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Probably my last loudest composition. I intended to make it honestly raw, loud and dirty. I'm having a hard time mixing the drums for I only use free loops. This is actually inspired by deep purple and nirvana. It was composed 15 years ago. Hoping you can share the feelings that this song is trying to convey.
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Lyrics
Can’t be Together
Verse 1
I, I feel so fine
When you said you don’t love me
The pain subsides
Verse 2
You, you made me mad
When you didn’t tell me
What will be the last
Chorus
Things so clear
You mean what I hear
The two of us
Can’t be together
Love means so different
To one another
Verse 3
Yes, I am weird
Even I know that you’re wrong
I respect your decision
Verse 1
I, I feel so fine
When you said you don’t love me
The pain subsides
Verse 2
You, you made me mad
When you didn’t tell me
What will be the last
Chorus
Things so clear
You mean what I hear
The two of us
Can’t be together
Love means so different
To one another
Verse 3
Yes, I am weird
Even I know that you’re wrong
I respect your decision
dajama
It does have a raw, loud feel, which I like. The bass sounds very good, but seems a little buried in the mix to my ears. The drums sound good, but could also be a little louder in sections. I also use drum loops in my songs, and it can be challenge to make them sound natural, but I think it can be done. I definitely think the guitar should be more forward in the mix. Your vocal sounds good, and you put a lot of feeling into the singing. A couple of places where the vocal does get a little loud, but a great performance. Nice track. Very cool. Peace.