Who's Online
Invisible Members: 9 Visitors: 71
Past 7 Days
Song Uploads: 165
Song Votes: 333
Song Comments: 3502
Forum Posts: 879
New Members: 87
Participation Points: 12942.30
|
Get Flash to see this player.
Having playback trouble, try the Quicktime player:
Attribution
|
|
|
|
|
Description:
My attempt at kind of a "classic rock" song using my new bass and my new drums on demand loops.
Lyrics:
summers eve & the bartender is handing me another beer
hoped against hope but I didn't really expect to find you here
you were away for so long, i thought about you every day
in my mind you were beautiful, but not quite this way
cecily, come on over and talk to me
honestly, i want you so bad it aint hard to see
you and yr friends standin there lookin pretty like morning flowers in june
now i have to sigh and close my eyes as you walk across the room
ah, look at you
did you know you're this boys dream come true? cecily.
|
Catchy tune &mdash 06/20/08 - 11:06:48 AM
I instantly liked the guitar, not only the way you play it, but also the "clean" sound. Nice melodies, with a very catchy chorus. Nice beginning and end. Overall a very nice tune, dl'd. [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 06/20/08 - 11:22:43 AM
Nice tone on that bass &mdash 06/20/08 - 02:06:54 PM
Enjoyable summer melody with a slight retro feel to it. Nicely harmonised and doubled vocals.
The bass stands out nice and crisp! [ Reply to This ]
thnx! &mdash 06/20/08 - 04:46:41 PM
thanks for the kind words.
Given my age and listening habits, I'm afraid everything I do is going to have a retro feel. :)
[ Reply to This ]
Cecily &mdash 06/20/08 - 03:13:59 PM
WOW ..man ..this is a classic by all mean ...loved
your setting and ur great great singing ..I m realy
enjoyin this ..was a real tele ? good use of the keys
in the middle ...Kudos friend ..You rock ..thnx for sharin !!!!! [ Reply to This ]
tele &mdash 06/20/08 - 04:40:07 PM
my guitar is actually a really ugly 80's "contemporary tele".
It's a pukey purplish-pink colour, and goes out of tune constantly. (but I love it anyway).
[ Reply to This ]
Sorry I missed it &mdash 06/21/08 - 07:15:33 PM
This is a nice piece of rock. A gem. Bass-end is great, but maybe needs a bit of the high EQ, too.
I really like your song and think you're an excellent writer.
Dave
Open for collab [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 06/21/08 - 07:36:49 PM
glad you liked it! the writing/ recording thing is kind of new for me, I do think this was the best one I've done yet.
I have no clue about EQ... would you suggest boosting high frequencies or subtracting from the low end... and on specific instruments, or on the whole thing?
how does the collab thing work on MacJams? I'd be happy to do something... [ Reply to This ]
cool &mdash 06/21/08 - 09:16:39 PM
cool rocker. kind of a cross with T. Petty & The Eagles.
And it includes a bridge, perfect!! [ Reply to This ]
the bridge &mdash 06/21/08 - 10:44:27 PM
Ha ha! thanks for noticing!
my first tune with a real bridge, I was kind of proud of that...
[ Reply to This ]
Awesome &mdash 06/22/08 - 08:27:43 PM
thanks &mdash 06/22/08 - 10:12:31 PM
ALL AROUND GOOD TUNE &mdash 06/23/08 - 07:06:59 AM
Cool! &mdash 06/24/08 - 05:41:42 AM
Yes, really a nice Rock 'n Roll tune. Cool guitar and vocals and a great bassline and drums work. I enjoyed listening!
Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi [ Reply to This ]
grerat song &mdash 07/18/08 - 12:11:03 AM
bass sounds good! i like yer stuff. this one has a tom petty feel to it. chorus and bridge are excellent. everything could use an overall mix boost, but songwriting is priority and you nailed it. [ Reply to This ]
thnx &mdash 07/18/08 - 10:36:55 PM
Yeah &mdash 07/21/08 - 07:19:10 AM
This kicks ass man. Great song writing and performance.
Had a hard time picking out some of the vocal lines but it was groovin' along quite fine. [ Reply to This ]
thnx &mdash 07/21/08 - 05:32:35 PM
|
|
Friends
iLounge - All things iPod, iTunes and beyond
|
Dish Network - the dish
network limited time bonus offers - get all three
|
|
[ Reply to This ]