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This is a song that I've had kicking around for ages, I've recorded a few acoustic versions and one with just vocals and piano before getting round to making this full on version. I'll probably upload the other versions one day.
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Lyrics
Lately Ive been
Trying too hard
Maybe I should
Forget You decide
Do they even care at all
I will let fate be the judge to try you
Find yourself
Its always there I can not bear
To see you now
My mind is not strong enough
to fight
Make no mistake the things you break
wont heal themselves
This irrepair I can not bear
No more
Lately you've been
Pushing too far
The boundries to hate me
Are nearing make your choice
They don't even care at all
I wont let fate be the judge no
I'll show everything
Its always there I can not bear
To see you now
My mind is not strong enough
to fight
Make no mistake the things you break
wont heal themselves
This irrepair I can not bear
No more
Lose the face
Seemless Grace
We'll lose everything to be
Whole
Trying too hard
Maybe I should
Forget You decide
Do they even care at all
I will let fate be the judge to try you
Find yourself
Its always there I can not bear
To see you now
My mind is not strong enough
to fight
Make no mistake the things you break
wont heal themselves
This irrepair I can not bear
No more
Lately you've been
Pushing too far
The boundries to hate me
Are nearing make your choice
They don't even care at all
I wont let fate be the judge no
I'll show everything
Its always there I can not bear
To see you now
My mind is not strong enough
to fight
Make no mistake the things you break
wont heal themselves
This irrepair I can not bear
No more
Lose the face
Seemless Grace
We'll lose everything to be
Whole
dajama
This has a great sound. Your vocal is terrific, very strong and expressive. I love the guitar sounds throughout the track, especially the acoustic - very nice. Drums sound good, too (although a little low in the mix to my ears) and the bass is very nice, and nicely placed in the mix. Strong song, with a good construction, and nice lyrical touches. If I had a suggestion, it would be perhaps to add a different "color" to the chorus, perhaps a different guitar? Just a thought. Very glad I stopped by and listened to this. Excellent stuff. Nicely done. Peace.