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I was struggling with the idea of freedom. I wrote this last night in the AM and it helped me clarify how I felt. Scribbled on a torn sheet of notebook paper, I looked at it again today. I decided to share it. I hope people aren't offended. It was recorded at my friends apartment on her macbook so I just used the internal mic. I'll probably re-record it at home with less background noise for posterity's sake.

Thoughts, objections, stories, feelings, criticism. Whatever comes to mind. Feel "free" to leave some of it here on this page.
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Uploaded: Aug 27, 2008 - 02:17:18 PM
Last Updated: Aug 27, 2008 - 02:17:18 PM Last Played: Nov 03, 2009 - 01:02:26 AM
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spitlogic said 455 days ago (August 27th, 2008)
Nice slam
I like that structure. Usually when I write poetics it usually comes out very disorganized and random.
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ElPeruano said 455 days ago (August 27th, 2008)
thanks spit
its actually the most structured poem I've probably written since high school english. I didn't really plan it that way either. It just came out that way.

thanks for stopping by as always.
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Konscious said 454 days ago (August 28th, 2008)
nice
very creative, i liked the how you encompassed a variety of aspects of freedom, and it's true, we are so free to make our own choices yet not free at all because we are controlled by consequences, it all depends which angle you look at it from, thanks for sharing your thoughts
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ElPeruano said 454 days ago (August 28th, 2008)
thanks konscious
glad you could relate man. its a troublesome thought for me. venting through poem helps alot though. :)
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ElPeruano said 454 days ago (August 28th, 2008)
p.s.
really appreciate your thoughtful feedback
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Konscious said 454 days ago (August 28th, 2008)
no problemma
this thing called life can be a trip a times, most of the problems i have experienced stem from the lack of identification with other people, the masses, life portrayed in TV, the immature characteristics displayed in the act of socializing, blah blah blah, so for me there's really something to be said when you can relate to another person on a meaningful level
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ElPeruano said 453 days ago (August 28th, 2008)
definitely man
i have to show you a song im working on. its not hip hop but its related to those themes. message me your email.

P.S. fuck disney. :)
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Dj French Toast said 453 days ago (August 29th, 2008)
Word !
Word !
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ElPeruano said 448 days ago (September 2nd, 2008)
:)
thanks toast.
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Diviner said 429 days ago (September 22nd, 2008)
Very interesting
A lot of thoughts and ideas here from all things which are 'bad' to 'good'. I like the way you express freedom from all points of view, thats very objective. Can I use these in a track?
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ElPeruano said 429 days ago (September 22nd, 2008)
thanks man
ill send you a file. cant wait to hear what you've got in mind. :)
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I'm a 20 year old college student that loves music but never seems to have the time to do it justice. I dont really know what I really want out of life yet. Musical experience is fairly limited. I played piano since I was five off and on. I quit in h... [see more]

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