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As always I reached so early at any show
and I found the coffee house just about
to be filled ..I love esperesso you can
ask Jack(Dadai) lol ...I just had a chance
to record at a professional level some what
just the first draft me and a guitar I borrowed
from there and its one take and just me and
that black yamaha guitar ..wish you all
warm up with this ..and enjoy the song
and the coffee .. !
I just love this Caffee shop !!!!
as the saying :the book known from his cover..so ?
Lyrics:
Oh dear my sweet
cant you look at us
all just in a poem
love and clear
cant you see the bright light
and everything there just sing
Our Home !
oh dear my lady
wont you sit near
listen to my poem
all just for you
cant you see the bright light
and everything there sing
Our home!
Oh dear my love
I just want you
you are the best happiest
lady on the earth
I do care for you
you care for me
cant you see the bright light
and everything there sing
our home !
Hardware:
Yamaha Guitar , Zoom h2
Software:
Cool edit pro 2.2
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Cool! &mdash 06/01/08 - 06:43:28 AM
I love it, warm singing, lovely rhythm and excellently recorded. Thanks for sharing, a great song!
Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi [ Reply to This ]
Peace ! &mdash 06/01/08 - 06:48:09 AM
My Dear Lady &mdash 06/01/08 - 07:10:00 AM
What a beautiful song - excellent playing. A most charming compliment for your Lady ;-) An amazing and lovely serenade... [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 03:17:12 PM
Thnx alot my friend , certainly a great pleasure
to hear that you enjoyed this lil song I truely
cherish you encourgment and support ..thank you so
very much !
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
: ) &mdash 06/01/08 - 07:11:10 AM
Clapping ! : ) : ) What a BEAUTIFUL song..fits so well here in the Coffeshop, i'm just enjoying some! Great with the guitar here which you can borrow; ) ! Happy... You spread aa wonderful 'air' around us with this !! Very pretty . something in it does remind of Dadai..wonder what it is.. Love & Peace
(Have a great time at the coffeeshop! hope to see ya more there & many others) ! tx [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 03:23:21 PM
o I m so thankful Lena ..so happy you enjoyed this
lil ditty ..you so kind to say all these nice words
God Bless
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
.. &mdash 06/01/08 - 07:13:11 AM
The first entries deserveclapping but ofcourse we cant keep clappin in the coffeeshop can we LOL! I like it when People clap in Church though at times, doen't happen too often but its nice : ) Prayers to You [ Reply to This ]
... &mdash 06/01/08 - 03:25:29 PM
hmmm .... &mdash 06/01/08 - 07:23:53 AM
i love the purity of this - what a shame your voice isn;t higher in the mix and.... no voting????? i am amazed to see this from Mr Tens - lol - thank you xox [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 03:33:50 PM
Awww thnx alot Caro ..you so sweet and kind ..
well its a coffee house and I thought I want to
sound like a true guy at a coffee house no perfection
on the sound you usualy hear on recordings ..
just straight one take and as it is ... I did lil
enhancement and thats all ...so glad you enjoyed it
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
A great start! &mdash 06/01/08 - 07:40:23 AM
I hope the sound man sorts out the vocals though as your voice really needs to come up a bit.
A lovely song Feter and it's great to be able to listen to one of yours after all your sterling work listening and commenting on everyone else.
I think you should finish the show as well :-)
Cheers
Dick
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Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 03:37:06 PM
o Thnx alot Dick , such words I realy cherish
as they came from a great musician and a rockin
folkie like you ...well according to the sound
adjusment ..I said that ...I needed it like this
one take no enhancemnet as a true live coffee show
sound .. maybe I over act this ? dunno ...anyway
I m so glad you enjoyed it ...!
Peace!!! [ Reply to This ]
My dear Feter &mdash 06/01/08 - 08:21:49 AM
As your voice came in on this I reminded soundwise of Mississippi John Hurt. I am a big John Hurt fan. I like this a lot, it is very rich.
John. [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 04:24:31 PM
Thnx alot John , such kind words realy encourage me
and give me more spirit ...God Bless !
peace !! [ Reply to This ]
Soft and tender... &mdash 06/01/08 - 08:51:52 AM
Such sweet words to your lady love, and I'm sure she was very touched to hear this. I'm so glad you got some studio time. Your guitar sounds great, as well as your voice. Great coffeehouse opener! :-) [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 04:33:20 PM
o Thank you dear you always so kind ...such words
I do cherish and realy appreciated them so much
thank you and God Bless
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
Lovely song &mdash 06/01/08 - 09:07:45 AM
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 04:35:46 PM
Ahh my friend I m glad you enjoyed this and I
hope you enjoyed the coffee as well ..thank you
so very much !!
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
Wonderful &mdash 06/01/08 - 09:07:47 AM
Sounds great, warm and intimate, but your voice could be a bit louder in the mix, as Caroline suggests. This is wonderful, as always! [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 04:38:55 PM
Im so honored to see your comments here ..realy
ye I know the voice need adjustment but how it
will sound like a coffee shop ? ..all the coffee
shops i roamed all sounds like that no sound system
just folkies strummin theri guitars and sing out of
there hearts ..thank you for your kind words and all
peace !! [ Reply to This ]
Classic folk.... &mdash 06/01/08 - 09:19:43 AM
Feter this is so cool. I mean it jumps right out from the sixties and fits in with those great old folk songs from then. Your singing and guitar playing, I really enjoyed... singing such great lyrics. You are a troubadour par excellence!
I hope to visit your coffee house.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 04:45:31 PM
Any time Jack ...you know any time there s alot of
espresso on that pot for you and all ..such words
I appreciate bro thank you so very much !!
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
yea ,,,and &mdash 06/02/08 - 03:11:42 PM
we need to sit and sip that espresso again
on a new jammin thang !! [ Reply to This ]
great song feter &mdash 06/01/08 - 09:39:10 AM
this is a really nice song.
Nice chord changes on the chorus.
good love-song lyrics!
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Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 04:54:53 PM
My Dear Lady &mdash 06/01/08 - 09:44:31 AM
Feter - this is just wonderful! I agree with DWL, it's great to be able to listen to a new song of yours - you're such a supporter of everybody here at MJ. I think you kind of hold the "soul" of the community. Thanks for this lovely work - congratulations [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 04:58:57 PM
Thnx alot Karen ., you just too kind ..I m so
happy you enjoyed this lil song .. God Bless !
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
very nice tune &mdash 06/01/08 - 10:46:52 AM
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 05:00:26 PM
cool &mdash 06/01/08 - 11:08:26 AM
coffee shop open mic. I see you used a zoom H2. I've been thinking about getting one to record some of my jams with friends. How do you like it? [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 05:02:27 PM
Thnx alot my friend , glad you enjoyed the song ..
and yes H2 is perfect ...I even didnt need to erase
hiss like before ..its realy a pro thang !!
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
Nice song Feter &mdash 06/01/08 - 11:09:29 AM
Lovely sentiments and a very nice guitar to back it up. I have to agree with DWL on the vocal being to far back in the mix, and I also think you need to cut back on the vocal reverb as it makes the vocal somewhat unclear.
Great start though Feter my friend, I hope you finish this one, it's got a lot of potential. Thanks for sharing,
Ed [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 05:04:35 PM
Thnx alot my friend , your owrds mean alto here ..
yes I agree with all what you ve said its a coffee
house and it need to be that .. so happy you enjoyed
this ...thank you so very much !
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
.. &mdash 06/01/08 - 12:24:12 PM
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 05:06:49 PM
What &mdash 06/01/08 - 01:06:23 PM
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 05:09:05 PM
Its lovely &mdash 06/01/08 - 02:17:08 PM
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 05:13:47 PM
Thnx alot my friend, so nice to see you liked
this song ... !!
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
right then brother &mdash 06/01/08 - 04:00:22 PM
a real sweet tune my dear friend. i have this on a loop and it just gets better each time! [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 05:15:17 PM
lovely song &mdash 06/01/08 - 04:52:49 PM
Feter, very well played and it's always so nice to hear your singing,
Cheers
Len
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Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 05:20:15 PM
Right at home! &mdash 06/01/08 - 06:10:05 PM
Love it Feter... so good to hear you recording live. The "room" recording makes the guitar sound a little echoey and "boomy", which is why I think people say your voice is a little soft in this mix. But I just sat back and listened to your warm words, and sipped my mocha, and enjoyed the sweet words and performance. Thank you Feter!
ttfn,
Drakonis [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 06:24:37 PM
O Draki ...so glad you enjoyed this lil song ...
ye its just a laid back song with mocha ..is all
right . thank you sir thank you !!
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
Singing for your daily latte? &mdash 06/01/08 - 08:16:51 PM
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 08:38:08 PM
Thnx alot my friend,I m so grateful for these
kind comments !!
peace !! [ Reply to This ]
one shot of espresso &mdash 06/01/08 - 08:37:37 PM
....... and one shot of Feter, please.
A very nice one take Feter. Nice tune and very warm sounding. [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 10:48:28 PM
Thnx alot Vic, I m so glad you enjoyed this
and wish to listen to your entery as well !!
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
Home Sweet Home &mdash 06/01/08 - 09:49:32 PM
This is a great recording Feter - I can imagine you strumming away on that black yamaha, warming up, having a coffee, and singing this beautiful song. Wish I was there, but this is the next best thing. Thanks for sharing!
-- Alan [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/01/08 - 10:51:34 PM
O Alan that s so nice of you , hearing that you
liked this lil song realy made me happy .yup
much more espresso and jammin back at the portch !
the very best next thing !!
peace !
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Great &mdash 06/02/08 - 12:49:33 AM
What a great song Feter. This fits the Coffee House vibe perfectly. I think I may need a refill now. Beautiful lyrics too. [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/02/08 - 01:01:05 AM
Thnx alot my friend ..so good to see you enjoyed
this lil song !!
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
My Dear Lady. &mdash 06/02/08 - 02:18:32 AM
I love the sound of your voice. The guitar sounds fantastic.
Please note . And for a first take as well.
It's real,
It's authentic
It's a live recording.
And I for one think you sounded great. But a little sad maybe.
Thanks for the download.
Peace Dee [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/02/08 - 02:25:09 AM
Thnx alot Dee words and comments always
appreciated ...I dunno about sad :-)
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
Hey Mr Feter &mdash 06/02/08 - 10:04:10 AM
I want to hear your vocals better! This is such a great tune... Just want to hear you sing it loud and strong! [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/02/08 - 02:59:57 PM
Thnx alot my friend , I know the cafe is fulled and my
voice is bit away here but thats alright ..it chimes
right I think !!
thank you for oyu kind words
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/02/08 - 03:00:13 PM
Thnx alot my friend , I know the cafe is fulled and my
voice is bit away here but thats alright ..it chimes
right I think !!
thank you for oyu kind words
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
this really has...... &mdash 06/02/08 - 02:11:40 PM
a sixties feel about it Feter I am not sure how I missed it. I may be late but I finally made it to to the party lol. I take mine black lol. Great job Feter. [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/02/08 - 03:03:08 PM
Thnx alot my friend , I m so happy you liked this so ..
meant alot to me for sure ..and yes will share this back
coffee :-) here s one !
peace ~ [ Reply to This ]
You seem... &mdash 06/02/08 - 04:49:22 PM
...to be very at home in this style...that Zoom h2 is pretty incredible for such a tiny thing, isn't it...
Love it, Feter...short and sweet. [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/02/08 - 05:02:58 PM
Thnx alot my friend ..yes I agree H2 is great
I m so happy and thankful for your kind words
realy meant alot !!
Peace !! [ Reply to This ]
I think &mdash 06/02/08 - 06:04:03 PM
Birdman Wayne got it right when he said "warm singing", and I second that. I love the lyrics here, and the sentiment is sweet and charming. Short and sweet! Very cool. Nicely done, my friend. Peace. [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/02/08 - 06:36:29 PM
Thnx my friend , I m realy glad you enjoyed this
song ..your kind words meant alot !!!
peace !!!!! [ Reply to This ]
very &mdash 06/02/08 - 06:57:47 PM
Peace !! &mdash 06/02/08 - 07:13:17 PM
Thnx alot my friend , I agree its like and its
one take ...thnx alot for your kind words realy
appreciated them !!
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
A beautiful song :) &mdash 06/03/08 - 12:23:02 AM
As always...so soulful and honest.
And a great addition to the Coffee House songs.
Thank you, Feter! :) [ Reply to This ]
Peace !! &mdash 06/03/08 - 12:24:33 AM
Very nice Feter,... &mdash 06/03/08 - 01:54:47 AM
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- Yeman A. Al-Rawi
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