This is sad but you're good at that thing.
Have u lost your friend? or is it just a song about your sad dream!

Nice mixed as well.

Take care
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Kenta

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oh the lyrics were from a jam from a while ago when i was missing an ex it wasn't directly written about anything though the lyrics just sort of came together on there own.

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Oh I see, nice its from your heart love that it is a good way to do songs I think.
You really have grooved from the first time I heard you.
Nice one this... Keep 'em coming.. Peace

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I love the sound of your voice on this one my friend, and while the quality of you voice is great, the lyrics aren't coming through as well as it needs to in the mix.

Here's a couple of suggestions that might help.

Lower the level ov the rhythm guitar maybe 2 or 3db in the mix. You'll have to experiment with it a little until you find what works. Remember, you already know the lyrics, but your audience doesn't so if what your singing isn't clear and understandable to them, they'll just quit listening.

I would also use an graphic equalizer to add maybe 1 or 2 db in the 1k and 1,25k range. Again, the key is to experiment with it until you have clarity. Remember, it only takes a little so don't go overboard and use more than you really need, it's make it sound to harsh. That will bring out a little more clarity in the vox so the lyrics come through better.

Keep at it Chance, your getting better at it all the time. Did I mention this is a very nice song by the way.

Be well and be cool,

Ed



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i was sort of going for the lyrics a little hidden but may bring the vocals out did this recording a little while ago. may experiment some i'm not much for recording lol.

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Hi

This is really good, especially the 2nd electric guitar which I think gives the song real character. I'd agree with other comments on the vocals , but sounds like you did this for a reason, and it's just the mix. Main thing is the song, which is great

Cheers
S

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thanks. yes i'll probably bring the vocals up a tad i did this recording a bit ago just was listening to it the other day and thought it sounded good, ofcourse if i listen to it too much ill decide its bad as i always do with recordings lol. i listened with headphones so that may be why it sounded volume good to me.

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very good on this. I like the texture added by the electric guitar. Nice work.

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thanks :) glad you liked it. sounds best with headphones i think.

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I love the lyrics and the singing is, as always, excellent. You have a soulful voice. I'm with Ed on the vocals; I think they could be a little more clear. But this is a tiny nit, and if you're aiming for this sound, then it's all good! Very cool. Nicely done, my friend. Peace.

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thanks, yea i listened with out headphones and thought it could come up a little too.

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Back again to listen , I play this over&over again, really like it !! You have much better recording here than in some earlier songs : ) GREAT hearing You again, it's lovely & I love the lyrics...so many Angels here at Mj too ! You're One : ) Now i gotto hear Your newest ...Be Well Lena
ThankYou for DL !!

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aww so many months and didnt see this comment thank you :) im still never happy with recordings lol. i shine the most live during jam songs for people when i reach there emotions :) better live more energy to feed from lol

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