Goethe You found your soul mate, Mary Jane. You are so blessed. : ) I love your song dear friend. : ) And I pray that all your dreams come true. : )

(~A~)
said 3318 days ago (May 24th, 2008)
Smile For Me Know
You Bet !!!
MFI you cracked this one Sweetie Sorry I am late bit of bother.
Not a problem now Once again my sincere appologies. Great Lyrics
love the verse below. especially.
This brought a smile to my lips Mary Jane well done Love your voice
you are indeed very talented. Downloaded of course and 10z votes
fav too cos you are well worth it. :)

Peace Dee xxx

Trails in the sand
As we talk
of Our dream
said 3316 days ago (May 26th, 2008)
Smile For Me Now by MyFakeIdentity
It's all there: the catchy hooks, the "can't get it out of your head" haunting chorus, and unique sound!
egobandit said 3314 days ago (May 27th, 2008)
great thumpin
like the change up with all the whoas and yeahs? smile for me now excellent!!!!!!!!!
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dolby said 3279 days ago (July 2nd, 2008)
Genius
Very infectious. great lyric. good quirky groove. love it.
Phil
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Char said 3224 days ago (August 25th, 2008)
The identity
doesn't matter. Your exceptionally unique music does.
WOW! Thank you. :)
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MyFakeIdentity said 3224 days ago (August 25th, 2008)
I am what I am
I'm glad you liked this. I have a new song coming out soon.
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said 3222 days ago (August 28th, 2008)
Smile For Me know
Beautiful song. Nice lyrics too.Thanks for sharing.


LTMP.
12parsecs said 3221 days ago (August 29th, 2008)
gb, really?
you're doing this all in garageband? wow! you are doing wonderful things with this program. very original progression... especially in the choruses. i dig! do you have musical training/background? you make it sound subtle, but i hear some complex musical elements happening.
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LunaTrick said 3149 days ago (November 9th, 2008)
Fantastic song..
Great production and vocal arrangement!
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mikkinylund said 3056 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
Love this!
Awesome!
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Name: Mary Jane
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