But I can't tell you what to do more with it... As Im out of any ideas myself just for the moment... But it is always nice to hear something new from you.. Peace

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you're always so kind and supportive:)

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the voice is great. perhaps the high notes little bit to loud. anyway, this song is innovative. like your work

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of you to throw some thoughts my way. i really appreciate it and will take them into consideration!

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A couple of thoughts
Maybe you could consider the following
a) emphasize the square-wave games console like noises and blips and push the sound more in to the 8-bit realm
b) try placing pauses (for effect) in the rhythmic pattern you have created here
c) a deeper bass sound
d) in places bring in and out a more standard drum beat (without removing your existing rhythm track)
e) some kind of sinister drone oscillating away in the back ground to complement the bas pulses you already have (think tesla coils)

just a few off the top of my head suggestions

b


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to get your feedback. i'm excited to play around with implementing your ideas. your comments made me once again realize how much i have to learn, especially in regards to production. wish me luck!


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and ideas are fantastic. i have always been very impressed with the material of yours that i have heard. in fact i am sure that i could learn a thing or two from you and your approach :-)
I look forwards to hear how you might incorporate the suggestions i made

b

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Loving this! Your work is always so evocative of so many emotions! Don't know if you plan that or if it's just inherent, but either way, it rocks!

Thanks for sharing!

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to see your comments..you're very kind! any compliment from you means a lot. keep on keepin on;)

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listen that takes you somewhere new. Full of creativity and talent.
Cheers
Len



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It seems our appreciation and compliments for each other are reciprocal. Every time you post something I'm anxious to hear both what you've written and how you're going to express it.
You truly have the ability to take one elsewhere with your music and your voice... artistry...

This song in particular, your voice is nigh on perfect and stunning.
Thanks for sharing your talent with this community.
-Rain

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I love the ambiente... I love it... Great vocals

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Your vocal sound and style here is a mix of Bjork, Cindy Wilson (B-52s), and Harriet Wheeler (The Sundays) ... I think ... it's complex. It took me a few minutes to figure that out. And your vocals are the real strength of this piece. I think it's way too short, however. It sounds like the start of something. Please post your lyrics. Great stuff, as always.

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I like the irregular drumbeats throughout. Its a little surprising that you ask for advice as I think your work has a consistent artistic vision. As is already stated some of the bass, synths and drums could use maybe a little more "punch", but of course we would not want to obscure the lovely vocals. I wish the track was a little longer too. Siouxsie and the Banshees style electronica. Keep up the good work.

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Great track, vocal and the Midi goes really well.

As always quality stuff.
EMP

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would you allow me to throw this into a blender? it would not end up as a smoothee. but rather a subtle razor on the wrist of beauty ..... never cutting. loved the preview.

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