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A litle ditty. The guitar "solo" (i use the term loosely) needs a lot of work. But I like the feel. Some ordinary note selection.
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Gamborg
Except for the soolo and you need to get your guitar into tune and hit the beats then I find it good. Though I'm not much for electro pop.
The guitar play reminds a bit like Joe SATRIANI.
Keep it up.
Best regards, Gamborg
shiner
Thanks heaps. I'm definately gonna attempt to fix these problems.
You've made me feel guilty bout my rather rash comments i made on your song earlier. I do feel bad that i just slammed it as opposed to offering encouragement or advice.
shiner
Thanks heaps. I'm definately gonna attempt to fix these problems.
You've made me feel guilty bout my rather rash comments i made on your song earlier. I do feel bad that i just slammed it as opposed to offering encouragement or advice.
shiner
I hate when that happens.
Gamborg
Hehe. At least you have a kind of self acknowlegement. Keep that ... it's good when you make music.
My honest opinion is that people here should encourage each other to make progress etc. Like comments from Letthemusicplay (I get a bit confused by her comments though). But the encouragement to you is good.
What I do is to skip comments and voting on a song if I find it as totally crap. But to take comments seriouly as always in life ... you have to see who is the sender. Do they know what they are doing. Do they make good music.
So lets level here and I look forward to listen to your progress here at MJ. If you get specific comments like 20 sec. into a melody you can try ... or it sounds bad 5 sec. etc. Then you can always fix it and put a remix.
Good luck & be well, Gamborg
Gamborg
/CG
shiner
If a song isn't to my taste i just skip the commenting or rating. Just because i don't like that style doesn't mean it's a bad track. It's hard to be objective to a style you dislike.
Unfortunately, for you at the time, i had just been listening to 'Always with me...' the (Satch version).
So, i was making a direct comparison as opposed to listening to your take on a similar theme.
MarkHolbrook
it goes a bit long.
Totally agree on the guitar tuning. The timing could be much better there too.
Try to make the intro somewhat different from the main start of the song. It gets a little monotonous when they are too similar.
It has a lot of potential! Keep working on it.
Feter
this is so charming ...so true so honest with
the simplicity yet awesome guitar pickin ....
the air you applied here do wornderful as air float
very nice arrangment ..wish to hear your next tune
well done !!!
This is good. I love your work. I am not a music expert.
Gamorg's not bad .
I actually love his work too. But I prefer your guitar playing. Much more melodic sounding. :)
LTMP .
shiner
Thanks for your comments.
I'm really hoping everyone is starting to think Gamborg an myself are at 'war'.
I intend on listening to all Gamborg's work and providing positive feedback. And i do hope he'll be joining me on this crusade.
Gamborg
We were at 'war' (I got pissed of by your comment) now it's turned to something constructive and positive. Your credit.
As I said before on my comment, I'll follow your development and be constructive. I have only made music for a year now, so I know progress can be made fast.
Keep it up.
NB. I would really appreciate your honest comments on my 'songs' if you are constructive as you are now.
BR, CG
Feter
its only Rock'n'roll u both cool dudes ...!
just Rock on !