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a chilled out minimilist song i had great fun recording. Very basic i know , and maybe finishes a little too abruptly - but still, i like to sit back too this one!
enjoy!
Hardware:
usual
Software:
garageband 08
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Wonderful! &mdash 06/29/08 - 04:07:01 PM
Wonderful relaxing piece of work. Loved the work here very much, thanks for sharing.
Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi [ Reply to This ]
im glad &mdash 06/30/08 - 07:08:29 AM
you felt relaxed with this - thats just the vibe i was going for!
thanks for your support :) [ Reply to This ]
I'm Not Perfect &mdash 06/29/08 - 05:02:59 PM
nice cool chillout song my friend .good singing as
well .thnx for sharin !! [ Reply to This ]
once again &mdash 06/30/08 - 07:13:57 AM
feter, i am humbled by your continous support (not only for me) but for so many other macjammers (how do you do it?!)
:)THANK YOU! [ Reply to This ]
Superb &mdash 06/29/08 - 05:29:40 PM
wow &mdash 06/30/08 - 07:19:25 AM
it feels great to get a comment like that from such an established macjammer (and musician by the sounds of it)
thanks and i will try to keep it up - i feel with each new song i post on here i grow a little more confident with what i'm doing.
Thanks for listening:) [ Reply to This ]
Very nice tune Michael &mdash 06/29/08 - 06:43:58 PM
relaxed and very contemporary. You have a really good voice, and your training shows (in a good way). I think you're making the change from classical to more modern genres really well.
I have a reputation for trying to find something to improve when I comment, so please don't take offense - I think you could make this even better by getting a little more variation (fills and such) going in the drum track once the song gets going. I'd probably like to hear the peripheral tracks (mainly the acoustic guitar) a little louder in the mix to give a more "enclosing" feel. The ending works for me.
Great voice and classy playing on a really good song - well done.
Cheers from Oz,
Neil [ Reply to This ]
thanks to everyone &mdash 06/30/08 - 07:06:59 AM
haha, No offence taken.. &mdash 06/30/08 - 07:28:27 AM
In fact its funny you should mention this Neil, because whilst i was listening to this (after i'd posted it) i was thinking it did need some sort of variation. I think some breaks between verses could work as well as some sort of drum pattern variation (as you mentioned). This could also help eliminate the whole 'abrupt ending' i've got here.
So thanks for the heads up, i guess i needed a second (musical) opinion to kick me into gear, and you provided!
much, much appreciated!
Thanks for taking the time to listen:) [ Reply to This ]
Wow &mdash 06/30/08 - 08:27:09 AM
I'm glad I did not miss this song.... I am flying and fill my heart with love as I do w/this song.Kudos
Take care
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Kenta [ Reply to This ]
... &mdash 06/30/08 - 02:02:41 PM
what's wrong with minimilistic. i love your vocals on this :) it's a nice change when it goes higher. this one really draws you in. [ Reply to This ]
A &mdash 07/03/08 - 05:02:48 PM
Great song! I really enjoyed this, love your vocals and a great production!
Excellent! [ Reply to This ]
nice! &mdash 07/06/08 - 04:37:41 PM
kinda cold play vibe, especially near the end when the delayed gtr comes in. (i hope you take that as a compliment.) great progression. very nice surroundy synth pad(s) and delayed pianos. you also have a great voice which you chose the right frequencies to raise, but perhaps a couple of dBs over the top? which i could hit the high notes like you.
this is a really excellent tune. i like the little play on words to... 'i am wasted' (drunk?) 'on you' (ah, i see). i think it could use a bridge somewhere to break it up a little. maybe around 2:57? just an idea. [ Reply to This ]
edit.. &mdash 07/06/08 - 04:39:57 PM
cheers &mdash 07/07/08 - 06:50:58 AM
real nice comment 12parsecs, i really appreciate your kind words. I completely agree on the whole bridge section part you are talking about, and am actually currently working on one right now. I certainly do take the coldplay comment as a compliment (seeing as they are my favorite band), so that really is as high as compliments go in my books. I think two people have mentioned them now so i am a very happy boy!
thanks for listening and taking the time to comment!
:) [ Reply to This ]
12parsecs... &mdash 07/07/08 - 07:38:46 AM
what on earth do you mean "wish i could hit the high notes" - i just listened to 'my time machine'. You have an awesome voice. By the way, i'm British, and i only EVER say the word awesome when it's needed. In this case, It's needed.
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i'm falsetto &mdash 07/07/08 - 11:08:58 AM
the first half of time machine is falsetto, which is like cheating. :) you are hitting nice high notes in your choruses without sounding strained. your voice is brilliant. (and i'm canadian and, well, we never use the word brilliant. hehe.) [ Reply to This ]
Love it! &mdash 07/19/08 - 10:44:12 AM
I really like your songs. Your voice and your playing is really great. This is definitely the beginning of something very special. Again, once you have completed the verses and a bridge with the very catchy hook you have now, this will be a very, very strong song. I can't wait to hear the end product. I will be anxiously awaiting.
Sean [ Reply to This ]
I dig this &mdash 07/21/08 - 12:37:46 PM
Why do the English always write such good songs? Damn you!
Maybe my headphones are weird, but I would have liked more vocals in the mix. But I would definitely listen to 12parsecs as far as production goes. [ Reply to This ]
Ok .... &mdash 08/31/08 - 11:31:54 PM
.. here I am on the third song in the list of all your songs that I am gonna listen to tonight ... hahaha your screen will be ablaze with little fire signs when you sign on next .... I think you are a very talented musician and am so enjoying everything that I have heard so far .... you sell em .. and I will buy em !!!! [ Reply to This ]
You have all it takes to have a &mdash 08/31/08 - 11:48:30 PM
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