What I personally like the best is the clean guitar sound, and perhaps you should make it a little bit more louder or let it linger more on the phrases.
I hope I make sense.

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yeah, the staccoto feel of some the phrasing could use some sustain. this is a rough idea (far from polished, always open to new ideas). i've got vocals planned for this song, just no where near finished with the lyrics...

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yeah, the staccoto feel of some the phrasing could use some sustain. this is a rough idea (far from polished, always open to new ideas). i've got vocals planned for this song, just no where near finished with the lyrics...

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Are you playing bass on your guitar? I hear some sounds that could be either a very clear a bass or a very low guitar.

Some cool chords in this, but I'm missing the melody. Gimme a hook that I can remember please. This is more "noodling". Good sounding noodling, but still.

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yeah,i've got a seven string ESP guitar, and i use the low B string a lot for bass lines. the 8 track has effects for a bass simulator, it works ok if you put it way down in the mix, but i'm gonna invest in a real bass soon.

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excellent playing too - but I'm also looking for a melody - which could come with the vocal in which case this would be a fine bed. I hear bit s of Waterfall here and there. Take it further - you're off to a great start.

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.. looking for some vocals to lie in it. This is a great start to a really interesting song. Instrumentally, I like it, and it sets a lovely vibe. Very interesting combination of loops and live playing. Maybe some more variation in the kit/percs wouldn't hurt, but not a big issue.
I see this as a definite work in progress and look forward to hearing it more developed.
Neil

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Laid back and smooth as a babies ---. Great track my friend welcome to MacJams. Really great to have you join our community of people who love to make music.

p.s. Listen to you Uncle, he knows what he's doing, but then again, from what I'm hearing so do you.

Thanks for posting this one.

Ed

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warm sounds going on and the mixture of instruments too is very easy on the ear. Love to hear a vocal on this, but a nice relaxing listen indeed, cheers M

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sounds and playing are very impressive. i wish I could get a sound like that. Like the restrained rhythm/beats - a really enjoyable groove. I can see this working as very effective background/movie music - but could really go somewhere interesting with vocals.
Welcome to Macjams and I look forward to hearing more, great first post.
Cheers
Len



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...great 16th post. I will try to listen to the others.
Cheers
Len



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