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Written for Dane Zander ( who owns the BlueBoy Club in Second Life)
This is the final release club mix.
The previous demo/idea is up as the track 'Please Don't' on my songs page here. Hopefully you will notice a HUGE difference in this final mix.
Lyrics:
When you look inside yourself,
Are you scared of what you see,
Is there an empty space inside
and you don't know where you want to be
Still a child all alone within
Can you see inside my mind
Reflections of the futures passed
I don't want to be the one who's left behind
Lonely, please don't leave me lonely.
(rpt and stuff)
Are we waiting just for love
looking at this crowded room
can you tell me what you see
cos there is no one else in here but me
Lonely, Please don't leave me lonely.
Hardware:
Mac
Software:
pro tools
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One of your best &mdash 06/17/08 - 05:21:02 PM
I've been listening to this a ton since you posted this on Facebook yesterday and it truly is one of my all-time favorites from you. I love the chorus and can't get it out of my head. I hope you get lucky with this, because I could genuinely imagine it being a big hit (and deservedly so, Miss Slimmie).
It's great to see you here! [ Reply to This ]
Wow &mdash 06/17/08 - 05:25:48 PM
Slimmie you are great! I love your voice and how you assembly the lead with the chorus. Music is fine too...
Ciao
Rob [ Reply to This ]
Wow &mdash 06/17/08 - 05:26:24 PM
Slimmie you are great! I love your voice and how you assembly the lead with the chorus. Music is fine too...
Ciao
Rob [ Reply to This ]
BlueBoy Club &mdash 06/17/08 - 05:42:45 PM
I'm with Lisa--this is one of your best for sure. Your voice sounds great, and this is super dance music; excellent sounds, pulse and production. Awesome, Slimmie. [ Reply to This ]
Sounds Great! &mdash 06/17/08 - 06:56:35 PM
You've achieved a very good-sounding track here, Slimmie.
And I can never imagine bubbly little you ever being lonely for long. :p
Best of luck, hon... keep working it... you're on the right track. ;)
--- Joe [ Reply to This ]
Those multi-vocals... &mdash 06/17/08 - 10:06:22 PM
First MJer at #1? &mdash 06/18/08 - 04:10:33 AM
If anything I've heard here can make it in the "real world", this is it.
Production wise, I'd prefer to hear a little more edge on everything (a personal preference which means stuff all), but what a GREAT track!
So, looks like you're the one opening things up for MJers in the R.W.
Very best of luck Slimmie - you've worked hard for it.
Neil [ Reply to This ]
Nice! &mdash 06/18/08 - 04:19:06 AM
Very nice piece, I've been checking your stuff lately and happy to hear a new post from you. Good to see you back! Very nice listen...
Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi [ Reply to This ]
Fantastic dance mix &mdash 06/18/08 - 08:29:02 AM
You've got a great voice, and the production of this is just perfect. Beautiful sounds all around.
I could have done without the part that starts at 4:30.
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Huge &mdash 06/18/08 - 02:03:12 PM
Hmmm, something has happened here... and it's something ultra professional going on here... *picks jaw up from floor* uhm, Slimmie!!!! WOW. This is simply awesome:)
First you have a good melody/composition, then you have made a sassy good groove, and then the production is superduper. I dig those delayed lonely... lonely... lonely...
What I like the most is your singing. You sound relaxed and confident and very, very good!!! THIS IS GOING TO BE A BIG HIT:)
Now go and get yourself a good manager and get this album on the road!
BRAVO!!! [ Reply to This ]
Lonely &mdash 06/18/08 - 05:35:51 PM
This is really fabulous! What a terrific production, and WOW with those vocals! Good luck with this! [ Reply to This ]
this is bloody genius! &mdash 06/18/08 - 10:22:11 PM
Don't forget us little folks. :-) You really deserve all the success I can see coming your way. You've worked so hard, girl. Remember 4 years ago when we were just MJ newbies?! FOUR years... Geesh! I hope you and yours are all well and having fun! [ Reply to This ]
there she goes... &mdash 06/19/08 - 12:38:11 AM
definitely many giant leaps ahead in composition and arranging and mixing from the SGF I remember so recently. You've been studying and working hard, and it shows. You definitely deserve some happy recognition by more than just "us"... but don't burn that candle at both ends now! :-)
ttfn,
Drakonis [ Reply to This ]
go slimstar! &mdash 06/19/08 - 08:39:03 AM
this mix is fabuloso! your voice sounds amazing...this number has it all! best to you, and thanks always for the inspiration. [ Reply to This ]
Very Proffesh &mdash 06/20/08 - 02:37:11 AM
Yep, as others have said, very very good. Sounds like a hit to me. Great vocal, great mix, great arrangement. What makes a hit? What makes a miss? Probably no more than a bit of luck somewhere along the line! Good luck with this - excellent
Phil [ Reply to This ]
Wow! &mdash 06/20/08 - 02:42:55 PM
This song is awesome! I have not heard any other mix of this song if any have been posted, however, this is one brilliant mix if anything; sharp, deep and wide. I am especially impressed in how you use your voice as an instrument and play with your voice. I think it has very clever ending, although I would personally prefer to end on let's say one Clave(?) hit instead of fading it out. Other that VERY minimal reference, this is just a great song. [ Reply to This ]
Hay Girl!!! &mdash 06/20/08 - 08:33:07 PM
Your best track. Totally wicked. I Voted 10/10/10/10. Synths are great and vocal strong as ever. You really have to get this released somehow, sure it will go far. I will buy it. Awesome!!!!
Speak to you soon. x [ Reply to This ]
nice singin &mdash 06/22/08 - 11:08:53 PM
and like those backup singers :)
Nice disco sound
Again, those echoey singers or a nice addition, very effective! [ Reply to This ]
agreed &mdash 06/24/08 - 06:51:00 AM
an excellent mix. Your voice sounds terrific. I too, could easily see this going super nova on the charts. Very radio friendly. [ Reply to This ]
Lovely to meet you &mdash 07/16/08 - 06:52:06 PM
Slimmie - this sounds pro level with a really infectious beat and lovely vocals. Keep up the good work and the best of luck with it.
Cheers
Len
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Global Underground... &mdash 08/04/08 - 11:42:30 PM
This is tight... for a lack of a better word. Makes me wanna put it on and dance all night. Perfect for the genre. [ Reply to This ]
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