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this is my 3rd song written on the piano. only started playing in february- i still make mistakes but i thought i'd upload this one anyway because it's been a while.
as always, consider it a demo.
as always, consider it a demo.
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Lyrics
life is long and cold, you see
and i'm not strong, so it doesn't suit me
so i'll keep moving around trying to sooth my restless feet
and i'll keep running away from everything i meet
running away from everything well that's the story of my life
running away from you and me you know i had to take that flight
running away but i can't see so i try to feel the light
longing for that place i'll be locked up in your bright
so light another smoke and put down your guitar
we're moving along again this time in a stolen car
just wanna see your face again one last and lonely time
i can't believe i'm heading home, i can't believe you're mine
driving through these hills close to veering out of sight
cause pennsylvania kills but i'll be seeing you dear tonight
lying in your bed again and wrapped up in your white
a little voice inside my head tells me everything's alright
running away from everything well that's the story of my life
running away from you and me you know i had to take that flight
running away but i can't see so i try to feel the light
longing for that place i'll be locked up in your bright
bright
light
and i'm not strong, so it doesn't suit me
so i'll keep moving around trying to sooth my restless feet
and i'll keep running away from everything i meet
running away from everything well that's the story of my life
running away from you and me you know i had to take that flight
running away but i can't see so i try to feel the light
longing for that place i'll be locked up in your bright
so light another smoke and put down your guitar
we're moving along again this time in a stolen car
just wanna see your face again one last and lonely time
i can't believe i'm heading home, i can't believe you're mine
driving through these hills close to veering out of sight
cause pennsylvania kills but i'll be seeing you dear tonight
lying in your bed again and wrapped up in your white
a little voice inside my head tells me everything's alright
running away from everything well that's the story of my life
running away from you and me you know i had to take that flight
running away but i can't see so i try to feel the light
longing for that place i'll be locked up in your bright
bright
light
I have some issues with the tempo is all. It sounds like the piano runs at a very slow tempo, and then speeds up whenever the vocals come in. It's interesting if it's what you meant to do, but otherwise it kind of seems off.
It just bugs me because I feel like you have this beautiful piano, and these beautiful lyrics and a beautiful voice, but I feel like the vocals are rushed and thus chop up the song. I'd prefer to hear something where you really mastered and held every note. Good work and nice piece, but try something with a steady tempo and maybe some matching variation in verse and chorus vocals and piano