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Caught dead in this... by cloudfactory [Email]
Genre: Indie Rock

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Last Played: Nov 28, 2008 - 12:34:33 PM
Downloads: 0
Fans: 3
Uploaded: Sep 06, 2008 - 01:38:05 PM
Last Updated: Sep 06, 2008 - 01:38:05 PM
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Description:
This is a re-worked version of the first song that I recorded back in 06' called "Caught Dead in this..." It needed some work even before I posted it 2 years ago, but I added some real drums and new vox. I personally think it turned out much better. If you get a chance give it a listen and let me know what you think!

Lyrics:
Warm and dry,
quiet like a funeral
please please try
to follow sounds of my voice
wait till I start over
seasons may have stripped away the time
but now I'm older
washed in blood and tears from your eyes

My sail has flown
gripping the wind
and I'm just a traveler...
caught dead in this sin.

I tell myself to hold on tight
anyday now I'm gonna be alright
am I a fool to wait for you
I keep pushing for you to pull me through
a little taste of love is a bitter pill
I can't make it without you
no I never will

warm and dry,
wait till I
warm and dry
please please try

My sail has flown
gripping the wind
and I'm just a traveler...
caught dead in this sin.

Hardware:
Tele, Seagull Acoustic, Yamaha keys, vintage drums, Marshall mic,

Software:
Cool Edit Pro 2.1, FL Studio 7, Cakewalk home studio, Melodyne Uno.
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This is really good &mdash 09/06/08 - 02:26:19 PM
it kind of reminds me of ELO. I like the line "a little taste of love is a bitter pill" . Like a little taste is bad cause it makes you want more? It makes me think. I never heard the original, but this is top shelf. Vocals may be about .5 too low, but that is just my opinion, could be my monitors.

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Caught Dead in This... &mdash 09/06/08 - 05:57:04 PM
Hi pablatone, thanks for listening. I agree as far as the chorus goes, the vox could be a little louder, however this version is much better than the last just in the vocal performance. I'll take that into consideration before I send it to be mastered. I really don't have good monitors myself I use my Sony headphones and then reference it with some cheap home stereo speakers, ha.

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Cool Shoegaze... &mdash 09/07/08 - 02:06:30 AM
Nicely produced - like it a lot!

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Caught Dead in This... &mdash 09/07/08 - 08:56:23 PM
Hi Luna, thanks for listening, you've got some really cool stuff too!

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This &mdash 09/08/08 - 08:56:17 AM
is a big improvement from the original. Not that the original was anything to scoff at. I'm glad you reworked this one. It's got a great swagger to it.

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Caught Dead in This... &mdash 09/08/08 - 10:19:58 PM
Thanks guys!

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Caught Dead In This &mdash 09/08/08 - 02:28:05 PM
Yes, This is better. But, that last version was great, already. you are one of my favorites. I have good taste.
Thanks so much.

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Caught Dead in This... &mdash 09/08/08 - 10:27:14 PM
Hi Char, once again...thanks for the support! As long as people are enjoying, I'm enjoying it!

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Nice tune &mdash 09/08/08 - 03:32:28 PM
and good production to my ears.

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Caught Dead in This... &mdash 09/08/08 - 10:22:54 PM
Thanks CJdaley,
the production/engineering is probably one of smy fav parts to song writing!

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