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Voyage of the Broke


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Rayelise

 Genre: Ballad
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I wrote it in the car while trying to find my home way from being lost.
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we shovel out a way to mend the whole lot
as i write the tale how your head fell apart
i begged you to run but our legs wouldn't start
so our mind shattered swiftly and so did our heart

i was so proud i did find my way home
took fuel tanks of heartache, but i got myself grown
i did it alone, yeah i grew up alone

-chorus- (I can't believe it happened to you...... Your eyes the truth and the pain that they spew......)

i don't know why i did thief my way home
it seemed like the most lonesome way i could go
i ran for the hills but i tripped in a hole
as cruel as it is, it's the comfort i know

But still I call for the birds that fly in your heart
So bloodied and old is the way that I'll start
And though there's pieces of you flying so far from home,
Within all that is broken, there's something that's whole.
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Uploaded: Sep 15, 2008 - 11:48:33 PM
Last Updated: Apr 14, 2009 - 08:29:13 PM Last Played: Oct 19, 2009 - 06:15:22 PM
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saymme said 430 days ago (September 22nd, 2008)
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I wish this would be so much better recorded cause You are / have a BEAUTIFUL(!!) voice very much HEART in Your songs.. Would love to hear the piano better so Happy to see You here this place needs more Women : ) ! helena
Rayelise said 338 days ago (December 22nd, 2008)
thank you so much!
I will re-record it... probably doing piano and voice on separate tracks. I've been busy for the last few months so I haven't recorded anything, but now I am back.
Check out my latest song called She never unfurled
Estella said 370 days ago (November 20th, 2008)
another carousel...
must be the waltz time?

I'd like to hear your voice more on this one.

I like the idea of writing a song while lost. turns out you were right where you were supposed to be, ay?
Check out my latest song called Este Momento
Rayelise said 338 days ago (December 22nd, 2008)
yep waltz time
yes I suppose I was where I was supposed to be.... :)
Check out my latest song called She never unfurled
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A ballad is a story in a song, usually a narrative song or poem. It is a rhythmic saga of a past affair, which may be heroic, romantic or satirical, political (affected by the previous three types mentioned, refers to either glorifying the exploits o

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