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Keywords:
melancholy (55), soft (61), mellow (88), acoustic (460)
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Description:
Trying to get a little atmospheric here. This song went through quite a few changes. Still a work in progress, mainly need a final vocal take and some fine tuning.
Lyrics:
You left it in the way you said hello
a twinkle in your eye
that everything would end the way it did
that I could never let it go
now we try and fall on our swords
I can carry more
looking through the wrong end of the lens
everything's so far away
the trouble and the pleasure
the fashion and the lie
the rhythms from the corner
the timing of the end
words of conflict everyone knows
games of parting blows
you fade a little (x4)
restoration and enlightenment
the conversation's old
the preacher and the bottle
the farmer and the field
the frozen ground between the thought and deed
simple things that add up to this
chaos theory, bird in the hand
you fade a little (etc)
Hardware:
G4, Alesis IO/26, guitars, bass, keys, etc.
Software:
Logic Studio
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Beautiful..... &mdash 06/07/08 - 11:37:06 AM
This is so soothing and melodic. Work in progress you say? I think it is great the way it is. Thanks for sharing it with us. [ Reply to This ]
Great Melody &mdash 06/11/08 - 07:58:08 AM
I really like your phrasing with the lyrics. Nice job and look forward to hearing more of your stuff. [ Reply to This ]
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