this is very powerfull ..hearin the insteruments
felt thats all so alive ..but I think this is your
guitar playin right ? ... your vocal work just so
good ..I m enjoyin this so ... Thnx alot for sharin !!

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Some of the guitar loops you choose are kind of over-used, to those of us who listen to a ton of GB loops. Also, there is a quaking, shaky quality to them, almost like they are third generation re-recorded loops. Perhaps if you use some sort of exciter EQing on them, it would make them sound more real. The lyrics are good, I like your folk voice, but I wish I hadn't heard all the loops before. A true story would sit better within the context of real playing.

Consider posting your lyrics? Thanks.

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song, well written not in the least contrived, it pulls you in and makes you listen to the story despite the lo fi quality of the production. I like the acoustic guitar, it sounds really good. With the equipment you used you got a pretty decent mix and signal over all. I would agree with Tobin on the loops and quaking. I think if you took a simpler approach to the music, maybe the acoustic with a bass and percussion rather than a drum kit, it might sit better with your vocal, and this wonderfully written true story. Thanks for a great song.

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erudite and learned gentlemen have had their say ,but to a thick hick like me this sounds good.Maybe it could be done a different way,perhaps just as Guygrooves suggest.

There is a wobbliness to it but it makes it sound like
listening to a vinyl,atmospheric and a an ambience...

See you... Jarvoid

ps Where you been?

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Yes it has that swampy sound going for it, and the slide guitar sounds cool. Nice mix, except for me the vox is too low.

I wish you had included the lyrics sheet with it. I'm a little hard of hearing and it would really help me in checking out the lines I'm missing because I can't catch all the words.

You've got a great voice for this kind of song John, it works very well.

Take care, be well and be cool my friend,

Ed

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No rant from me on this one. TIS JUST GREAT!!!!!


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