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Fallen Frame (Coffee House Challenge) Remix - Alannah _ Mrjctm


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Alannah

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I decided to RE-DO the first song I ever posted on Macjams as the Coffee House Challenge .... because it was so coffee-house-esque .... the lyrics and music are by Mrcjtm
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Lyrics
I am the fallen frame in the hallway
a crooked leg in the morgue
im all thats haunting
pleasant, contrasting
warmly swimming to the deep end
slowly sinking
the flying thoughts come back again while i
think i might - come home
the curveless pitch returns come monday
with the weekend gone im loving more
and in every way prepared
the stars might shine through everyone but the earth
devours hearts
bleeding mouths without a mind to render false
and eyes running till they all turn red
slowly retreating - and look back again
to the south
carrying on - about needs and wants
ruptures spleens - and breaks up hearts
if there was one thing more
in this world the i abhor
its that you were nothing more
than what the cover told
me you were
i am coming to the end - of my wits
or what you might say
gets me through the days, the weeks, the months, the years
what little time
we hold, we share, we bought
we join, we split, we part
but still hold hands in the dark
just a little - taught
the days grow long - our hold grows strong
we wont have to do it alone
our hearts cant break
and our eyes wont tear
because we wont - forsake
our love this year

Lyrics by Mrcjtm
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Hits: 666
Comments: 30
Fans: 10
Plays: 66
Downloads: 47
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Jul 06, 2008 - 01:19:18 AM
Last Updated: Jul 24, 2009 - 12:38:07 AM Last Played: Nov 12, 2009 - 11:07:24 AM
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Comments
Feter said 504 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
Fallen Frame
what a warm and powerful vocal ALANNAH ....wow ...
what cafe you sing at ...I ll visit daily !!! ...
the coffee taste so fine with such song and voice ..
very very love nice atmophere behind the music !!
wonderful gem my friend thnx alot for sharin !!!
Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
OH MY ....
.. I just realized that I haven't responded to any of the comments on this tune yet ..... BAD Alannah ...... thanks Feter .. if there were a REAL Coffee House .... they probably would have thrown me out ages ago .. hahaha thanks for your continued support (of all of us here) !!!!!
davisamerica2 said 504 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
Love your voice....
...on this Alannah, the guitars are great. I enjoyed the lyrics, and the melody was perfect. Thanks for this. Terry
Check out my latest song called It's Lonely Here
Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
This tune ....
.. was originally the first thing I ever posted on my own page at Macjams ... and I thought it was so fitting as a coffee house challenge thingey ... even though I submitted it AFTER the challenge was over .... sigh ... what else is new ! Thanks for the listen and comment!
dirigent said 504 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
What a great voice
Outstanding vocals and great atmosphere. Love this track :-) Congrats Alannah!!
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Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Thanks dirigent ....
.. I tried to mix it up a little in the re-sing ... but I don't think I changed too much up .... I guess the original will always be stuck in my head ... thanks for the listen and the comment!
said 504 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
Wow!!
Alannah you sound wonderful and you are a really amazing singer you really are and you sooo cheered me up when I was down in the dumps.
earlier. Lov ya girl. :) lyrics are brilliant as well. Great music.

Such a beautiful spirit you have as well. I really mean that too.
You have a powerful voice and thats what I love in a great singer such as yourelf as well.
Well done both of you You Rock !

Peace Dee xxxxxx
Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Ah Dee .....
... you are such a faithful supporter of so many here at Macjams ..... I should really smarten up and try to do the same .... thanks for your kind words (as always) ..... "A"
Skean said 504 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
Okay I love it
Okay!
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said 504 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
ha hahaaaa
Ok have I gone a bit overboard :) But I mean it. No wonder my fingers are starting
to ache I write too much. LOL
Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
hahah a girlie .....
.. you DO need to get some sleep !!!
Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Skean my friend .....
Okay ... is GREAT to hear .... glad you love it .... it's been around here as long as I have now ... heh heh
Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
HEY ....
... my Skean response ... somehow ended up under the Dee response .. what the heck is going on here !!!!!
Skean said 495 days ago (July 15th, 2008)
Hi my dear friend
The site is up & down I'll waiting for the beta site and hopefully all be better there.... I love what you're doing but that you already know... Cheers and take care, Kenta
Check out my latest song called Walking seeking & depressed
cjhoose said 504 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
calming
I remember this one! :) Thank you for the lovely reminder, with your lovely voice.
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Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Thanks CJ ....
.. yes .. it definitely "took me back" as well when I was revisiting this .... back to the good old bad old days ....... sigh .... we never see you in chat anymore .....
guygrooves said 504 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
This is soooooo
Beautiful. The lyric is so deep and delicious. The vocal is smooth and warm. Great job Alannah. This is a sure favorite.
Check out my latest song called Last Day Here
Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Thanks Guy ....
.. the lyrics belong to MRCJTM .... he wrote the original ... he played the guitar and originally sang the tune himself .... I then did a cover of his tune .... but in my cover version ... I sang his same lyrics .. just in all the different places .. and changed up the melody some .. thanks so much for the listen and the comment!
Doadars Uncle said 504 days ago (July 6th, 2008)
Niiice
Warm presentation. A story of standards... strength or weakness...

but love is both, I think.

Well done,
Doug
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Alannah said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Thank you so much ....
D.U .... your listen and comment is appreciated .....
said 497 days ago (July 13th, 2008)
Very nice Alannah
Encore!!

Bravo

b
Alannah said 490 days ago (July 19th, 2008)
Well then ....
... after throwing my own little mini concert ... it occurred to me that I forgot to say "thank you" to my virtual audience .... how evil am I?
mrcjtm said 496 days ago (July 14th, 2008)
great
yah this is a great remixing of it - the coffee house atmosphere fits really well. great job!
Check out my latest song called High Rise
Alannah said 490 days ago (July 19th, 2008)
Thanks ....
.. for the inspiring guitar track to work with ... did ya notice tho .. I "flubbed" your name in the title (ACK ... it just wouldn't be Alannah if I didn't go dyslexic on something ..... sigh) .....
LunaTrick said 494 days ago (July 15th, 2008)
Cool Alannah...
Good to hear your voice again!

Cheers...
Check out my latest song called Luna Gypsy Heart II (Eternal Firelight)
Alannah said 490 days ago (July 19th, 2008)
Thanks Luna ....
... good to see you back round these parts again ... I still look forward to our "dark" collab .....
Lightman- said 485 days ago (July 24th, 2008)
Great
This isn't the last time i've heard this song.... I really love it.... Good lyrics and vocals... I really like your voice.... You're doing great here.... Keep up the good work....
Check out my latest song called You've Got Nothing To Fear
Alannah said 485 days ago (July 24th, 2008)
Thanks Lightman ....
.. the fun part was creating my own little mini concert ... complete with people ... applause .... etc. .. hahaha almost like being there ! Amazing what we can do in our basements these days!
Lightman- said 485 days ago (July 24th, 2008)
Yeah
I've had the idea myself... That i wanna try to make a little concert, on the computer... With a bunch of songs....
Check out my latest song called You've Got Nothing To Fear
Alannah said 485 days ago (July 24th, 2008)
Yes ....
.... my dream is to be the whole damned choir on one .....
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