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Last Played: Dec 02, 2008 - 10:09:08 AM
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Uploaded: Sep 19, 2008 - 10:42:23 PM
Last Updated: Sep 20, 2008 - 08:21:05 AM
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Description:
about insomnia

with a soundtrack

video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cpQaKv3Ec_4

This was originally published as a poem here:
http://bill.kats22.com/writing/singularity/permutations.html

Lyrics:
Permutations

123

not again.
i thought about my worries
and worried about my thoughts

132

you can't not think about things
at least, i can't
let's try free association

213

man, i need to get some rest
all these plans
what if i forget something important?

231

i have got to get some sleep
readjust the pillow
relax

312

one thing leads to another
to another and back
how do i break this cycle?

321

at last.
out of permutations
maybe now?

(c) 2008 Bill Grundmann
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Very inventive. &mdash 09/19/08 - 11:28:42 PM
But that kind of stuff just keeps you awake, until you have 4:56 and it starts all over again. Been there.
This is too familiar. Where's the anguished screaming into the pillow? Thanks, guy.

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Sorry, &mdash 09/20/08 - 08:29:40 AM
Too tired to comment something spiritual...
Guess a lot of us has been there in some way or the other :-/
Nice piece though.

/Henke

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How &mdash 09/20/08 - 06:28:08 PM
Do you know..Sounds like last night. I like the strings very nice I get a picture of your waking up every few hours and writing down each verse

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man ... &mdash 09/20/08 - 08:42:19 PM
neither can I ... amazing VW .... just cool is all!!

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{:-0 &mdash 09/21/08 - 06:16:57 PM
sometimes you can't shut it off. Nicely done

Joe


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I know the feelingggg &mdash 10/01/08 - 09:28:47 PM
great soundtrack and honest delivery. if it were me it would have been more dissonant, more frustrating, but the overall effect was very good.

well done and I hope you get some rest!

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