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Description:
This is a song that I've had kicking around for ages, I've recorded a few acoustic versions and one with just vocals and piano before getting round to making this full on version. I'll probably upload the other versions one day.
Lyrics:
Lately Ive been
Trying too hard
Maybe I should
Forget You decide
Do they even care at all
I will let fate be the judge to try you
Find yourself
Its always there I can not bear
To see you now
My mind is not strong enough
to fight
Make no mistake the things you break
wont heal themselves
This irrepair I can not bear
No more
Lately you've been
Pushing too far
The boundries to hate me
Are nearing make your choice
They don't even care at all
I wont let fate be the judge no
I'll show everything
Its always there I can not bear
To see you now
My mind is not strong enough
to fight
Make no mistake the things you break
wont heal themselves
This irrepair I can not bear
No more
Lose the face
Seemless Grace
We'll lose everything to be
Whole
Hardware:
Fender HH custom telecaster, Ibanez soundgear bass, Lakewood acoustic guitar, Marshall JCM 2000 DSL 100 with 1936 cab, Line 6 toneport UX 2, Yamaha AW2400, Behringer UMX 61, eMac
Software:
Logic Pro 8, Linplug RMIV
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Very cool &mdash 05/24/08 - 11:18:48 PM
This has a great sound. Your vocal is terrific, very strong and expressive. I love the guitar sounds throughout the track, especially the acoustic - very nice. Drums sound good, too (although a little low in the mix to my ears) and the bass is very nice, and nicely placed in the mix. Strong song, with a good construction, and nice lyrical touches. If I had a suggestion, it would be perhaps to add a different "color" to the chorus, perhaps a different guitar? Just a thought. Very glad I stopped by and listened to this. Excellent stuff. Nicely done. Peace. [ Reply to This ]
nice! &mdash 05/25/08 - 01:21:05 PM
the tune flows nicely. cool idea of posting a different version. it's always cool to see someone else's process in developing a song [ Reply to This ]
Very good song &mdash 05/25/08 - 06:09:22 PM
well written and sung. You voice sounds great you have put it to the tune with some grace and style. Thanx for your comments [ Reply to This ]
WOW &mdash 05/26/08 - 09:39:25 AM
From the intro it's awesome. Your voice fits this perfectly. I'm jealous. That's all I can say.
Professional stuff,
LL [ Reply to This ]
Nice &mdash 05/27/08 - 01:33:18 PM
Great voice man! The production is nice and clear on this. Everything flows nicely too.
Well done. [ Reply to This ]
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