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Description:
I wanted a little stagger I fell over
Lyrics:
yes I was stopped
missed directed eyes
plain and obvious
the small thing
the grasp
tamed and spoiled
no longer perceived
the big picture is on
there is always
stairways and shafts
an elevator stuck on level 13
instantly bored
packaged played
soiled and wet
every day is
every day is gone
you feel
patterened and nailed
in between
cheap shoes
spoiled views
the big picture is on again
on
the broken hearted weep
the baby plays
the beauty sleep
no stairway to steep
the big picture is on
if drifting to far
is what it becomes
then let me be a leaf
if feelings and reality
divide
let me drain my soul
let me fill my head
let the game become
glassware
poetry
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cheap shoes, spoiled views &mdash 07/06/08 - 03:40:55 PM
this song ROCK ...angery poem and guitars ..
the singing rememebering me of R. waters at the wall
good one my friend ...thnx for sharin !! [ Reply to This ]
i stagger my head &mdash 07/06/08 - 09:06:08 PM
cheap shoes ... &mdash 07/07/08 - 01:33:30 AM
Great! &mdash 07/07/08 - 05:43:40 PM
Really enjoyed this, guitars sound great!
Love the vocals! Excellent song!
Bob [ Reply to This ]
Nice to hear &mdash 07/08/08 - 04:01:29 PM
your vocals higher in the mix - it works.
Another excellent post.
Cheers
Len
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Dizzying! &mdash 07/08/08 - 04:08:30 PM
Nice effects and jams.
I like the pictures I'm getting here... or is it all in my head?
Doug [ Reply to This ]
nice &mdash 07/09/08 - 10:20:36 AM
i &mdash 07/09/08 - 02:57:04 PM
dont get out to your site very much, and i am ashamed of myself. this song has such a fat, warm guitar tone. it makes me think of the bands in the early 70's, who would do everything they could to get that warm, rich tone out of thier tubes, all the way down to using different transformers to see how long it would take to melt them.... great vocal effects. i liked the subtle, simple drums. carried the beat, but did not make a big show, and take away from the song. i am really bad at that. i want to be like Neal Peart half the time, and i end up tearing up my drums a dozen times before i record anything else...heh... perfuntionest... love the tune, and i shall make an effort to be here more often. loved this one.
AD [ Reply to This ]
great &mdash 07/09/08 - 05:12:01 PM
great tune. the floyd comparison is inevitable, but that's not a bad thing. love the vocal style and that constant nagging guitar [ Reply to This ]
Cheap shoes,spoiled views. &mdash 07/09/08 - 06:04:42 PM
Great poem and love the music too.
I like. You did a great job.
Well done. [ Reply to This ]
Mindblowing &mdash 07/10/08 - 08:36:42 PM
This is great. The lyrics are excellent, filled with brilliant images and perfectly delivered. The two vocals work really well, and the guitar sounds great. Very cool. Nicely done. Peace. [ Reply to This ]
wow &mdash 07/15/08 - 05:56:30 PM
great tune my friend! i'm really, really diggin this one. there's something about it that makes me feel at home.....some nice lyrics as well! great work!
age [ Reply to This ]
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the singing rememebering me of R. waters at the wall
good one my friend ...thnx for sharin !!
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