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Winter (Demo)


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obbster

 Genre: Acoustic Rock

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This is song that ive just written. It doesnt feel finished yet and i think the vocals need some work but im posting it to get some constructive feedback.

Cheers.
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Lyrics
and time, drifts away
winter comes and darkens day
i live
to die
i wait

moving further into night
i live, i live, ilive


carry you into the place where we are free
i live
to die
i wait

no-one can escape this winter i feel
the winter i feel


i wander through the fields
try to forget this pain i feel

i live
to cry
im tired of waiting

(The winter i feel, The winter i feel)

Song Stats
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Comments: 17
Fans: 9
Plays: 42
Downloads: 85
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Jul 09, 2008 - 10:19:24 AM
Last Updated: Jul 09, 2008 - 10:19:24 AM Last Played: Jan 30, 2016 - 02:26:33 PM
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Hardware:
MacBook Pro 17" 2.4
M-Audio Keystation
Software:
Logic Pro, Lounge Lizard, B4-II, Jam Pack Rhythm Section (for bass and drum instruments), T-racks EQ/Mastering/Compressor
Comments
kassia said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
Winter
Ah dude, the vocals on this are awesome. I love your voice. Nice guitar and bass. This is a beautiful, beautiful tune. My only suggestion would be to make those keys sound a little more organic and less synthy, to meld with the lovely acoustic feel of this. Great harmonies and backing vocals. This is really a killer tune. Good job and thanks for sharing!
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obbster said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
Thanx
Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked the song.
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said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
Winter
Very nice.

Peace Dee.
obbster said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
Thanks
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.

Cheers.
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Foinix said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
Winter
Very, very cool. Great tune.
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obbster said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
Thanks
Thank you for your comment. Im Glad you liked the song.

Cheers.
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12parsecs said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
cool pic.
great vocal melody. great sounding rhodez or whatever keys those are. normally i'd point out that bass looses 'oomph' if it is panned, but in this nice mellow tune it really works. nice job singing too.
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obbster said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
Thanx
Thanks for your comments. I'm a big fan of your stuff so im glad you liked my song. I used Lounge Lizard Electric Piano plug in for the keys - its a great piece of software, sounds amazing.

Cheers.
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rsorensen said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
great
I faved this within 2 secs of hearing the opening riffs. great sound/style. chilly guitar tones. right up my alley. great singing too.
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obbster said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
Thanks
Thanks for your comments, mate.
I love your stuff - inside your skin is awesome (and I bought it from iTunes too). Looking forward to the Satellite Tragedy album.

Cheers.
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rsorensen said 3324 days ago (July 14th, 2008)
inside your skin
wow thanks for that! album's out next month :)
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Feter said 3329 days ago (July 9th, 2008)
Winter
this is very powerfull ...very deep great great
singing ..the insteruments so awesomely used here,
the keys in the middle just right in time ..Good job
thnx alot for sharin !!!
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lavalamp said 3327 days ago (July 11th, 2008)
Great voice
Your voice is stellar and the song is great.

Hope hear more from you in the future.

Dave
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said 3318 days ago (July 20th, 2008)
Winter
This sounds gorgous Your vocals are really cool.
Love the guitar chords your song lyrics are awsome as well.
Very Poignant. Thanks for sharing.


Peace Dee.

fremsley said 3152 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
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nice outro biz.
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kingbee said 3128 days ago (January 26th, 2009)
let it snow
Great vocals again.
And the guitar is great.
I wasn't sure about it being panned on it's own to the right..but it works really well.
Nice one
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smokey bacon jnr said 2479 days ago (November 6th, 2010)
cold riff...
Great cold riff on the guitar and your voice works really well against it. Very modern tones - very Linkin Park! I like it when the chiming tones come in. Only criticism would be that the vocals sound slightly flat at some points - but it may be that they clash with the underlying chords. Really good. Enjoyed it.
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