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As always I reached so early at any show
and I found the coffee house just about
to be filled ..I love esperesso you can
ask Jack(Dadai) lol ...I just had a chance
to record at a professional level some what
just the first draft me and a guitar I borrowed
from there and its one take and just me and
that black yamaha guitar ..wish you all
warm up with this ..and enjoy the song
and the coffee .. !
I just love this Caffee shop !!!!
as the saying :the book known from his cover..so ?
and I found the coffee house just about
to be filled ..I love esperesso you can
ask Jack(Dadai) lol ...I just had a chance
to record at a professional level some what
just the first draft me and a guitar I borrowed
from there and its one take and just me and
that black yamaha guitar ..wish you all
warm up with this ..and enjoy the song
and the coffee .. !
I just love this Caffee shop !!!!
as the saying :the book known from his cover..so ?
Lyrics:
Oh dear my sweetcant you look at us
all just in a poem
love and clear
cant you see the bright light
and everything there just sing
Our Home !
oh dear my lady
wont you sit near
listen to my poem
all just for you
cant you see the bright light
and everything there sing
Our home!
Oh dear my love
I just want you
you are the best happiest
lady on the earth
I do care for you
you care for me
cant you see the bright light
and everything there sing
our home !
Hardware:
Yamaha Guitar , Zoom h2Software:
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I love it, warm singing, lovely rhythm and excellently recorded. Thanks for sharing, a great song!
Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi
Feter
Thnx Yeman !!
dirigent
What a beautiful song - excellent playing. A most charming compliment for your Lady ;-) An amazing and lovely serenade...
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , certainly a great pleasure
to hear that you enjoyed this lil song I truely
cherish you encourgment and support ..thank you so
very much !
peace !
saymme
Clapping ! : ) : ) What a BEAUTIFUL song..fits so well here in the Coffeshop, i'm just enjoying some! Great with the guitar here which you can borrow; ) ! Happy... You spread aa wonderful 'air' around us with this !! Very pretty . something in it does remind of Dadai..wonder what it is.. Love & Peace
(Have a great time at the coffeeshop! hope to see ya more there & many others) ! tx
Feter
o I m so thankful Lena ..so happy you enjoyed this
lil ditty ..you so kind to say all these nice words
God Bless
peace !
saymme
The first entries deserveclapping but ofcourse we cant keep clappin in the coffeeshop can we LOL! I like it when People clap in Church though at times, doen't happen too often but its nice : ) Prayers to You
Feter
well its alrght :-) Amen to ALL
caroline
i love the purity of this - what a shame your voice isn;t higher in the mix and.... no voting????? i am amazed to see this from Mr Tens - lol - thank you xox
Feter
Awww thnx alot Caro ..you so sweet and kind ..
well its a coffee house and I thought I want to
sound like a true guy at a coffee house no perfection
on the sound you usualy hear on recordings ..
just straight one take and as it is ... I did lil
enhancement and thats all ...so glad you enjoyed it
peace !
DWL
I hope the sound man sorts out the vocals though as your voice really needs to come up a bit.
A lovely song Feter and it's great to be able to listen to one of yours after all your sterling work listening and commenting on everyone else.
I think you should finish the show as well :-)
Cheers
Dick
Feter
o Thnx alot Dick , such words I realy cherish
as they came from a great musician and a rockin
folkie like you ...well according to the sound
adjusment ..I said that ...I needed it like this
one take no enhancemnet as a true live coffee show
sound .. maybe I over act this ? dunno ...anyway
I m so glad you enjoyed it ...!
Peace!!!
woofer3
As your voice came in on this I reminded soundwise of Mississippi John Hurt. I am a big John Hurt fan. I like this a lot, it is very rich.
John.
Feter
Thnx alot John , such kind words realy encourage me
and give me more spirit ...God Bless !
peace !!
Roxylee
Such sweet words to your lady love, and I'm sure she was very touched to hear this. I'm so glad you got some studio time. Your guitar sounds great, as well as your voice. Great coffeehouse opener! :-)
Feter
o Thank you dear you always so kind ...such words
I do cherish and realy appreciated them so much
thank you and God Bless
peace !
bud
for a lovely lady. I think I'll stick around for more of your set.
Feter
Ahh my friend I m glad you enjoyed this and I
hope you enjoyed the coffee as well ..thank you
so very much !!
peace !
composerclark
Sounds great, warm and intimate, but your voice could be a bit louder in the mix, as Caroline suggests. This is wonderful, as always!
Feter
Im so honored to see your comments here ..realy
ye I know the voice need adjustment but how it
will sound like a coffee shop ? ..all the coffee
shops i roamed all sounds like that no sound system
just folkies strummin theri guitars and sing out of
there hearts ..thank you for your kind words and all
peace !!
Feter this is so cool. I mean it jumps right out from the sixties and fits in with those great old folk songs from then. Your singing and guitar playing, I really enjoyed... singing such great lyrics. You are a troubadour par excellence!
I hope to visit your coffee house.
Jack
Feter
Any time Jack ...you know any time there s alot of
espresso on that pot for you and all ..such words
I appreciate bro thank you so very much !!
peace !
Feter
we need to sit and sip that espresso again
on a new jammin thang !!
Relic67
this is a really nice song.
Nice chord changes on the chorus.
good love-song lyrics!
Feter
Thnx alot my friend so glad you enjoyed this ...:-)
peace !
magnatone
Feter - this is just wonderful! I agree with DWL, it's great to be able to listen to a new song of yours - you're such a supporter of everybody here at MJ. I think you kind of hold the "soul" of the community. Thanks for this lovely work - congratulations
Feter
Thnx alot Karen ., you just too kind ..I m so
happy you enjoyed this lil song .. God Bless !
peace !
tokai
great voice, well played.
Feter
Thnxa lot my friend glad you like it :-)
peace !
Elevator_Funk
coffee shop open mic. I see you used a zoom H2. I've been thinking about getting one to record some of my jams with friends. How do you like it?
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , glad you enjoyed the song ..
and yes H2 is perfect ...I even didnt need to erase
hiss like before ..its realy a pro thang !!
peace !
sloparts
Lovely sentiments and a very nice guitar to back it up. I have to agree with DWL on the vocal being to far back in the mix, and I also think you need to cut back on the vocal reverb as it makes the vocal somewhat unclear.
Great start though Feter my friend, I hope you finish this one, it's got a lot of potential. Thanks for sharing,
Ed
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , your owrds mean alto here ..
yes I agree with all what you ve said its a coffee
house and it need to be that .. so happy you enjoyed
this ...thank you so very much !
peace !
screamalexz
seems a little short but nice.
Feter
Thnx alot my friend glad you liked it !!
peace !!
Peter Bauckham
an excellent song Feter - great performance.
Peter
Feter
Thnxa lot Peter ,realy glad yu enjoyed this !!
peace !
helenmorris
You've such a sweet voice, wish it was a bit longer though
Feter
Thnx alot my friend, so nice to see you liked
this song ... !!
peace !
davisamerica
a real sweet tune my dear friend. i have this on a loop and it just gets better each time!
Feter
o thank you Jack ..so glad you enjoyed this lil song !
Peace !
lengold
Feter, very well played and it's always so nice to hear your singing,
Cheers
Len
Feter
Thnx alot Len ..nice to see you enjoyed this song !!
peace
drakonis
Love it Feter... so good to hear you recording live. The "room" recording makes the guitar sound a little echoey and "boomy", which is why I think people say your voice is a little soft in this mix. But I just sat back and listened to your warm words, and sipped my mocha, and enjoyed the sweet words and performance. Thank you Feter!
ttfn,
Drakonis
Feter
O Draki ...so glad you enjoyed this lil song ...
ye its just a laid back song with mocha ..is all
right . thank you sir thank you !!
peace !
VicDiesel
This'll get you a quarter from me. More, probably. Nice song.
Feter
Thnx alot my friend,I m so grateful for these
kind comments !!
peace !!
Vic Holman
....... and one shot of Feter, please.
A very nice one take Feter. Nice tune and very warm sounding.
Feter
Thnx alot Vic, I m so glad you enjoyed this
and wish to listen to your entery as well !!
peace !
BridgeCreek
This is a great recording Feter - I can imagine you strumming away on that black yamaha, warming up, having a coffee, and singing this beautiful song. Wish I was there, but this is the next best thing. Thanks for sharing!
-- Alan
Feter
O Alan that s so nice of you , hearing that you
liked this lil song realy made me happy .yup
much more espresso and jammin back at the portch !
the very best next thing !!
peace !
Nick_Flash
What a great song Feter. This fits the Coffee House vibe perfectly. I think I may need a refill now. Beautiful lyrics too.
Feter
Thnx alot my friend ..so good to see you enjoyed
this lil song !!
peace !
I love the sound of your voice. The guitar sounds fantastic.
Please note . And for a first take as well.
It's real,
It's authentic
It's a live recording.
And I for one think you sounded great. But a little sad maybe.
Thanks for the download.
Peace Dee
Feter
Thnx alot Dee words and comments always
appreciated ...I dunno about sad :-)
peace !
MarkHolbrook
I want to hear your vocals better! This is such a great tune... Just want to hear you sing it loud and strong!
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , I know the cafe is fulled and my
voice is bit away here but thats alright ..it chimes
right I think !!
thank you for oyu kind words
peace !
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , I know the cafe is fulled and my
voice is bit away here but thats alright ..it chimes
right I think !!
thank you for oyu kind words
peace !
guygrooves
a sixties feel about it Feter I am not sure how I missed it. I may be late but I finally made it to to the party lol. I take mine black lol. Great job Feter.
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , I m so happy you liked this so ..
meant alot to me for sure ..and yes will share this back
coffee :-) here s one !
peace ~
guitapick
...to be very at home in this style...that Zoom h2 is pretty incredible for such a tiny thing, isn't it...
Love it, Feter...short and sweet.
Feter
Thnx alot my friend ..yes I agree H2 is great
I m so happy and thankful for your kind words
realy meant alot !!
Peace !!
dajama
Birdman Wayne got it right when he said "warm singing", and I second that. I love the lyrics here, and the sentiment is sweet and charming. Short and sweet! Very cool. Nicely done, my friend. Peace.
Feter
Thnx my friend , I m realy glad you enjoyed this
song ..your kind words meant alot !!!
peace !!!!!
rsorensen
warm and charming. has a real live sound to it. great work!
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , I agree its like and its
one take ...thnx alot for your kind words realy
appreciated them !!
peace !
Mystified
As always...so soulful and honest.
And a great addition to the Coffee House songs.
Thank you, Feter! :)
Feter
Thnx Cat realy Kind fo you !!
peace !
eanbardsley
a nice coffee house feel, loved it!!!
Ian
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , its realy kind of you
these nice comments meant alot realy !
peace !
Skean
I'm here for my second listening.... Nice song to my coffee.
Peace
---
Kenta
Feter
Thnx alot Kenta , so happy you enjoyed this lil
love song :-)
Peace !!
thetiler
giving so much! In music and friendliness. Enjoy that nice bass voice.
It sure would not be an MJ Coffee Shop without Feter!
Kinda like former Yankee baseball great Joe Dimaggio was Mr. Coffee. Feter is the Mr. MJ Coffe Shop Guy!
Thanks for sharing such warm, folk music! Hope you have a terrific week!
Feter
Always suxh honor to read your comments and
a true smile brought to me ..I m realy thankful
for all your generocity Sir ! ... thank you so
very much for all !!
God Bless
peace !!
piece of music, really great...
Feter
Thnxa lot my friend ,realy glad you like it !!
Peace !
SJB
Hi Feter, the black Yamaha sounds great strummed - Mr Sanchez will be getting jealous! Very pretty song which really suits your smooth warm vocal.
Thanks for posting and take care
Steve
Feter
Thnx alot Steve , such kind friend you are
I realy apreciated your kind words and comments
meant alot for sure !!!
peace !
shavingronaldscar
tight playing, good production, and a good vibe
Feter
Thnx alot ..so glad you enjoyed it !!
Peace !!
HipHopMoses
Sworn Your Coffee shop song was the first I commented on... Well it's a beautiful song pretty smooth writing ;)
Moses
Feter
Hey Moses , so glad you enjoyed this song !!
thnx for the kind words !!
peace !!!
saymme
Love the way You did this..& the tapping on the guitar makes it so real...tx again love it !
Feter
well its real Lena ..thank you !!! :-)
peace !!
Good ups, Feter. Looking forward to more of your brew!
Feter
Thnx alot Bro , so glad you enjoyed this song !!
peace !!
I sent you a vastly improved "mastering" of this song -- I adjusted equalization and compression. You should post it.
Feter
I love to post it ....as a colab will u please ???
Alannah
... but you write great tunes and I ALWAYS think you should bring your vocals up somewhat in the mix .... they deserve to be heard with a little more clarity ... time to stop hiding and SHINE those vocals !!!!
Feter
Thnx alot Alannah , so nice to see you like this
lil songs ...ye we ve said that before about the vocal !
but its the coffee house dont you think ??
peace !
Robert Rayner
You have star quality, superb voice.
Feter
Thnx Robert you too kind !!
peace !
aclarke
Very honest and sincere tune. Perfectly simple and true. Very nice!
Feter
Ahh thnx alot my friend ..realy apreciated your
kind comments ..!!
peace !
richardhowardjones
Good job, Feter. Genuine!
Feter
Thnx Sir , meant alot your kind comments !!
peace !
Heightened
Love the simple songs too.
Feter
Thnx alot my friend ..so glad you enjoyed this song !
peace !!
leemiguel2004
I love anything to do with coffee and this is a really nice song. I love your voice. It's got such a rich, deep quality. Lovely playing as well!
Feter
Thnx alot my friend ,I m realy thrilled that you liked this
song ..o ye coffee is alot had to do with being a folkie
like me ;-) wink !! ... I apreciate the kind words man !
peace !
lavalamp
Feel good song. Nice coffee house tune. Like it a bunch.
Dave
Feter
Thnx alot Dave ..glad you enjoyed my friend
You Rock !
peace !
LaLa_Divina
I like your feather light vocals in this song. It does remind me of coffee house singers. And it creates a unique cozy conversational effect. I did listen to some of your other songs and i am glad to hear that you do have a more powerful voice to use when you want it.
Feter
Thnx you so much , I m so pleased to read your kind
comments ..realy meant alot as they came from a true
talented musician and wonderful singer ...yes I wanted
to sounded light for this dedication song :-)
peace !
Dragonas
Great song writing with amazingly simple yet heartfelt lyrics.
I like the guitar, but your voice is a little bit down in the mix sometimes.
Your warm voice should be brought up a little bit.
Great job Feter!
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , such comments realy mant alot
and made me so happy to read .yes I know my voice
bit need to be brought up ! then I was thinkin its a
cafe time ..so I didnt do any EQ in like if I can lol
anyway thank you so very much again my friend ;-)
peace !
Bob Rodgers
Love your vocals Feter, your voice sounds great!
Excellent guitar playing and a great rhythm!
A lovely song and serenade! I enjoyed this!
Thanks!
Feter
Thnx alot my friend , always so nice to see you kind
comments realy makes me happy ...thank you so very much
meant alot by all means !!!
peace !!