way to break out of the mold. really enjoyed the evolution
of sounds. excellent production-i actually looked out the
window to see if it was raining when that background
static kicked in-didn't seem to be coming from my
speakers! i think this one is probably more ambient than
industrial. DL'd

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Thanks

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Is that right?

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I like the build-up of intensity at the beginning, adding
layers, intensifying the rhythms. The longest section in
the first half seemed on the verge of being TOO extended,
but then it suddenly shifted to the more tonal section
nicely.

I wish that you had developed the later section more, it
was really cool. Then perhaps re-introduce the first
section again to tie this piece together.

It definitely needs to be longer, in my opinion....another
thirty seconds to a minute.

This piece reminds me of looking at an abstract art piece
in a gallery; one that asks the viewer to expand the mind
to new sights, new visuals...keeping the mind open.

You've got a real talent for combining sounds in new
ways, layering them imaginatively. The sort of "short-
term" pacing of the material in this piece is artful, but the
LONG-term pacing of the song as a whole needs to be
elaborated upon and expanded.



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Your compositions are like a dream or a trance. You
should do scores for films. You have the knack. Tonic
waves soothing the hard edges of a clattering, chaotic
world, but with an ominous, shadowy undertone.

Bravissimo.

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Someone suggested that is sounded like film music and i agree. Very visual, very suggestive. Like a chase in the beginning and a very uncomfortable thriller at the end. Very professional. An asset to the MacJams community.
[str8 8ts]
In my humble opinion

/Algabatz

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Someone suggested that is sounded like film music and i agree. Very visual, very suggestive. Like a chase in the beginning and a very uncomfortable thriller at the end. Very professional. An asset to the MacJams community.
[str8 8ts]
In my humble opinion

/Algabatz

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There is some ultra-high frequency stuff that comes in that I
don't know if it was intentional or not but I kind of liked how
it tweaked my ears without being harsh.

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I intended it to tweak the brain! thanks for the comment.

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