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Description:
This is a VERY rough demo. Be kind when rating.
Lyrics:
You never offered much in the way of a solution
To help me heal the wounds you left on me
It seems kind of unfair
That you were able to escape unscathed
How does it feel to be so smooth?
How does it feel to be so clever?
How does it feel to set me up?
Out of maybes and left with never
wasted hours wasted life
all for my the sake of my cold mistress
pleasing her without knowing
that i'm no lover
just her fool
How does it feel to be so smooth?
How does it feel to be so clever?
How does it feel to set me up?
Out of maybes and left with never
Something else broke your short span of attention
and I was suddenly no fun
Time to leave the crime scene
and suck the life from another one
How does it feel to be so smooth?
How does it feel to be so clever?
How does it feel to set me up?
Out of maybes and left with never
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Serial Lover &mdash 06/20/08 - 02:03:11 AM
right then &mdash 06/20/08 - 02:03:59 AM
As a rough demo &mdash 06/20/08 - 02:06:17 AM
this is pretty good - like the guitar sound - Vocals are obviously recorded 'dry' - I think they'll sound better with a dash of reverb or something. I'd like to see more of a change on the chorus - I think they need to sound bigger - add another guitar - double track the vocal - perhaps an acoustic. There's lots of potential.
All the best
Peter [ Reply to This ]
I don't know &mdash 06/20/08 - 11:11:28 AM
I kind of like it with just the guitar like this, perhaps some drums would make it a tighter song. It has potential though, I like the sound. Reminds me of a mix between BRMC, and Joy Division. [ Reply to This ]
THANK YOU! &mdash 06/20/08 - 03:15:07 PM
The fact that you said that the song reminds you of Joy Division, even if only very slightly is a HUGE compliment to me. Joy Division might be my biggest influence and is possibly my favorite band of all time. I wish my voice was as deep as Ian Curtis's, that would be nice. [ Reply to This ]
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I m waitin to hear the final take !
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