very great song my friend ...yout singing just perfect
the piano setting ..the lyrics all so good ..good
use of the guitar (is it a loop or real playing?)
my only take on the synth drums sound you can try
to work harder on the drums to sound more realsitic
the song just terrific my friend willing to hear more
welcome to MJ ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!!

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Ironic huh, I am a drummer and am using drum loops. Point noted. The guitar was played by hand courtesy of the GB musical keyboard

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... I liked the other tune you posted ... so thought I had better check this one out too ... nice job on the harmonies ... nicely mixed. You should definitely post more stuff here ... and maybe pop into the chat room once in a while (get yourself known) and a lot more people will be aware that you are here and will give your tunes a listen and comment ... there are some great people here - all very helpful with comments (and critiques) .... welcome to MJ !

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to write a song for your wife. I second Alannah's advice. Introduce youself. Good song. Thanks.

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