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as with all my tunes, there's no loops... just lonely old me plucking stings, banging drums and wailing away.
this is a work in progress. i need to redo the vocals with a condenser mic (i'm going thru a 57 right now). the lyrics are a mouthful, so i am still working on the timing. the music for this, on the other hand, came together super-easy! mostly a combination of power chords and fun.
if you can help me out with comments, i would like to know:
a) if the lyrics are too jokey?
b) should i lose the bg talking and 'booyah's?
c) any other constructive criticism you feel like sharing.
Cheers all!
this is a work in progress. i need to redo the vocals with a condenser mic (i'm going thru a 57 right now). the lyrics are a mouthful, so i am still working on the timing. the music for this, on the other hand, came together super-easy! mostly a combination of power chords and fun.
if you can help me out with comments, i would like to know:
a) if the lyrics are too jokey?
b) should i lose the bg talking and 'booyah's?
c) any other constructive criticism you feel like sharing.
Cheers all!
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Lyrics
This sort of happens all the time,
My friends begin to cross the line,
It's going way beyond just being unkind.
They're all looking for a fight,
They should be happy with Bud Light,
If they don't like it, let THEM buy BEvERages next time!
That's when she walked into the room,
How did she get here and with whom?
Her demeanor hit me like a sonic boom.
Will she think that I'm a square?
I think I need time to prepare,
If anyone needs me, I'll be faux-hawking my hair,
In My Room!
It seems I've been up here for hours,
I even made her paper flowers,
Out of the pages of my life.
In my eidetic microcosm she could be my wife,
All her life,
And play the fife,
In My Room,
In My Room!
And so we went on our first date,
Everything seemed to go ok,
She touched my hand, this must be fate!
I said “let's talk until first light”
She says “Goodbye” and calls it a night,
I guess I'll just have continue this on my own,
By myself,
In My Room!
My friends begin to cross the line,
It's going way beyond just being unkind.
They're all looking for a fight,
They should be happy with Bud Light,
If they don't like it, let THEM buy BEvERages next time!
That's when she walked into the room,
How did she get here and with whom?
Her demeanor hit me like a sonic boom.
Will she think that I'm a square?
I think I need time to prepare,
If anyone needs me, I'll be faux-hawking my hair,
In My Room!
It seems I've been up here for hours,
I even made her paper flowers,
Out of the pages of my life.
In my eidetic microcosm she could be my wife,
All her life,
And play the fife,
In My Room,
In My Room!
And so we went on our first date,
Everything seemed to go ok,
She touched my hand, this must be fate!
I said “let's talk until first light”
She says “Goodbye” and calls it a night,
I guess I'll just have continue this on my own,
By myself,
In My Room!
SatelliteTragedy
this has really come a long way. but i gotta tell you it sounds EXACTLY like... haha just kidding. Man that solo is amazing. I'll come back later and offer some constructive crits. Sounding good so far.