Pretty mellow. I like your lead playing.

I think your composition needs some further
development. A bridge or a different rhythm change up
would be nice.

Keep it up.

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Very nice sounding jam, though the beginning before the
guitar lead was a bit long for me (my opinion). I agree with
Mr. Oval that change is needed to create interest for the
listener. I know this is an instrumental but for me a nice
vocal track from one our mac jammer artist would
compliment this piece. As for the production or sound it is
very nicely done!

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nice to listen to at the end of my day and sitting by
the fire with that hot brandy.

Good production, clean and well balanced. Just
seemed a little short or maybe i just wanted to hear a
little more. Hope you do some of that again.

For divercity try walking a scale to the next octave up
or down and riff there for a full measure or two then
return. A guitar effect that is not over bearing, as in
the second 8 count at the begining, is what's called
pick bass. Used a lot in carribean style as well as R&B
cuts. Makes a good fill untill the reel lead gets there.

I REALLY enjoy your style.

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Thank you all for the postings. I didn't expect them to be so positive :-))

I made that song on a G4 / 400 and played two rythm guitar tracks, a solo-gtr and a bass-gtr track. You can possibly imagine, that that's a lot of information for a G4 / 400 to handle. The machine is getting reeeaaal slow.

I will continue working on that tune when my new iBook has arrived.

And I also thought about a nice'n'mellow vocal track.
Let's just see where it goes ;-)

Michael

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"Let's just see where it goes" (Crewman Elizabeth Cutler to Dr. Phlox in Star Trek Enterprise 'Dear Doctor')

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